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Advanced Essay #4 Luke W-S: Discouragement
When we started the unit on war and how it not only affects soldiers but ideologies and people, I thought I could develop an “outside of the box” idea. I would defend the glory of revolution and, like the novelists, inspire change. Then, I realized my proposal may be blindly patriotic, or at least misinterpreted, and too simplistic. Some authors celebrate revolutionary change by describing extreme denials of individual and community rights. The descriptions are frightening. Their books are best sellers and franchised into movies. Meanwhile, similar conditions, although possibly not as extreme, occur in the United States and around the world. Those in power may rally against the extremes described in the books but they are also denying individual and community rights. Works of fiction, often celebrated, may inspire revolutionary thoughts or radical ideals but, in practice, our society too often practices the dysfunctional and inequitable societies described in the novels.
During the mid to late 20th century, a number of works of fiction celebrated, or at least encouraged, revolutionary change or put a light on extreme compliance with government. For example, 1984, The Hunger Games, Animal Farm, Fahrenheit 451, and The Giver, have been celebrated for their genius and importance to literature and/or film. Most of these works have common themes: militarism/war, censorship, obedience and various forms of oppression. In the dystopian novel, The Hunger Games, there is an all-out war between the districts and capital, knowledge is censored, people are denied access to “the forbidden zone”, and people are inspired by few revolutionaries such as Katniss. The Hunger Games is celebrated as a work of “genius;” the conditions described in the novel are denounced as savage or at least unstable. At the same time, in the the real world, if a few people rise against the oppression of militarism and extreme censorship with a other few revolutionaries, they may be labeled violent extremists. This characterization is false because those in power determine who is “extreme.” For example, the United States government labels Islamists as terrorist yet some of the Islamists are challenging governments that openly censor, restrict movement of people, and detain people without due process. Who gets to determine what is extreme and what is “proper” forms of revolutionary change?
The 20th century literatures I have listed primarily feature forms of extreme oppression that homogenize society; sameness is a goal. For example, the censorship in Fahrenheit 451 includes burning books and labeling reading a heinous acts. Currently, the Islamic State of Iraq and the Levant (ISIS), has destroyed ancient artifacts attempting to erase thousands of years of history. In The Giver, only one man can see color or memory, as the “Receiver of Memory,” to ensure society preserves order and structure. Today, political rhetoric in the U.S. presidential debates often focuses on U.S. “greatness” and maintaining law and order. If these are examples of oppression that should be opposed and rebelled against, why aren’t they consistently opposed today? While the U.S. is quick to rightly condemn the action by ISIS, isn’t the message of many candidates during the U.S. presidential debates also frightening and condemnable? Although what occurs in the United States may be more subtle or camouflaged, there are examples of censorship. There are also examples of praising order and structure for the preservation of those in power. The United States has the largest military in the world; the U.S. has or has attempted to overthrow 50 foreign governments since 1945 from Cuba to Angola to Vietnam. Currently, the National Security Agency (NSA) reads and monitors internet activity and phone calls including leaders of foreign governments to U.S. citizens. People fighting for the rights of the people get ignored or dismissed by the mainstream media. During elections, some voices are silenced or labeled too extreme and too idealistic. Do not we see commonalities between our world and the stories we are encouraged to celebrate?.
Throughout history, those in power, “the establishment,” want to maintain their power. Sometimes, the conditions are extreme like in 1984: never ending war, government surveillance, self-serving political leaders, and control of the people’s thoughts and actions. In the United States, we are assured 1984 can never happen. The United States began with a violent revolution against colonial oppression to create a “free” nation “of the people, by the people and for the people.” This narrative is reinforced in the national anthem, the Pledge of Allegiance, many textbooks and in political speeches ending in “God Bless America.” But the U.S. government and modern day multinational corporations make this difficult. During British colonial rule, there were limits of economic and political rights for the elites. Post revolution, there was still enslavement based on race and extreme poverty and denial of basic rights for most people. Today, the intersection of the U.S. government and multinational corporations leads to lack of workers’ rights such as a living wages, limited free speech as in the case of Edward Snowden and perpetual wars from drones to on the ground invasions. While 1984 is celebrated as a novel, conditions condemned in the novel exist.
This is an important image that I felt continues to be powerful. I believe that this relates because as it’s uninspired partially by a violence part that many who believe in the cause for non violence but revolution on behalf of the people shows that there’s a possibility of a peaceful revolution
Why do we celebrate novels that challenge oppression and the powerful while accept inequitable and oppressive conditions? Do too many people accept establishment politics as inevitable and therefore accept the current political system? Would many people support even a nonviolent revolution? Nonviolent revolutions, including the movements that expanded civil and economic rights, are necessary if we want to restore the rights of the people to rise against crony government and corporations. We have to do more than celebrate novels or novelists who write about oppression. A nonviolent revolutions can make visible the oppression and collaborate for concrete change. This has occurred and is occurring around the world but, like the conclusions in many of the novels, injustice prevails. Maybe, an “outside the box idea,” is to collaborate on making the novel a documentary - not just another movie.
Work cited:
"Social Revolution in India :Part 1." India Opines. India Opines, 21 June 2014. Web. 21 Mar. 2016.
Alexander, Theo. "The Story Behind 'Apocalypse Now': By Theo Alexander - Unsung Films."
Unsung Films. N.p., 09 Feb. 2012. Web. 21 Mar. 2016.
"George Orwell on Pacifism." Ben Norton. Ben Norton, 29 June 2013. Web. 21 Mar. 2016.
Price, Wayne. "Why I Am Not a Pacifist." Anarchist Library. Anarchist Library, n.d. Web. 21 Mar. 2016.
Greenwald, Abe. "Untangling the Pro-Intervention Argument - Commentary Magazine." Commentary Magazine. Commentary Magazine, 04 Sept. 2013. Web. 21 Mar. 2016.
McElroy, Wendy. "Henry Thoreau and 'Civil Disobedience'"Thoreau.eserver.org. Thoreau.eserver, 2005. Web. 21 Mar. 2016.
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Advanced Essay #2 Luke Watson-Sharer Financial Literacy
Financial Literacy
By Luke Watson-Sharer
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As the United States loses its resume as a financial have, it is important to understand why. Is it because of multi-national corporations, banks, or the people? The lack of instruction in basic financial literacy has contributed to the destabilization of the United States. A basic economic literacy lesson is focusing on fiat currency, banking and the, minimum wage. To become financially literate, you must understand these topics. “Economics is everywhere, and understanding economics can help you make better decisions and lead a happier life”- Tyler Cowen.
One reason financial literacy is low is because people do not make enough effort understand basic economics. The nightly news broadcasts the Dow, S and P, etc. stock markets but we do not know the importance of theses institutions and ratings. To few high schools offer an class in economics, banking or anything to promote financial responsibility and literacy. This hurts our next generation especially when the up and coming currencies such as the bitcoins emerge. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss necessary components of basic financial literacy.
Fiat Currency has a daily effect on our lives and is significant to U.S. history since 1968. Fiat Currency is money that has no commodity. Commodities can be anything from precious metals, such as gold and silver, to food. Now you’re thinking, sweet, we get free money. Well, it’s the other way around. Fiat Currency only favors those with a lot of money. When you have fiat currency you can create money from nothing. Therefore, every next dollar makes every other dollar worth less. This hurts your money big time. Workers are already taxed a lot but this serves as a “hidden tax.” This also allows unlimited credit and loans. So some will say, “cool more free money”. The word credit is Latin for credere which means “to believe.” By creating money through loans and credit, the money supply increases and therefore, money has less value. Citizens need to be aware of what devalues our currency. Knowing the basics of fiat currency is a step towards financial literacy.“At the end fiat money returns to its inner value—zero.” - Voltaire
Another component of financial literacy we must understand how to be financially responsible. Knowing how to bank is required in a “free market” society. Banking consist of a few essential things: credit (covered above), saving, and profits. Credit is when a bank provides a loan. Loans are lending money from one institution or person to another institution or person. Loans must be repaid usually with interest. Savings are money a person or institutions saves or does not spend. When money is in our savings, it is reinvested by a bank as a loan to another person. For example, the other person may buy a car, home, or pay for college. This means that the interest pulled from the credit on loans is how banks profit as a business. Saving money is important because it enables the banking system to work. Without money from savings, banks could not be make loans and be profitable. Understanding interest, credit and savings is another step towards financial literacy. “Typically, students slide into debt through the extension (by credit card companies) of unaffordable credit lines.”- Robert Manning
The following scene explains the basics of banking.
Client 1: “Hello clerk, I’d like to deposit ten dollars.”
Clerk: “ Certainly would you like this in your savings or checking?”
Client 1: “Savings please.”
The bank can now reinvest your ten dollars.
Client 2: Can I borrow ten dollars for a shirt?”
Clerk: “Certainly. The interest rate is 6%”
Client 2:” Fine by me”
1 month later he must pay the bank back. But must pay them an extra 6%.
Clerk: “Good afternoon. Are you here to pay your loan?”
Client 2: “Sure. Ten bucks.”
Clerk: “Sorry, sir. Ten bucks plus 6% interest.”
Client 2: “Oh, yea.”
Financial literacy also requires understanding the minimum wage. The minimum wage is the lowest legal wage one can employ labor at in the U.S., adjusted by states. The minimum wage was created in 1938. As indicated by the chart, the minimum wage has not kept up with the rate of inflation.
Year | Minimum Wage | Wage worth in today’s money |
1938 | .25 cents | $4.15 |
1950 | .75 cents | $7.29 |
1956 | $1 | $8.61 |
1968 | $1.60 | $10.75 |
1975 | $1.80 | $9.49 |
2015 | $7.25 | $7.25 |
Source: Pew Research
Many say the minimum wage isn’t for a family. Well, I agree it isn’t but it wasn’t meant to be. It was intended to be for younger workers and to raise the working age. Yes, it’s too low, but it was meant to be the minimum rather than a going rate. It’s important to understand the use of the minimum wage but also to restore it to a relevant wage of at least $12 an hour. Since 2009, the minimum wage has lost about “8.1% of its purchasing power to inflation.” (Pew Research, 2015). This reality is acknowledged by the twenty-nine states that have set a higher minimum wage. While workers need to know the minimum wage, more importantly, they need to know how to work for a fair or living wage. Understanding labor rights are just as important as understanding civil rights; they are connected. “I do not support raising the minimum wage, and the reason is as follows. When the minimum wage is raised, workers are priced out of the market. That is the economic reality that seems, at least so far, to be missing from this discussion”.- John Sununu
In conclusion, as we are not teaching our students financial literacy, we may potentially will lose our savings, become overly indebted, and not demand equity in pay. Without basic financial literacy, citizens will not be able to challenge those who control capital and make policy. Because basic financial literacy has not been taught, the U.S. goal to become “middle class” has become less attainable. To change this trend, basic economic literacy, including discussing fiat currency, basic banking and minimum
wage, needs to be infused into the curriculum. Financial literacy should be added to “reading, writing and arithmetic” in all schools.
Bibliography:
A History Of The Minimum Wage." YouTube. YouTube, 3 Mar. 2014. Web. 24 Nov. 2015. by Time Magazine:
White, Lawrence H. "Inflation." : The Concise Encyclopedia of Economics. Econlib, 2008. Web. 24 Nov. 2015.:
Advanced essay by Luke W-S Nothing
My goals while writing this was to write something clean and to make it crisp and grasping. I feel for the first thing I did well was time management because I had almost everything done a full day ahead at least for each due date. I feel as well my ability to broaden the topic like nothing helped me write a good essay. I'd like to improve on describing because things such as describing, grammar is something to always improve one
My picture is a picture I carry everywhere. It’s a photo of me, my twin brother Aaron and my older brother Dessler. We at this time are hiking I am like 4, and so is Aaron. Dessler is about six. My twin brother and I are wearing red shirts. I honestly do not know which one is which in this picture. Until we were 6 every picture we look the exact same. My older brother has a white shirt on. Not plain, it has a picture on it consisting of other smaller pictures. We are on a trail at this moment. We were almost on the way back to the car as we take this picture. As we take this my older brother and one of us have our arms over each other’s shoulders. While Aaron and I lock elbows and 1 of us point at ourselves. All three of us have black basketball shorts on. We also all look extremely similar almost like triplets. As we take this there is a lot of shade in the background from trees. These trees make it a good spot for a picture with a fair balance of sunlight. The ground is a pavement. Gray and smooth so when we used to ride our bikes along this trail as a kid when we went hiking. I believe that we are a fair height and are extremely happy in the photo. Sadly I do not remember well as I was young. Finally, my brothers and I had fun this day and as a token to our friendship I carry this in my wallet.
Dubois- Good description of articles of clothes
Declan- Talk about trees
Part 2:
As we walk this trail we always begin walking by the creek. We continued down past the bridges to do our echos. As a kid making huge echos was fun. But as we finished our echos we saw a trail we never saw before. So we decided to walk down it. As we walked down it we soon realized we have no idea how to get back. As my brother panicked we tried to work our way back onto known ground. We were surrounded by so many plants and felt isolated into the forest. As kids we were afraid we’d become like the kids in lord of the flies. But after a while we saw a deer. Uncommon in philly even for a common hiking area sent us running like rabbits. We didn’t know that deers were not dangerous so the idea of one freaked us out. So we eventually ran into a place we knew. A commonly known rock that was known because of its unnecesary size. So we climbed the rock and found the trail we needed so we wouldn’t be lost anymore. So that day we learned things such as deers are scared of us and that when you are lost don’t panic and manage your surroundings.
Memory 2:
As a kid I would go to camp every year. It was an overnight wilderness camp and we every year played the best game ever. One that is very hard to play if you have no athletic skill, critical thinking and self awareness. Usually this made my team lose every single year(misunderstood the game). So this game is mission impossible. Like the movie you are given a task to find the pieces in 4 different parts of the camp. You have 60 minutes in the middle of the night to get as many as you can and to return to the base. So a few years ago we started and five minutes later many people screwed up on my team. They were afraid of all the trees and the surroundings. This was frustrating. So early in the match the people who search for you and if caught twice you lose we were caught because another team was too loud. So here is the relation we ended up after two objects getting lost. A few of our teammates were unaware of what to do and the surroundings scared them so we had to turn in ourselves so those kids would leave the group. After the third object we were almost found again. At this time we hid in bushes and I kicked a beehive. Stinging me a dozen times along with my teammates. So when we returned I had cuts and stings everywhere and by being handed every single year bad teams I lost every single time. But through the cuts and stings I had a lot of fun playing the best game ever.
Memory 3- I remember this game as if it was yesterday. The 2008 world series brought joy to all Philadelphians. Brad Lidge exits the bullpen to try and earn a save so the Phillies will win the world series. First up to bat is Evan Longoria 3B for tampa bay. After two pitches he gets to a 0-2 count, leading to a foul and an end result being a popout to Chase Utley leading the Phillies to their first out. We are a third of the way to being champs. Dioner Navarro comes up to bat. Lidge takes him to an early 0-2 count. Navarro anticipates and takes the ball to shallow right field for a single. Next the second basemen for Tampa Bay comes up to the plate. Ben Zobrist. After the 1-1 count the pinch runner steals second base putting a runner in scoring position for tampa bay. Zobrist on the 1-2 count lines it to right field making the phillies only one more out from being world champions. The next batter earlier in the matchup hit a homerun to center field. The first pitch results in a foul ball making an 0-1 count. The next pitch is a check swing by the batter. But the umps say that he went around the plate. The 0-2 count put the longest time between pitches for phillies fans. “The 0-2 pitch swing and a miss, struck em out the phillies are the 2008 world champions of baseball”.- Harry Kalas. At this moment my brothers and I dogpiled celebrating the win. One of the best nights ever, happening with the people in the artwork above my brothers.
Frustrating- Indee
Awareness- Lukas
Surroundings, cuts- Xavier
Relation- Jake
Kicked, Misunderstood- Zeshawn
Advanced Essay bu Luke W-S Nothing
Intro:
My goals while writing this was to write something clean and to make it crisp and grasping. I feel for the first thing I did well was time management because I had almost everything done a full day ahead at least for each due date. I feel as well my ability to broaden the topic like nothing helped me write a good essay. I'd like to improve on describing because things such as describing, grammar is something to always improve one
My picture is a picture I carry everywhere. It’s a photo of me, my twin brother Aaron and my older brother Dessler. We at this time are hiking I am like 4, and so is Aaron. Dessler is about six. My twin brother and I are wearing red shirts. I honestly do not know which one is which in this picture. Until we were 6 every picture we look the exact same. My older brother has a white shirt on. Not plain, it has a picture on it consisting of other smaller pictures. We are on a trail at this moment. We were almost on the way back to the car as we take this picture. As we take this my older brother and one of us have our arms over each other’s shoulders. While Aaron and I lock elbows and 1 of us point at ourselves. All three of us have black basketball shorts on. We also all look extremely similar almost like triplets. As we take this there is a lot of shade in the background from trees. These trees make it a good spot for a picture with a fair balance of sunlight. The ground is a pavement. Gray and smooth so when we used to ride our bikes along this trail as a kid when we went hiking. I believe that we are a fair height and are extremely happy in the photo. Sadly I do not remember well as I was young. Finally, my brothers and I had fun this day and as a token to our friendship I carry this in my wallet.
Dubois- Good description of articles of clothes
Declan- Talk about trees
Memory 1:
As we walk this trail we always begin walking by the creek. We continued down past the bridges to do our echos. As a kid making huge echos was fun. But as we finished our echos we saw a trail we never saw before. So we decided to walk down it. As we walked down it we soon realized we have no idea how to get back. As my brother panicked we tried to work our way back onto known ground. We were surrounded by so many plants and felt isolated into the forest. As kids we were afraid we’d become like the kids in lord of the flies. But after a while we saw a deer. Uncommon in philly even for a common hiking area sent us running like rabbits. We didn’t know that deers were not dangerous so the idea of one freaked us out. So we eventually ran into a place we knew. A commonly known rock that was known because of its unnecesary size. So we climbed the rock and found the trail we needed so we wouldn’t be lost anymore. So that day we learned things such as deers are scared of us and that when you are lost don’t panic and manage your surroundings.
Memory 2:
As a kid I would go to camp every year. It was an overnight wilderness camp and we every year played the best game ever. One that is very hard to play if you have no athletic skill, critical thinking and self awareness. Usually this made my team lose every single year(misunderstood the game). So this game is mission impossible. Like the movie you are given a task to find the pieces in 4 different parts of the camp. You have 60 minutes in the middle of the night to get as many as you can and to return to the base. So a few years ago we started and five minutes later many people screwed up on my team. They were afraid of all the trees and the surroundings. This was frustrating. So early in the match the people who search for you and if caught twice you lose we were caught because another team was too loud. So here is the relation we ended up after two objects getting lost. A few of our teammates were unaware of what to do and the surroundings scared them so we had to turn in ourselves so those kids would leave the group. After the third object we were almost found again. At this time we hid in bushes and I kicked a beehive. Stinging me a dozen times along with my teammates. So when we returned I had cuts and stings everywhere and by being handed every single year bad teams I lost every single time. But through the cuts and stings I had a lot of fun playing the best game ever.
Frustrating- Indee
Awareness- Lukas
Surroundings, cuts- Xavier
Relation- Jake
Kicked, Misunderstood- Zeshawn
Memory 3- I remember this game as if it was yesterday. The 2008 world series brought joy to all Philadelphians. Brad Lidge exits the bullpen to try and earn a save so the Phillies will win the world series. First up to bat is Evan Longoria 3B for tampa bay. After two pitches he gets to a 0-2 count, leading to a foul and an end result being a popout to Chase Utley leading the Phillies to their first out. We are a third of the way to being champs. Dioner Navarro comes up to bat. Lidge takes him to an early 0-2 count. Navarro anticipates and takes the ball to shallow right field for a single. Next the second basemen for Tampa Bay comes up to the plate. Ben Zobrist. After the 1-1 count the pinch runner steals second base putting a runner in scoring position for tampa bay. Zobrist on the 1-2 count lines it to right field making the phillies only one more out from being world champions. The next batter earlier in the matchup hit a homerun to center field. The first pitch results in a foul ball making an 0-1 count. The next pitch is a check swing by the batter. But the umps say that he went around the plate. The 0-2 count put the longest time between pitches for phillies fans. “The 0-2 pitch swing and a miss, struck em out the phillies are the 2008 world champions of baseball”.- Harry Kalas. At this moment my brothers and I dogpiled celebrating the win. One of the best nights ever, happening with the people in the artwork above my brothers.
by Luke Watson-Sharer
Nothing sings, talks, walks and sleeps. Nothing has the ability to persuade. Nothing has skills and concepts. Nothing has been here forever. Nothing tells us everything we know as nothing but everything as well. Nothing is our freedom as well as our dictator. Nothing is action; it is idleness. Nothing has power to give and take life.
Part 1: Action and Idleness
The sun, poised above the zinc roof, fried the wilting branches of mango and avocado trees. Both trees gently cried for rain. Together, roof and trees, sheltered an elderly, blind woman relaxing on the veranda. With each gentle push with her worn, calloused feet, she moved the rocking chair against the cement. It was another afternoon waiting for another evening.
She would wait for her great-grandchildren to walk the dusty path home from school. She would wait for rain to quench the dirt’s thirst. She would wait for the night’s news of the day’s events. She would wait for the sun to quickly disappear and for her bed to plead for her presence.
The elderly woman would spend the afternoon anticipating the wealth of family and food. Her movements were slight. Her gestures were nearly invisible. Her memories were wrapped into her lap blanket. She counted the tassel of thread, worn with her thumbs. Then, tapped her feet to a tune no one could hear. Nothing”,” but still air waiting for a splash of rain. The elderly blind woman did nothing while remembering and foreseeing everything.
Part 2: Idleness and Action
As they load the panga at the docks, they lose count. One, two, three, four…. the count fades with the thump of another load. Ah, nothing.
The driver signals. There’s room. Climb down. Steady. Feed bags piled on heads to fill the panga. Sit on top of feed bags of corn. Shift. Move the cobs to form a cushion.
They need to get on the panga. The sun is here but then there will be nothing. No light on the river. No full moon. Just the still, damp slap of the water on the river’s bed. Soon the boat will remain idle. Another day lost. Tomorrow to gain.
Where will they go? Anywhere. Nowhere. Escaping no food. Escaping threats of breathing. Forced travelers from all paths meander to the river. Dying for prosperity as blind as a bat sleeping in the sun.
The travelers walk the path, which leads to a boat. The boat, covered in rust brown as bark; or it is red? The bark of mahogany draped before the river. The bark of a mutt snug against the first woman apparently in her second trimester. Or, it nothing but a lump of air. A deep breath? Then, she exhales relief; next Inhales fear. Nothing to fear but caring for a child she will soon bare.
Behind her is a man missing an ear. Does he hear? The hole, instead of an ear, is formed from his head. It’s flat as a mid day horizon. His two eyes that peer at the boat piled with what could be nothing. As he bends, his white ripped shirt covers ribbs. His frame as long and thin as the first woman’s is short and round. They stand, lean and move toward the boat with nothing but their hope for a seat on cobs of corn. Nothing but full sacks.
More people move toward the boat. Just one more seat. Finally, the driver holds up his hand: STOP. He nods and then shakes his head. The boat is full. 20 pounds could cost a life. Ah, but 20 pounds are nothing!
The driver says in a low, hoarse tone: “The owner will kick everyone off if nobody follows.” Huh? Everyone is quick to throw something. A small, knit bag, a pair of holy socks or even a new blanket. With the toss of each item, the sky turn grey. The stillness turns to twists of wind. The clouds quickly fill with rain. Then, splat and splash.
With no dusk, the sun is gone and the driver becomes skeptical. Why chance the nothingness of night on a river? Why risk the sacks of corn? Why expose the travelers to a watery grave? The boat driver’s eyes suddenly fill with blood. His veins drained of hope. Hopelessness is nothingness.
Surprised, the rain subsides. The remaining raindrops play a game of tag with the dust along the river’s banks. They are the center of civilization. One hundred kilometers from nowhere. If only the boat could float and carry the woman in her second trimester, the long man needing a shirt, the old couple smug in their hugs along with the line of humanity clinging to the hope of surviving tonight. Nothing else left of hope.
The driver makes the call. His head tells him the river will be their guide. The river will coddle them with sweet waves and sounds of nothingness under a dark, moonless sky. He carefully reaches for the travelers, guiding them, assisting them, helping them sit between the cobs of corn. Then, out of nowhere, the boat becomes unbalanced. The long, lean man tips to the right. A streak of lightning brightens the sky.
The water splurges into the back of the boat as the lean man dives into the river’s waves. Head first. Feet last. Disappear into the nothingness of river. Everyone gasps. Who is next?
The rain is no longer tapping the river’s waves. It is churning in anger. The sacks of corn begin to sway. Next, the woman in her second trimester loses her grip. She rolls off the sack of corn and into the river’s waves. Her body bounces against the boat. She grabs the side pulling a sack, and then young child, into the waves.
Where is the moon? Where is the lightning? The sky has nothing to offer. Only the clouds give. They give rain and more rain. The only light is the corn.
The boat quietly melts into the river. The motor attempting to fight. The driver treads water. There are a few other bouncing heads. Will any one remember? Is it too much to forget? Is there nothing left?
The sun rose at 5 AM. Bright, round, and licking the gentle waves of the river. Cobs of corn were caught in a mango grove. Nothing left to reveal the graves of longing for everything. Receiving nothing. Their loss may seem like nothing in the midst of war but it was everything no one hoped for. Idling. Similar to those boys in the woods, knowing none of their locations, scared of what is to come and if they’d find a way back to the trail, waiting for a tomorrow. Waiting for nothing.
We should've known
Video 1 from Luke Watson-Sharer on Vimeo.
First monologue: The Philippines 2004. Tao King. He is a farmer in a small town. The disaster left him without food. At the same time, he became responsible for feeding everyone in the town.
Before we knew
Tao: I’m so so sorry. We are short on everything from vegetable to chickens. The typhoon took everything.
No. You do not seeming to get it. All we have is contaminated food. I don’t make enough to get food for everyone right now.
We do not have the supplies or the money for aid. We are 10 kilometers from the closest town. First, we need to find any supplies to aid our children and find our missing family members.
No, don’t go in there. That’s… Stop him he stole all the tomatoes we have left!
Dear God! I’m fed up right now. I haven’t slept in 3 days, haven’t eaten in 1 and haven’t even had time to mourn for my brother who died. Please, everyone, continue to help the community. I have given all I have. We have to survive with the food and water that is left. We have next to nothing. I’m deeply sorry.
Keep throwing rocks and see what you represent to our community. I might be destroyed physically but not spiritually. I knew this was gonna happen. Business’s and us have been polluting our planet for too long. This is only the beginning. Who knows, we could lose more than our homes. We could be underwater.
Well sir your greed and non consideration for the rest of us won’t help. I have enough food for 20 people but have to feed 550 people. How do you think that makes me feel?
I will try and feed everyone but first let’s work on finding our missing family and friends. We need to build them caskets with parts of our destroyed homes. Aid will come.
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Seperation
It was November 22nd. My family and I just woke up. I felt a sharp pain in my arm. It felt like my arm was separating from my body. My wife, Sandy, sat in front of me, my son Marty to the left and my daughter Jessica to the right. After I realized what was happening, I now understand why all these polar bears are sobbing and why people come by to “try” and help.
It’s been nearly an entire year since I’ve seen my family. I miss them dearly. I told them before I’d never leave but I had to say goodbye. Remembering them gives me hope and a desire to go home. I might be an ice glacier but I have emotions, feelings and feel pain. I just want to return and hope they aren’t melted or depressed and hoping they can get through the pain. If I had hands, I’d send letters or if I could dial a phone, I’d try my best but I’ve been ill for a while. I melt too fast for my structure to be maintained. I come to you the world leaders today to help me find them once again and to prevent this from happening ever again. We need to stop polluting our planet with extra parts per million of carbon dioxide so our ozone doesn’t hurt me or others. I don’t have too much time left so I’m asking to just talk to my family if they are alive again. Please restore our ozone. Please help me say goodbye one last time to my family before the ozone kills me and them.
Hurricane Katrina victim: We should’ve known
I grew up and lived in New Orleans my entire life. My parents, my grandparents and my great grandparents were all New Orleanians. Before Katrina, my family and I just moved into a new home. We had a lawn, a white picket fence and a backyard barbecue. Growing up I never had any of that. I was so excited. A month before the “hurricane came our way,” I saw what happened in the Philippines but did not take it seriously. I didn’t know much about climate change until I researched the Philippines’ typhoon.
I learned power plants smoke is very harmful. Carbon dioxide from the power plants, car exhaust and other ways of burning fossil fuels heats the environment. The heat can’t escape and earth warms up. This has caused the average temperature in the U.S. to increase 2 degrees and increased precipitation by 5%. When I saw the Katrina reports, it all came together. What i learned from studying climate change and the Philippines typhoon was happening in New Orleans.
During Hurricane Katrina, I lost my dog, my white picket fence, roof, first floor, thousands of memories, my lawn and backyard barbeque. I learned the pain of loss from a natural disaster. I also witnessed the loses of my neighbors and friends. While I did not lose family members, I grieved with friends who lost family members. I then decided I had to do more than grieve.
This Sunday there will be a march. My sons, daughter, husband, and friends from my block will all attend the march. The governments of the world must do something to turn around climate change and global warming. We need a future where my great grandkids aren’t 50ft underwater. I want them to grow up in New Orleans on dry land. Please join us!Luke W-S Reflection
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Childhood Obesity: The conclusion and growing awareness
Childhood Obesity: The conclusion and growing awareness
Hello. My name is Luke Watson-Sharer. Hopefully you read my first 2 blogs about childhood obesity. If you haven’t check them out here: First blog, Second Blog. Childhood obesity is not only a U.S. issue but a worldwide issue. The obesity crisis expands every day. Obesity not only affects a child’s physical health but also their emotional well being. Obese children not only limit their life choices but may also lose self esteem. Obesity can lead to heart disease, suicide, cancer and even death. What can we do to help? We can raise awareness and provide encouragement. That’s what the agent of change is all about.
There are many ways to raise awareness. I’m glad to contribute to raising awareness. Others who can raise awareness are companies and community campaigns. Currently, the NFL is contributing to getting kids more active with NFL60 where they promote 60 minutes of activity of sports or running each day. Also, hospitals and some food companies promote low calorie foods or options. Advertisements by some food companies promote healthy choices like salads to low fat options. Community groups can create exercise groups to asking schools to provide low calories and healthy options. Individually, you can create a flyer on childhood obesity or healthy eating to distribute in school. There are many ways to raise awareness about childhood obesity and support people trying to lose weight.
With many ways to change and create change, there are many possible components. I support the changes in exercise and eating to support decreasing childhood obesity. As I wrote in my first blog, childhood obesity leads to negative physical and emotional health. With my second blog, it provided results from surveys that helped me thrive and want to make a change. Positive ways to encourage change are through a variety of exercise choices from group sports to walking instead of taking the bus. There are also ways to increase healthy eating including eating fruit instead of cookies and not overeating. I support increasing awareness of childhood obesity because it’s positive for all children and teens. Decreasing childhood obesity prevents potential diseases, suicide, the loss of self esteem and encourages a better physical and emotional health.
For my agent of change I helped get the word out by presenting to peers and adults statistics about childhood obesity. My powerpoint is here: Powerpoint. I explained what each blog post was about and showed how childhood obesity works and current statistics. The surge in childhood obesity has dramatically increased in the last two decades. I was hoping my message would send a message to my class and would help them encourage friends and family to be more aware and, if they are obese, to get help to become healthier.
Me presenting my project.
I have made a change happen. Outside of taking in childhood obesity as a problem whenever the topic comes up or in situations I can talk about it, I drop knowledge on the topic. I felt comfortable doing the project and without personally becoming attached to the project because I am not overweight. Therefore, I could keep a distance from the topic while also having friends and family who need support in losing weight. After completing the project, I learned more what it is like to be in their shoes and gained compassion. It is difficult to change eating habits, exercise habits and lose weight. I now have a passion for fighting childhood obesity by increasing everyone’s knowledge and supporting friends trying to lose weight. Next, I can go to a park and start a weekly football game or a basketball game. I can organize a play group with kids on my block or at church to get them moving. This can help kids burn calories that are not needed. Nevertheless, there is a lot to do. I will continue to look for ways to support the fight against childhood obesity.
My adventure in helping increase awareness of childhood obesity has just begun. Raising awareness and causing a change is the most beneficial thing to do. I’m glad that I know I made a change and helped spread the word and support others who either need to lose weight or want to encourage others to get healthy.
“I hope the millions of people I've touched have the optimism and desire to share their goals and hard work and persevere with a positive attitude.” - Michael Jordan
Bibliography: Annotated
Luke's Classroom project
One thing I learned that i didn't know that well was overall about 3-d drawings.
b. How did leaning this thing make your drawings better?
It help me understand about 3d drawings and that mistakes are part of the process
c. If you did this assignment again, what would you do differently?
If I did this again I probably get a better headstart on the project.
d. What is your advice to someone who has never drawn a one point perspective drawing before?
Don't forget a ruler
e. What resource helped you the most and why?
The ruler because it was your guide because without it you're unable to do this.
Luke Watson-Sharer 3/1/14 YATW Blog Post #2 Childhood Obesity: Exactly What Is It?
Hello my name is Luke Watson-Sharer. Hopefully you have read my first blog post here First Blog post. I’m writing my second blog on my discovered research. As in the other blog post, the purpose of You and the World is to make a difference through an issue. I picked obesity which is a very significant issue in the U.S. and many other countries. Obesity affects our physical and mental health and therefore our future. Blog 1 discussed the many issues related to obesity in the U.S. and the world. I decided to do my own study by conducting a survey on my topic. I did two surveys: one for people with knowledge on the topic and one for anyone. I wanted to know what experts or people with knowledge believed and what anonymous people think about the topic.
Survey 1 This is my first survey. It’s for anyone to answer and you share your opinions and basic things you do. I start by asking the responder if they believe they’re obese, Then I asked why they believe they are or are not obese. Next, I ask if they made attempts to lose weight. You can read the other question on the link “Survey 1.” The responses were interesting. What interested me was seeing that about 90% said they didn’t believe they were obese but about 70% said they eat sweets a lot. This is interesting because if you eat a lot of sugary things you may gain weight. Many said eating sweets is a bad habit. Since most said they are not obese, metabolism may be a factor. Genetics could play a larger role; I will discuss this later in the blog. Also almost everyone says they don’t workout or try to cut calories but of 90% do not believe they are obese. This makes me curious. Finally, after seeing my results for survey 1 it seems that obesity could be more genetic than a result of bad habits. Responses To survey 1
Survey 2 This is my second survey. It’s made for experts or people with knowledge. I asked for only knowledgeable people reply. (I couldn’t control who replied.) This is so I could learn more about obesity. My first question was probably the hardest question to ask. What do you believe obesity exists? This can be hard because I got many opinionated responses and because it’s a heated topic. Then I asked other questions on what to do to help children with obesity. I ask about helping kids and ways of recommending things to kids. Survey Responses: Responses Here you’ll see many of the responses to the questions I was hoping to answer. Finally, I got good insight from knowledgeable people on childhood obesity.
These responses added to my knowledge of f the issue and ideas for helping overweight kids. I got a wide amount of responses that differed a lot; this is still helpful data. Some of my personal opinions have changed on what obesity is and how to help kids with obesity because now I’m leaning towards obesity being more genetic. This will affect the recommendations to help kids; losing weight isn’t as easy as saying “exercise.” I still wonder about what causes obesity. I got many answers between genetic and bad eating habits and I still am baffled. While I was going my survey, a new study found children from 2 - 5 years old are not as obese as 10 years ago. This is great but all other age groups saw no major change. I’m thinking of doing a program for schools without gym’s so that students can also get exercise even though they don’t have a school gym. I can maybe go back to my old middle and elementary school because we never had a gym.
My research has helped me a lot. It left a question mark but has given me more views on the topic of childhood obesity. Maybe we will never have an exact definition to childhood obesity or if it’s genetic or from bad habits. What we do know is that it’s a big issue in the U.S. and worldwide. I hope to be an agent of change. Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy my next blog post.
Annotated Bibliography: Here
Media Fluency 2 Luke
Media Fluency 1 Luke
Photosynthesis by Ben, Ayanna, Jesse and Luke
Childhood Obesity: An Escalating Crisis
Childhood Obesity: An Escalating Crisis
Hello, my name Is Luke Watson-Sharer. I’m 14 years old and I’ve always wondered about many national and international problems. Since attending Science Leadership Academy, I realize i can make a difference. In my Freshman English class we have been given a challenge to make a difference. Our project, You and The World, requires us to research an issues, post on a blog, and participate in community service. I know there are many international issues that need to be addressed from Israeli occupation of Palestine, the Syrian Civil War, human trafficking, and the U.S. drone war. There are also many issues in the U.S. that need to be addressed including funding of public schools, poverty and the huge wealth gap, and health care. Nevertheless, I wanted to address a problem affecting many youth but often ignored by youth. I decided to learn about childhood obesity. Obesity not only affects physical health but also emotional health. I wonder why children of different ethnicities, heights and regions of the U.S. are impacted by obesity. I also want to know why it is a “growth” epidemic and how it can be halted.
Obesity is a daily problem. Obesity costs the United States about $100 billion per year. Unlike a cold or even the flu, obesity does not last a few weeks. Obesity can consume one’s life. Today, over 23 million children in the U.S. are obese. Children and teens who are overweight are susceptible to chronic illnesses like Type 2 diabetes. They are also at risk for high blood pressure. Both of these conditions may shorten their lives. Since 1980, the percentage of obese children from 6-11 years old increased from 7% to 18% . Obese teens, 12-19 years old, have increased from 5% to 18% since 1980. Most obese children are at risk of becoming an obese adult with a very high risk of heart disease, stroke and type 2 diabetes. Obesity not only leads to chronic illnesses but also less quality of life . You may also find other possible threats to kids here Medical News Today Childhood Obesity Facts.
http://www.obesityhelp.com/forums/teen_wls/cmsID,11323/mode,content/a,cms/
This is a body scale of issues of childhood obesity.
This is one of many stories of kids overcoming obesity with diets and other ways of losing weight and staying healthy.
In Austin’s story, he decides to lose weight because his mother is diabetic. Austin loses over 40 pounds. This raises his self esteem. This has convinced me the goal of my project is working to end obesity because it damages self esteem. While the risk of other diseases is important, damage to self esteem is the most important. lack of self esteem leads to depression. Depression is debilitating and may lead to suicide. Overweight youth may be teased and mocked for their weight. Like in Austin’s story, increasing your self esteem and gaining confidence by losing weight is possible. This may also lead to a decrease in bullying. Nevertheless, losing weight is not easy.
Some people are genetically prone to gain weight while others are naturally thin. How should we support people who want to lose weight? There are many ways to manage and lose weight. Eating fewer calories is key; healthy eating is also important. Exercising instead of spending too much time using technology and watching TV helps one lose weight. Consistent exercise, whether on an athletic team or running steps in your house, is necessary. It is also important for parents to be involved in supporting their child’s weight loss. Parents should know what foods are served at school and what food the child purchases outside of school. Next, parents should keep healthy snacks like fruits and vegetables in the home instead of junk food. Last, family members needs to encourage each other to increase determination and lifestyle changes. Long term weight loss requires healthy eating and exercise.
Currently, I am wondering if overeating and unhealthy eating is a habit, a family trait or a mixture of both. I also question the role of advertising and companies that produce unhealthy food. Also, who is to blame? Is it the children and parents who purchase the junk food, the child that does not stop eating or the companies that promote unhealthy living? Is it environment, genetics or both? I hope to learn how I can step up and help contribute to helping kids in our country and in the world lose weight and gain self esteem in the fight against obesity.
Every year in the U.S. there are over 300,000 deaths due to unhealthy eating and obesity. Obesity also makes youth more susceptible to bullying, depression and suicide. This can be prevented. We need to encourage each other to eat healthy foods and exercise. Maintaining a healthy weight will improve self esteem like in Austin’s story. Ending childhood obesity will not be easy or quick but we do not have a choice. The materials, physical and emotional costs are too high to ignore the epidemic of childhood obesity.
You can view my Annotated Bibliography here.