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(Updated) Slide - Matt Reed

Posted by Matthew Reed in Technology - Freshman - Hull - y2 on
I learned to make things more unique. Even though my I didn't really change to make my unique, I still did learn it. I only made two very minor critics. I moved the words down a little, made the picture wider, and cropped the picture so you could only see half of the skulls face. Now, that I am looking at the picture I like it a lot more.  
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Finalized Slide

Posted by Ailin Li in Technology - Freshman - Hull - y2 on
​From the critique of my slide, I learned that simplicity is the key to presenting slides. You must keep your stuff simple, but still interesting to view. I also learned that you don't need your name on slides like this and that too much stuff on a slide is really distracting. One last thing I learned is how to create a slide for presentation the correct way.
I made many changes to the slide. For example, I removed most of the words, changed the background a bit, and removed my name on the slide. I removed most of the words because I realized you didn't need them. It was also distracting and too much on the slide. I changed the background because it wasn't as visible, so i made it a bit darker also so it would compliment the pictures on my slide more. One last change I made was removing my name because you don't need it and it isn't appropriate for the slide.
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Second Slide Presentation - Mindy Saw

Posted by Mindy Saw on
From the critique of my slide, I learned that some of the fonts that I used on my words should be bigger and more visible. 
The changes I made to my slide were the size of some of the words and the color of all the words. I changed to the size to make the words more visible and easy to read. I changed the color of all the words to to let it pop out and appear more than the color I used on my first slide. 
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Second Slide

Posted by Grant Shuter in Technology - Freshman - Hull - y2 on
I learned that we need to take time and realize what truly looks good and what we can try and get rid of. 

After the critiquing I knew that I had to change a few things. There was geometric shapes in the corner that I couldn't get rid of at first, and then when I went to redo my slide, I figured it out. I knew that i had to get rid of this because people didn't like it during the critique. The other change that I made was that I got rid of some of the space between the words because people advised me to do so.

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New Slide

Posted by Kenneth Carroll in Technology - Freshman - Hull - y2 on
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From the critique on my slide I learned that simplicity is key. I also learned to make every photo and every text visible to the naked eye. The last thing I learned from the critique was that I should have my photo pop out from the background to make it easier to decipher each photo. 
 
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I made the changes I did to this slide, so that my entire slide could be visible and easier to get the message and to understand what I  was trying to get across. Also because I wanted to not complicate the slide with not needed text or photos
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Los Fotos Cuentan Una Historia - Inés Shareef-Trudeau

Posted by Lotus Shareef-Trudeau in Spanish 2 - Bey - X on
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ffHWCj9cmI 

Luciana tiene trece años. Ella es muy aventurera. Ella ama explorar. La semana pasada, ella mudó de Panamá a Filadélfia. En su primer día en Filadélfia, Luciana sacó todos sus cosas de las cajas.


Después, ella fue para un paseo. El día fue bonita. Luciana fue al río Schuylkill. Ella caminó cerca del agua. Muchos peces nadaron en el agua.


Luciana caminó y empezó a llover. Primero, la llúvia fue pequeño. De repente, empezó a llover duro. Luciana fue muy mojada. Luciana corrió en la llúvia. Ella corrió lejos del río.


En poco tiempo, la llúvia cesó. Luciana miró por todos lados. Las calles fueron desiertas. Nadie quedó afuera. Por fín, Luciana llegó a su casa.


Despueś de llegar, Luciana hizo un fuego. El fuego fue muy caliente y grande. Luciana secó rápidamente. Luciana quedó en su casa para comer almuerzo. Para almuerzo, Luciana tuvo arroz y frijoles.


Ahora hace buen tiempo. Luciana quiere explorar mucho. La madre de Luciana dice, ¨Volves antes muy tarde.¨ Ella trae un paráguas para tener cuidado. Ella aprendió su lección.


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Luciana visita un parque. Al parque, ella juega en los columpios. Luciana juega a baloncesto con otros niños en la corta. El equipo de Luciana gana. Fue muy divertido.


Afuera está más oscuro que antes. Luciana puede ver la luna. La luna está grande y ligéra. Muchos edificios tienen luces. La noche esta bonita así.


Pronto, es tiempo para Luciana volver a casa. En su camino a casa, Luciana ve la policía afuera. Ellos llevan un hombre al cárcel. Ella tiene miedo. Ella camina muy rápido.


Cuando Luciana llega a casa, ella va a la cama con sus gatos. Ella está cansada de su largo camino en la ciudád. Ella ama su nueva ciudád, pero puede ser peligroso a veces. Luciana duerme rápidamente. Buenas noches Filadélfia.