i can really tell that you tried your hardest because of all the words that you wrote. I think that your notebook is really nice, and it is very, very well designed.
You did very well on the this newsletter, I like your cover and how you explain the elements and it was very clear to read. The way you explain everything was excellent.
Your emulated scene was great! I love all the details that you included in your story. You use all of the elements that your book had and use it effectively in your scene.
i think your own scene emulated the author really well, and i like the way you broke up your scene into multiple chapters instead of just one block of text
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