YATW: Blog #1 Excess Litter


Comments (3)

Adam Cavalier (Student 2017)
Adam Cavalier

Hey Ishmael! It think your paper really shows how you feel about littering and we already have other problems in the world. But you really need to look back at your paper. Some sentences didn't make sense. Some sentences were comma splices etc. Just make sure to polish it. Good Job!

Alexa Dunn (Teacher)
Alexa Dunn

Hi Ishmael, This is well written and well expressed. I like how you spend time explaining why you're interested in the litter problem. Did you take any of those pictures (the litter "fail" photo?)? There were some minor text layout issues around the bottom half of the piece. Also, why not make your annotated bibliography link a hyperlink (and not that messy url?).