Drugs vs Moneys

Hamidou Doumbia

2Fer#1 Revision

November 2,2017

English 3

Drugs Vs Moneys

There are hundreds of sports that people love to indulge in one of most popular sports in the world is baseball. But what does it take to succeed at the sport? The majority of baseball players want to become successful at the sport, but their desire to become a star in the league needs to come with strength, power, and intelligence. Baseball athletes have an addiction with P.e.d, p.e.d stand for a performance-enhancing drug which helps athletes improve performance most athletes use anabolic steroids which is a form of p.e.d. Although it is illegal, baseball players still use performance-enhancing drugs because the potential to earn more outweighs the danger of getting caught.

    Also, using drugs can benefit the player to allowing them 162 games continuously because these medicines provide the adrenaline to do so. P.E.D has a huge effect on the player’s body. Baseball players have gained a lot of success in their career in a short amount of time due to these drugs.  The thought of the player taking care of their family and trying to spare enough time to go to the gym, the practice can really affect a human mindset. The effect player using P.E.D in major league is huge.

Major League Baseball has a policy about the use of P.E.D. The penalty for a first-time violation is being underpaid during 80 games, which can increase. The second violation is 162 games underpaid, meaning an entire season. The third violation is a ban from M.L.B. All of this data can be found on NbcSports under M.L.B, a news anchor website that is filled with facts and analysis. The effect of the day’s a player is suspended depends on how many people take the drug and the strength of the drug.  There are tests that can be taken to figure out about what kind of  P.E.D has been used. Their two methods that use urine cup and blood collection.  After taking these tests, it can be determined if a player used the drug, and then judge to defined the suspect. Also, a player can argue their case to make the suspense smaller or even win. A baseball player shouldn’t use these drugs because of all these rules. You have a risk of having these consequences that don't benefit you.

Ultimately baseball players usually care about gaining money more than playing fair and equal for their fans. Houston Astros paid Roger Clemens, a pitcher. Roger Clemens was very good at the base and was almost inducted into the Baseball Hall of Fame. Due to P.E.D helped his performance, he would make 18,000,000 dollars and $25,00 in bonus money. This is referenced by nytimes.com news outlet. When so many players use P.E.D to gain more money, most players already have to use the money before sign the contract. Then not playing for few month doesn’t really affect if the player already has their life-saving.  There are a lot of players, even Rafael Palmeiro, who was an extraordinary player, who could have been in the hall of fame if he didn’t violate the policy.  This can be from the pressure that comes with financial needs. Developing a new idea to overcome the issue of M.L.B players is money because money is the overall majority of issues in America. Money makes people involved in thinking of how much they are going to spend taking care of their family if they are in a different situation.  Depending on how the player going use the money can affect what will they’re willing to do it.


If the M.L.B player stopped to think about it, they would realize that P.ED is not just about helping the player gain more money, but it affects the player body long term as well. There are a lot of risks the only to stop P.E.D to continue in M.L.B. M.L.B needs a  rehab center to clean sports player. If rehab is included with the suspense policy then it helps a lot of players to clear their mind. This one of the many activities that help player personally. Trying not play so much game or cover a certain amount of player financial issue. Thesis idea could save a lot player from using unnecessary reason to use these drugs.          

                                                                                     









Works CIted


“MLB, MLBPA announce stronger testing, harsher penalties for PEDs.” NBc sport, Craig Calcaterra, 28 May 2014, mlb.nbcsports.com/2014/03/28/mlb-mlbpa-announce-stronger-testing-harsher-penalties-for-peds/. Accessed 19 Sept. 2017.


Chass, Murray. “Resolution, and Doubts, Regarding Palmeiro.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 13 Nov. 2005, www.nytimes.com/2005/11/13/sports/baseball/resolution-and-doubts-regarding-palmeiro.html. Accessed 19 Sept. 2017.


August 7, 2013 by Join Together Staff. “Performance-Enhancing Drugs Can Have Severe Long-Term Impact on Health: Expert.” Partnership for Drug-Free Kids - Where Families Find Answers, drugfree.org/learn/drug-and-alcohol-news/performance-enhancing-drugs-can-have-severe-long-term-impact-on-health-expert/. Accessed 25 Sept. 2017.

Comments (4)

Sydney Rogers (Student 2019)
Sydney Rogers

Your essay is interesting and I understand what you're trying to argue to a certain extent. You have a lot of grammar and punctuation mistakes though that you would have caught if you read it out loud or over again. It feels like all the facts and knowledge came from your head, but you do have some good sources that you used.

Ashton Reigner (Student 2019)
Ashton Reigner

This 2fer taught me a lot about p.e.d. use in the MLB. It's convinced me that it is in fact an issue in the league. My only question after reading is how these drugs are affecting the leagues rules on these drugs if instances keep happening?

Caroline Pitone (Student 2019)
Caroline Pitone

This topic is very interesting. It is one that engaged me immediately when I saw the title. You have many misspelled words/punctuation errors, and this essay seems to have been rushed, but I understood what you were saying, and your words were very intriguing for me to continue reading. I feel like you could have made more of an argument, instead of stating research you have found. I could not really tell if you were PRO ped, or ANTI ped.

Avraham Cantor (Student 2019)
Avraham Cantor
  1. Do you think that PED's are worth it?
  2. This article presented decent facts about the world of Performance Enhancing Drug usage in Major League Baseball but lacked an argument.