Taylor your project was pretty good. I loved how you talked about what woman go through and the history of it. Although what confused me is why do so many people disrespect woman. You should probably get into more detail about that as well as talking more about what you want to do about it.
I feel like your website should give more details. From what I am seeing, you only have a paragraph or two about your petition and what you're trying to do. There's a lot more you can put into. Like, share stories. Why is this so important? Why should we care? Show some background battles that us women went through to get equal right.
I am impressed by how much information she knew about her project. It was obvious that she researched her topic.
I am confused by what the actual goal is, I feel that the topic is unambiguous. I think the petition should be focused on one issue.
Areas to improve on are the website. It needs more information and more links.
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