GURRLLLL! YAASS MAMA YOU SLAYED THE GAME! Always Exceeding Expectations. I Love The Cover Page And The Science Fiction Was Very Believable; How You Wrote The Words Made it Seem So Realistic. I Was Very Interested In The Plot/ Storyline Of The Book. But One this Is That I Got Confused During The Scenes Where It Was Like A Flashback But, Overall, I Like The Presentation And The Story Itself. Get It Published And Continue To SLAY. Ok Bye.
I actually read the character description before the story and it helped me understand it more. I loved it , thought I was a bit confused in the beginning. I can tell you put so much detail into Sinopa's character, that I can imagine him as an actual person/
I definitely believed the science fiction because it was told in such a descriptive way that it felt real at some points in the story. The story succeeded a lot when there was action in it. Each scene was described perfectly and it was really interesting to read. Now that I have finished the story I feel as though that it would be crazy if this actually came true. But overall it was pretty good.
While some of it confused me, I found it very interesting! It was also the first one I have read that started with someones birthday. But I really enjoy how the mind is connected like computers on wifi. So since everyone is connected it seems to make the idea of privacy near impossible. Brain firewalls maybe? I really like the beginning though.
I felt like I read a whole book! It was a lot. I like the story line and plot!! It was interesting and it kept me reading the entire time even though it was 7,000 words. I like the science fiction about brain connections that works like Wi-fi, it makes people's identifies and it's just a whole different world, a more advanced world that i honestly feel like could happen one day! well if technology took a huge jump. If only people could have longer brain waves!!
I liked the story, it was very interesting. There were a few confusing parts where I couldn't tell if it was a flashback or a memory or what was actually happening in real life, but I think that was more due to my part than yours. One thing that didn't quite seem to fit was the description of Trinity in the beginning. The Lara Croft description kind of dated the story and I sort of liked having the time period be a bit ambiguous.
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