Zeshawn Rahman ☪

Tech (1)


I learned that my previous font was hard to read, and didn't fit with the overall design. I also learned that the colors did not contrast well, and my quote was too long. I revised my slide, and tried to make colors and shapes match. To do this I added a green hue over the picture to help distinguish the text. I also used rule of thirds from top to bottom making the text, the kaaba, and the crowd. The white in crowd matched with text as well.

Comments (2)

Ameena Atif (Student 2017)
Ameena Atif

I noticed that you changed the background picture. The last picture had good qualities as well as this one. I wonder what what made you change it? Was it because the quote didn't really work well with it? For the new slide I would change the writing. The words "and" and "Honesty" blend too much into the background.
Overall I think this slide is a good improvement.

Lewis Ford (Student 2017)
Lewis Ford

I notice that you kept in mind that we said you had conflicting colors on your slide, so you went conservative. I wonder how your project would look if you had brighter colors. What if you did a slide focused on Allah.