I noticed that you have no words on you slide show. I also recommend that you speak louder on the slide show. I also noticed that there was a long pause in your slide show towards the end. All and all the project was great.
really good pictures, work on your accents, I like what you did on your trip and I like how you posted the picture of the ocean. You should have tried to incorporate more attractions.
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