Implants = No More Violence Posted by Siani Wilson in English 3 · Pahomov · B Band on Tuesday, June 6, 2017 at 6:45 am https://docs.google.com/a/scienceleadership.org/document/d/1JIGdPMSCE7DvZcIbzi9WWyR2fNXAE7COGCUoC_mimpo/edit?usp=sharing Comments (3) Hadleigh Stammers I really liked your story because it was sort of a comical twist on the average aliens invading Earth story. You did a good job with the first person point of view aspect also. I like that you incorporated the idea that the aliens think humans are harmful to themselves and 'stupid' and that there isn't fear between the aliens and humans. Jevon Price I enjoyed this story because I felt that as a reader I connected to the characters. You set the story up well explaining many things in the beginning, so the latter portion made sense. Nadia Green I think the story was good. The beginning helped with understanding some things towards the end like how the mom was acting strange because she was not arguing with the dad. I think there was good dialogue usage as well. Log in to post a comment.