Q4 Science Fiction Benchmark - A Better Future

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Weston Matthews (Student 2019)
Weston Matthews

uhhhhh this is actually amazing. Your dialogue is very natural and believable, and the way you progress the narrative does not seem forced or jumpy. There are no plot holes—this is so cohesive and seemingly meditated. You did a great job, stories like these are the result of reading and understanding the small mechanics of writing a good story