Los Fotos //J'Lynn Matthews

understood that her and aniya are in Mr.Herman's digital video class. And aniya likes baseball. Mr.Herman has he own little cafe. I liked that her project was based on friends and teacher and the entire school basically. I suggest try not to pause a lot.

I understood that you got your pictures from your photography class. I liked your pictures of so many people I suggest you work on your pace.

I understood her saying that her and Aniya are in the same photography class and she doesn’t like coffee.

I liked how she described each person and what they like to do.

I suggest that you shorten your pauses.

I understood that Aniya and Jlynn are in the same photography class taught by Mr. Herman. I liked that they explained each person’s characteristics and interests. Made me feel more connected to them. I suggest that when speaking she have a conversational tone and read the words like you were talking casually, rather than stretching out the words.

What I understood was that Anaiya and her are in her digital video class. She does not like the café. They went to drama and saw Destiny and Wes. She took pictures of them.

I liked to different pictures that were in the video.

I suggest to make the speaking parts clearer,

I understood that you Aniyah also had photography class, and this was where you got most of your pictures from. I did as well. I liked how you got to a lot of other people in your pictures, and I find it interesting that you took more pictures of people than objects. I did the opposite. The video flowed smoothly, but the audio was faded a bit. That was a tiny problem. Maybe talk a little bit slower, so we have time to hear all of the words that you’re saying

I understood that she is talking about the project that she was given in Herman class and how they were given one camera per group. I liked how she used various photos. I suggest that music is added because this will make the video more interesting to watch .