Najaila y mi special Día en el Parque

I understood that she went to the store and got a sandwich and a lot of other snacks. She went to the park. She went to Freds water ice. I liked how she put in Chris Brown "New Flames" Song. I suggest that you slow down when you speaking, it was good overall KIM!

I understood how Najaila have a big appitite and how her mom pack panic. They also went to the park in Chester Ave and pineapple water ice. I liked the image and how smooth it is. I suggest that your slow down in speaking and be consistent. Overall, good job!

I understood the things that she was saying by how she said things slowly and clearly for the audience and by the pictures she added.

I liked how Kim had lots of photos to describe what she was saying.

I suggest to maybe have more background music since you already had music in the beginning of your video.

I understood najaila is 4 years old, it was hot outside and you had a picnic in clark park. At the picnic you had chocolate, water and najaila had a big apetite. In clark park there is a statue of famous people I liked that You had lots of pictures. I suggest keep doing what you can do with what you have and I think you did a great job on this project to not have a camera or a camera phone.

What I understood was that her name was Kim and Najalia had a big appetite. Her mom packed a panic and they were hungry for the food. They took pictures so they could have memories. They went to the park in Chester Ave and then they went to get a pineapple water ice.

I liked that they pictures were clear and also that the pictures matched the voice.

What I suggest is that to make sure that the volume and the audio throughout the video is all consistent.