Tim's Media Fluency(The Second Chance)

Posted by Timothy Williams in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 22, 2016 at 5:42 pm

From the critique of my peers that I presented my second slide to, I made a few key changes. One of the changes that I made was all of the spacing between all of my pictures that made it distracting to the eye with the already moving gif pictures and the multi-colored, moving background. The actual change that I made was a more basic background, and only one gif image, Which balanced the movement by being unbalanced. What I mean by this is that the Moving image was in the middle of two non-moving images.

Another major change that I made was making big wording with multiple colors that contrasted with color of the background behind them.

Comments (9)

Mackenzie Hopkins

The slide looks cluttered, and the background is distracting, but the formatting looks good

Alina Seing

I believe that you should've stayed with one background because its is more eye catching but having two background color is very distracting. But I believe that everything else is well positioned.

Rasa Watson

this slide is kind of confusing. There is a lot going on maybe you could try to make it a little less elaborate.

Thomas Gualtieri

The formatting is good but the background is distracting and there should be more focus on you then on Kevin Hart. Overall there's much improvement made from the first slide. Nice Work.

William Flenner

The gifs in the picture are really eye catching and fun to look at. I would suggest equal sizing of the side gifs, that would make the slide then look as if it were done by a professional.

Benjamin Rivera

Timothy you improve your previous slide but I still think that you could have chosen 1 background because then it starts to look unorganized also your writing isn't centered

Nasya Ie

You have really improved you slide because you delete something and made it a bit more simpler. And I like that your title is eye catching.

Sarah Son

The black boarders do not work very well. The different colored font is eye catching!

Teyonna Little

Timothy, you really improved your slide. I can see clearly that you took our advice and decided to make that your background. The contrast really works and overall you did a good job.