The Rocket Posted by Julia Hood in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Wednesday, May 30, 2018 at 7:36 pm https://docs.google.com/document/d/18cD8k9whsT3UlF9eVtc3fM3lZDcV-6AH7slJ31km11M/edit?usp=sharing Comments (1) Shilo Kendall Your story is very good. I like how in the beginning you feel like it is going to follow the parents or Bon specifically but then the story actually follows the kids who try to escape. It was a change I didn't expect. Log in to post a comment.
Shilo Kendall Your story is very good. I like how in the beginning you feel like it is going to follow the parents or Bon specifically but then the story actually follows the kids who try to escape. It was a change I didn't expect.
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