MADHESI'S STORY Posted by Sydney Montgomery in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Tuesday, June 6, 2017 at 1:43 am https://docs.google.com/a/scienceleadership.org/document/d/1dHJWMDOwmUu7sOZeqa2r4jiMh7knVbTQoF0TMVnEjGk/edit?usp=sharing Comments (4) Siani Davis I enjoyed your story a lot, it was very calming. I am glad your story had a happy ending because I strongly did not want anything bad to happen to your main character. I think that is because you did a good job in developing her. I am wondering, even though it is said that the secret keepers are gone, is there still one left that will eventually discover Madhesi's secret? Noah Marant What you did well was you can make the scene's come to life like the reaction to the turtle talking Your science fiction works well Justin Mack I liked this story a lot. I liked how she connected more with the animals than people. Kaamil Jones I think this story is really interesting. I think it's really cool that you took a different approach on science fiction than I ever thought of. Good job! Log in to post a comment.