The Rocket


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Comments (1)

Shilo Kendall (Student 2019)
Shilo Kendall

Your story is very good. I like how in the beginning you feel like it is going to follow the parents or Bon specifically but then the story actually follows the kids who try to escape. It was a change I didn't expect.