Here is my old slide:

Old Keynote slide with PDF file

Below is my original slide.

Above was my original slide that I presented during class. Below is my revised slide that I changed using elements from Presentation Zen. I changed these simple elements which made my slide a lot better. All I did was deleted the picture on the right and make all of the words/letters bigger. I made the letters/words bigger so that people can read it quicker and easier. I think this slide (below) is better than the slide above.

The first picture is my old Key Note Slide converted into a PDF.

The second picture is my new slide. 

     While seeing everyone's presentation, I realized that I could have made my slide a lot better. And so I thought of many ideas in my head. Here are my ideas:

     I changed my formatting for my pictures because Ms. Hull and the website said that people see from left to right first. So I made it easier by putting it the pictures on the left. Eye catching pictures!

     I also changed my wording and wasn't afraid to make my words huge and change the coloring.

     This is what I changed on my slide! I hope you like it!