Hey Ishmael! It think your paper really shows how you feel about littering and we already have other problems in the world. But you really need to look back at your paper. Some sentences didn't make sense. Some sentences were comma splices etc. Just make sure to polish it. Good Job!
Hi Ishmael,
This is well written and well expressed. I like how you spend time explaining why you're interested in the litter problem. Did you take any of those pictures (the litter "fail" photo?)? There were some minor text layout issues around the bottom half of the piece. Also, why not make your annotated bibliography link a hyperlink (and not that messy url?).
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