They were both wanted

Comments (4)

Wedage DeSilva (Student 2019)
Wedage DeSilva

I liked how you incorporated things you like from your own personal life such as hokey. I think that settings is really important in stories and you having the story set around the Olympics were pretty cool.

Alan Li (Student 2019)
Alan Li

I think this story did well on conveying what is going on through dialogue. This allows the reader to interpret what is going on rather than being given everything by the narrator, which allows him or her to be more invested in the story.