THE A.R.C.

Comments (4)

Athalia Tan (Student 2018)
Athalia Tan

Your story was different and I enjoyed reading it. You took something big that's popular now and made it into something that people can't even imagine happening. I like the idea that you used the sci-fi aspect to make a chemical that's non-existing. I think that you did a good job writing this story.

Nadia Green (Student 2018)
Nadia Green

This story was very interesting. I liked how it incorporated aspects of how life is today with the futuristic twists. I think that it was a great story.

Zoe Khan (Student 2018)
Zoe Khan

The story is really interesting! The idea is something I've never heard before, and the descriptions of how the chemical work were really detailed and help sell the idea. It kind of frightens me that this is actually something that could end up happening, considering people use stuff like that to harm people already..

Elizabeth Burrows (Student 2018)
Elizabeth Burrows

I really liked reading your story. I thought it was cool you set up a society in the future but added some important points about what might happen to our earth ect. I also liked how you used things that we are familiar with in our society such as Coachella and made them into something we aren't used to, hence the sci-fi aspect. I thought it was really clever and well written.