your connection between nutritious school lunches and test scores. I was also liked that you also included a graph that showed the obesity rates in America. The obesity rate in children is very troubling and the lack of nutritious food at school contribute to this.
"I am confused about…"
what you are trying to change and who exactly you are petitioning.
"Areas for improvement…"
The link to your petition does not work and I think that you should include more information about the lunch polices of the school district. It would also be nice to show how these policies have changed overtime. I also think that you could include more pictures so show people how bad these lunches are.
This is an excellent website! Very catchy and appealing, but I do believe there can be statistics or ratios of information of how many grams of sugar per breakfast in respects to the required amount of sugar a day a person should consume? Maybe point out long term effects and or habits. Overall, great job!
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