The Aggression of a Twelve Year Old - Lauren Nicolella

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Ayala Silverman (Student 2019)
Ayala Silverman

The examples you used really backed up your thesis and made it more convincing. A general example would be when leaders make the side they are fighting sound worse than they actually are.

Tylier Driscoll (Student 2019)
Tylier Driscoll

I was convinced by your thesis, I personally think the second example is what really convinced me. Other examples could be where some people make up issues and cause conflict such as spreading rumors. These rumors spread around and cause even more issues for the people that it affects and this can make the source of these rumors powerful.