My slide

Posted by Dalnick Matos in Technology - Freshman · Hull · c1 Band on Thursday, December 22, 2016 at 2:34 pm

I decided to redo my whole slide due to the comments I got. For the biggest part everybody liked the quotes I chose to put in my slide.Most of the most common comments I received was that my background wasn't very attractive. I got some help from a college art student and he recommended to make the background about me so i decided to choose one of my soccer pictures. When choosing this pictured I noticed that both quotes related to it. White is one of the coors that has great contrast with any dark color making it pop out and catch peoples attention. I chose the picture of me looking away so people can noticed i'm not focused on the camera instead on the game. I bolded some words because it makes show more importance to those words. The use of empty space because I didn't want things to be to crowded instead to be focused on me and the words only.

Comments (13)

Justin Siegel

The message that you love soccer is very clear. The slide shows good use of contrast between the writing and background image.

Edwin Ortiz

The slide is very blends very well with the colors. When I look at it I instantly know what the whole focus of the slide is.

Alena Lentz

Your slide has a visually satisfying setup. The word contrast well against the background and are bold.

Clari Herrera

Your slide is very successful! The white contrasts well with the background. Our focus goes to the picture. Its visually appealing and it involves different textures and balance to the slide. Good job!

Clari Herrera

Micah Jack

This slide is much improved from before. The words are much more manageable and the picture is good contrasting with the white words.

Zeyah Gomez

This is very successful it identifies your passion

Alexis Sweeney

From this, I can tell that you have had your share of hardships in your life and thrive to be stronger. That's what I took from it because it takes strength to both rid your opponents from the field and the sickness in the hospital.

Jeremiah Butler

As a viewer, your slide is very eye catching and if I were a driver on a highway, I just might get into a car accident trying to see what your ad. is putting out there. Very inspirational!

Alejandro Guerra

You did a good job remaking the slide it was a lot more interesting ,and it definitely shows your interest ,and the words are placed nicely so that everything is legible.

Georjelis Rujano

This slide is very successful by focus on you in the slide, I feel like the spaces inside the picture works well together. The quote would be stronger by the bold color not white but another color. But overall it's very good!!!

Mamadou Samassa

This slide shows a lot about your personality, which makes me want to say how much that quote reflexes on your whole life. It is as your whole world sinks in when you say " Soccer is God's gift to humanity. Your explanation for why you did the changes you have done is very true and interesting, especially since you had a college art student help you with your decision making- Great work.

Dasia Oakley

Your slide really shows what your interests are. The way you bolded the words in white really stands out and the viewers can tell that the bolded words have a special meaning which caught my eye. Great job.