YATW: Blog #1 Excess Litter Posted by Ishmael Brown in English 1 - Dunn - A on Tuesday, December 17, 2013 at 8:57 am Comments (3) Ishmael Brown Nope, found it on google, I was going to take a picture myself but I forgot. I fixed and cleaned up some stuff in my new post Adam Cavalier Hey Ishmael! It think your paper really shows how you feel about littering and we already have other problems in the world. But you really need to look back at your paper. Some sentences didn't make sense. Some sentences were comma splices etc. Just make sure to polish it. Good Job! Alexa Dunn Hi Ishmael, This is well written and well expressed. I like how you spend time explaining why you're interested in the litter problem. Did you take any of those pictures (the litter "fail" photo?)? There were some minor text layout issues around the bottom half of the piece. Also, why not make your annotated bibliography link a hyperlink (and not that messy url?). Log in to post a comment.
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