I like that you're descriptive in your writing, so it shows the readers the surroundings of your characters. I like the interactions between the characters such as Neomi and Lynna. I think that the flow of your story was a good setup and helped the readers understand what was going on. Good job!
Quran, your story was really well written. I was very engaged by your characters Neomi and Lynna and your descriptions of what was going on really made the story come to life. I also thought your dialogue was really well done, it helped me understand the situations without having describe what was going on. Really nice job!
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