Simon's slide

Posted by Simon Voituriez in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Wednesday, December 21, 2016 at 10:01 pm

Reflection on Media Fluency

I learned that my slides shouldn’t include the “price” when it’s not useful, like here, or a product argument, like here also, because that takes some place and we need the letters to be the biggest as possible. Also I feed a blank on the corner, between the image and the corner, so the whole slide is more “united”. But, all in all, the people of my group found it alright so I didn’t have a lot of stuff to improve. I learned that my slide needs to be very very polished to be really clean, visual and sweet.

Comments (12)

Rasa Watson

this slide works well because it gets straight to the point.

Timothy Williams

this slide works because the color of the words contrasts with the white background. although, some more pictures would be a nice contribution.

Timothy Williams

this slide works because the color of the words contrasts with the white background. although, some more pictures would be a nice contribution.

Jayden Tull

Nice slide. But I think the image should be moved over to the right more.

Amira Gouri

Your slide is very simple, and good. But, maybe you should've brought the text in the middle, because its important.

Nasya Ie

The slide works well because it is simple and eye catching. But there is some empty space.

Micah Carrera

I think this design is unique. It could be easier to read though.

Karen Ossowski

Your slide attracts the eye and its simple. However the ¨Simon´s¨ in the corner could be centered more.

Madison Siegel

you're slide attracts people and simple

Sean Anderson

the contrast between the blue and the white is very well done.

Abraham Gayer

There should probably be more than one picture on your slide. In your script you talk a lot about advertising when it should be about you.

Ivan Lopez

The side looks very interesting and eye catching. But the side feels it needs some more images to make it pop and stand out.