Your essay was interesting to read, since you had told me just the basics of your stress you had during the summer because of that course. It was great to see that there was something deeper to it and the issues you went through and all of the hard work you put in. I thought some parts were a bit redundant, and towards the end it seemed like you slowly started making your theme/system into how the internet doesn't make you productive since you started talking about watching your Korean Dramas. Overall, I liked your essay.
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