You emulation was really creative and it gave a lot of imagery. I could see everything that was happening. You elements really line up together, Overall you did a really good job on emulating your author.
OMG Kai!!! Your background colors are excellent!!! I truly love how you included descriptive language because I haven't seen that in anyone else's project yet. Good job!
I liked how you chose to make the background change different colors as you scrolled down. What stood out to me is that you made up a quote that foreshadows your emulation scenes. I learned about how Malcolm X struggled with his own life and how his choices affected his own life.
I learn the book that Ilyasah Shabazz had got famous for. one thing that I notice is how you had organized everything. For instance, your color scheme is really nice. Another thing that I had learned was more about Malcolm X's life.
I really enjoyed your project, it was really good. I like the colors you choose, it really flowed nicely and how it like changed through the pages. Something that stood out to me was your scenes, they were really great. They were deep. Great job!!
Hey Kai. This is a really good project. Your cover page immediately stood out to me, and your style throughout the handbook was aesthetically pleasing. Your font is easy to read, but is not boring and matches with the rest of the handbook. Your quotes also reflect what you're trying to say well. Your story was truly captivating. It was well written and hooked me in to want to know more about this character and his life. I've learned a little bit about Malcolm X's life, and also about some story elements that I hadn't thought about as much before.
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