Media Fluency(Second Chance)

Posted by Timothy Williams in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Monday, December 19, 2016 at 9:16 pm

From the critique of my peers that I presented my second slide to, I made a few key changes. One of the changes that I made was all of the spacing between all of my pictures that made it distracting to the eye with the already moving gif pictures and the multi-colored, moving background. The actual change that I made was a more basic background, and only one gif image, Which balanced the movement by being unbalanced. What I mean by this is that the Moving image was in the middle of two non-moving images.

Another major change that I made was making big wording with multiple colors that contrasted with color of the background behind them.

https://docs.google.com/a/scienceleadership.org/presentation/d/1eNEIWU_OLDdo5AJyDitjf8RYxMdi-1H81mHEVQBtyBc/edit?usp=sharing

Comments (6)

Karen Ossowski

The background is very pleasing compared to your other one. And the slide is not too crowded. I would look at ths on the highway.

Abraham Gayer

maybe the picture of you swimming should be in the middle because that is what the background is.

Sean Anderson

It's eye-catching, but in a sort of "AGH, MY EYES" sort of way

Jayden Tull

This slide is really good. The image of Kevin Hart in the middle was really smart because he is first thing you see a he is very famous and it makes people want to know more.

Ivan Lopez

The slide is very eye catching and the text looks fun to read. The images make the slide more engaging.

Madison Siegel

You're background really brings the readers attention.