Another Ring Posted by Paxton Wentzell in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Wednesday, May 30, 2018 at 12:32 pm https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s869Zah3lxAy09C5S8lf1aZs_D1UYl1sWOJpH2DfLps/edit?usp=sharing Comments (3) Olivia Musselman I think your use of second-person perspective is really fitting for the story and helps show the relationship between the characters! The story was really interesting overall. Amado Alfaro-Allah I haven't read a lot of these stories that are in the first person but I feel like you execute it at a good pace where it consistently sounds interesting. Alan Lee Chan I like you are using second-person view, it gives out a curiosity at the start of the story and lead the reader to finish the story. Log in to post a comment.