You did a good job putting your elements into you scene. I wasn't confused about anything that was going on. You listed out clearly what was happening 1st, 2nd and 3rd. Also You used a lot of adverbs to show what was going on.
I like the different colors, a lot of pictures, and the layout that was different for each element. You did a good job on your emulation scene with including all of the elements and it was very descriptive.
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