Party tips, nice. Original topic.
Was a little low on the energy. The music in the beginning was good, you could have filled in the mute parts of the video when you showed pictures with the music to keep interest up.
You had nice visuals to go along with what you were saying, good job! Next time, however, I would try not to look at your screen when you record. But overall, great!
I was a nice video though sometimes it seems as if repeated steps and didn't write it together. The pronounciation was well done and the pictures helped for words people might not have understood/remembered.
It's really informational, great job! The only thing I would improve on would be transitions, but other than that it was really easy to follow and understand.
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