Implants = No More Violence

Comments (3)

Hadleigh Stammers (Student 2018)
Hadleigh Stammers

I really liked your story because it was sort of a comical twist on the average aliens invading Earth story. You did a good job with the first person point of view aspect also. I like that you incorporated the idea that the aliens think humans are harmful to themselves and 'stupid' and that there isn't fear between the aliens and humans.

Jevon Price (Student 2018)
Jevon Price

I enjoyed this story because I felt that as a reader I connected to the characters. You set the story up well explaining many things in the beginning, so the latter portion made sense.

Nadia Green (Student 2018)
Nadia Green

I think the story was good. The beginning helped with understanding some things towards the end like how the mom was acting strange because she was not arguing with the dad. I think there was good dialogue usage as well.