Another Ring

I think your use of second-person perspective is really fitting for the story and helps show the relationship between the characters! The story was really interesting overall.

I haven't read a lot of these stories that are in the first person but I feel like you execute it at a good pace where it consistently sounds interesting.

I like you are using second-person view, it gives out a curiosity at the start of the story and lead the reader to finish the story.