I think you did an excellent job building your character in this monologue. I think you encorporated very real, genuine emotions that young teenagers have.
Your speaker really came to life in your monologue. From just the reading, you were able to take the role of a small boy, and made it very believable with the language and tone that you used. I also thought the use of internal dialogue was pretty unique. Great Job :)
The speaker did come to life for me in this. This really did help me imagine a little 11-year-old confused boy and his love troubles. What made this all the more realistic is that he's embarrassed about his undying love for this girl that he spies on.
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