My first attempt was not very good. I had some spacing issues and I spent most of the time fixing it. Then when it was fixed it looked too perfectly spaced. In the better one I used better spacing so that it looks nicer and you are more likely to remember it.

Also I didn't like the layout so I decided to revamp the entire look of it. I moved the picture over to the side so that it was by itself. Then I moved the words over to the right.

I still kept many of the same things though. Like I still used the contrast from black red and white. Also I used the same background which bleeds over. I still used all the words and images but I just changed the color and font size of them.

For some reason it won't let me upload the second fixed picture

In the first slide that was created, there was a lack of priority. The first slide had three different points and according to presentation zen: One slide, One point. All my wording was disorganized.

In my new slide, i decided to incorporate the rule of the thirds. By Placing all the words on the one side and all my pictures on the other side. Also, i added some more contrast and prioritized what the slide was about. Making my picture bigger has done this. Also, some bleeding was done. 

    There were many things wrong with my slide. The background in my picture was awful and the words was too small. So I decided to change my slide to make a lot more better. To help me change it, I used the information giving to me from my classmates and teacher and from presentation zen.

    So I had used alpha to take out the background from the picture because it was distracting from what was important it. I put a frame around the picture to make it look a little better. Then I made the text bigger because in presentation zen it says don't be afraid to make the words big. I made "never" green to make it contrast with the other colors.  And I put the heart on the picture because its showing that the two friends love each other.

I wanted to make the adjectives in a more simple line instead of all over the slide. Though I kept the pictures of myself "bleeding" to the lower right and left corners, I also changed the way my name was displayed.

For the first slide, I was afraid to make things to close to each other or making the texts big. After I took another glance at the "Presentation Zen" website, I then realized that it was okay to make things big and close to each other. I also learned how to use the rule of the thirds, something that I didn't know how to use before. I focused on the rule of the thirds in my new slide. The Old slide out of the two is the first. The New slide is the second slide.

The New slide has a lot of properties from the "presentation zen" website. The texts on my Dr. Seuss quote is very large and easy to read. Also, in the first column when using the rule of the thirds is my picture and quote. Then, the second column contains the words "Dermatology is my life". That is also bold and large. That phrase is very simple and is self-explanatory. Finally, the third column had all of the dermatology products that I use.

This is my old slide.   

This is my new slide which I have improved.

 I made these changes because thought that my images needed to be bigger and pop out more.  I put the big picture of the hockey player with no teeth at the back so that it would both stand out, and cause the looker to unconsciously focus on the other elements of the slides.

I also tried to make all of the words to have contrast against the pictures, and I didn't use many words.  I tried to make it so that you got the point of the slide through seeing the pictures, not through words.

I changed my slide so that i could make everthing bigger.As Ms Hull Showed us in class. But I also used shapes to take out the unessary words out of my lebron picture. The elements that i still used were that i still bleed my pictures and that ii contrast my Shirt color with the Color  of the Expanition point.

The original slide is not as eye catching and at a glance you couldn't consume all the information. So the new slide has all the new things in it. I had everything in a decent organized form so it wasn't really eye catching. There also wasn't a lot of bleed effects. 

The first picture of me had many things in the back round that would distract you from me. The new picture has a simple back round.

My slide is simple and easy to see, by the way of the font size. Also you can see there is unity between my phrases and name, which all make up my personality. Then there is contrast between the background, my name, and the phrases. All the phrases are white and all the letters of the name are going vertically and are red, which create repetition. Overall a well done slide.