Media Fluency (Revised)

Posted by Nasya Ie in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 22, 2016 at 10:25 am

I have improved my newer and better slide. I have learned how to make my slide better than my first slide. My first slide is way to cluttered and because of that there was way to much to see and can't focus on one thing. I have taken away a lot of photos and made it a bit more simpler.

The changes I have made to improve my slide is I made my title bigger and the title is in the middle, so it can catches people's attention. I made it a bit more organized and simpler. I have made some of my photos a bit bigger and I have deleted some of photos. I also have changed that background, so it won't look to plain.

The research is important because we need the knowledge to do it correctly. And I hope I have made my slide is way better that my first one.

Thank you, Nasya

Comments (14)

Mackenzie Hopkins

Your slide is very eye catching and it looks more neat than your other one, you did a great job and improved.

Ruby Ginsburg

Your slide works because it is very clean and direct. The two center images on the bottom of the slide are a little too small though.

Alina Seing

This slide is better than the first slide because of the pictures and the background color.

Chandrea Lack

Your background looks well with the darker pictures and how you made the slide straight to the point good job.

Cianni Mack

Your slide works well because the pictures are organized and your writing explains why you did what you did

Cianni Mack

Your slide works well because it gets the point across and it is organized

Thomas Gualtieri

The slide is successful in giving a doodley, cute theme. The upside down dogs seem like an odd choice and that space could have been filled in with images or your title. Otherwise, good job!

William Flenner

Great contrast of colors, the light blue background brings light to the picture. However the two dog pictuers don't make the slide look clean.

Teyonna Little

This is slide is really nice and you made a huge update to it. What caught my attention was the aminals. Putting your pictures as a border on your slide and having Me Magazine centered was a great idea.

Timothy Williams

this slide works and is better because of the color of the background, which contrasts with most of the images. The picture at the top which is upside-down really gives the slide and unexpected but fun twist. One suggest that I have is making the middle, bottom two images bigger.

Micah Carrera

This is a cute design.

Sarah Son

Your slide works. BUT I suggest making the pictures on the bottom a bit bigger.

Jayden Tull

Really nice slide. There are a lot of eye catching colors

Amira Gouri

This slide is much better. It's organized, and it explains who you are. It's also very eye catching. Great job