she told me " you stink " im sixteen , so im offended


i went home, with the same intentions everyday.

knock on the door hard, yell through the mailbox to yell at my brother to let me in, run upstairs, hang my coat in my closet , start up the stupid laptop with the bad battery, and finally TAKE OFF MY TIGHT JEANS.

now on a side note, taking off my jeans is one of my favorite things to do in the world. i literally feel free. i bet both my legs and thighs inhale and exhale as soon as i unbutton.  from 7:30 am to 4:15 i suffocated my legs, and thats exactly how i feel .
after doing the routine, i decided to jump in my moms bed. she makes everything difficult so the reason why i was in her bed in the first place was because she was making me call La salle University.
so im on the phone and the classical music is playing for what feels like 85 minutes , and im remixing it with "buy you a drank" by t-pain , meanwhile my mother is flipping through the channels , debating on whether or not she should watch what she calls " gillys"
(gilmore girls) what a stupid $%@! name right?
 THEN  FINALLY some lady from the admissions office answers the phone.
and my mom burst out with " you stink patricia"
 im like " huh " ,
then i switch to a more curious face and she repeats herself...."you stink little girl,you smell like the outside"

since i was little ive been trying to figure out what the "outside" smells like but i end up pushing my thoughts aside and i get defensive and , say " well you smell like the inside"

she goes on to say i smell like old people, like i haven't washed in a few weeks
now
 for one: she didnt have to bring old people into this because now she offending somebodies grandmom or grandpop that we dont even know.

for two: this is my mother, im 16, and this is usually the talk little 12 year old boys have with there mothers after a sweaty game of some sport

i dont immediately jump in the shower at all, i let whatever smell i was walking around with linger in her room, and seep in her bed since she had so much against the "outside smell"

after a few hours , maybe 2 hours . i jump in the shower and im scrubbin my black knees ALL CRAZAAAAYYY because prom daisy duke season is approaching

im just squirting and squirting this  pink stuff onto my washcloth .  scrubbing and slathering.....i take a second to look at the bottle because it smells so good , and
it reads

"suave strawberry shampoo" -_-

 now i dont know whether to be mad at the fact that i just washed up in shampoo or to be happy that smell like i just used my mothers favorite shampoo to wash my gluteus maximus:)


Use your imagination

They stood looking up at the building in front of them, three bodybuilder types, all wearing skullies. She gazed at the three men wondering what could possible holding their attention for so long.  No, the key to their salvation wasn't up there; she was sure of it.  She felt like an outsider, wanting to be in on their plan.  Then it came to her: they were going to rob the building.  It was their possible escape route that transfixed them.  They would go in the back gate, being sure to look as natural as possible for working class men in a mansion.  They would start in the kitchen, emptying every bottle of balsamic and extra virgin.  It was expensive stuff from what she had been told.  They would then scurry into the living room, quickly disconnecting the flatscreen and rolling the Yamaha straight through the door.  Of course, they wouldn't go near the bedroom, that would be too obvious.  Instead, they would find the bathroom and fantasize about the money they would make from the fine silk robes and extra plush towels inside.  Yes, it would be the perfect robbery, she thought.  She let her mind return to the men standing in front of her.  Now, with their backs turned, she could see the words on their matching hoodies: Mike's Roofing Specialists.  Well, that makes more sense anyway, she thought, trying to console her now bruised ego

Stanford Thompson Jams w/ SLA Musicians

 Check out this quick slideshow of production stills from a Rough Cut documentary about a renaissance for Philadelphia's identity, which profiles Stanford's "Tune-Up Philly" project.

More photos and video sequences to follow, but for more info about the film project speak with the Rough Cut crew: Tyrone Kidd, John DeSalis, Brenda Chhin and Chris Cassise.


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SPANISH 1 TAREA 02/03/11 (B) 03/03/11 (C)

Escribe en español las palabras entre paréntesis.

   1. (My) …. computadora no funciona.
   2. (My) … mejor amiga está divorciada.
   3. (My) … tenis son negros .
   4. (Our) … escuela es pequeña.
   5. (Our) … clases son fáciles.
   6. (Our) … trabajo es exigente.
   7. (His) … impresora no funciona.
   8. (His) … carpeta es blanca.
   9. (Their) … película es fabulosa.
  10. (Their) … video es interesante.

Escribe en español:

   1. Roberto's dad
   2. Miguel's book
   3. Viet's house
   4. Brent's wife

SPANISH 4 Tarea 02/03/11 (A) 03/03/11 (D)

1) En quizlet, haz "Familiarize" y "SpaceRace." Toma un screenshot de 3 intentos en SpaceRace. (sign in!)

2) Cierto o Falso (¡No publiques tus respuestas! Escribe en una hoja de papel.)
  1. Gonzalo es de la clase obrera.
  2. Los estado unidos apoyó en el golpe de estado que derrocó el gobierno del Presidente Salvador Allende.
  3. El cura es director del colegio donde estudian Machuca y Gonzalo.
  4. Bajo la presidencia del General Pinochet, Chile estaba aliado con Cuba y URSS.
  5. Los izquierdistas luchaban contra los comunistas.
  6. La familia de Gonzalo era de pocos recursos.

3) ¿Estás de acuerdo con el Padre McEnroe (el cura)? ¿Por qué sí? o ¿Por qué no?

Machuca

1) ¿De qué se trata la película hasta ahora? ¿Dónde y cuándo toma lugar?
La pelicula se trata los ninos en una escuela en Chile. Los ninos ricos va a escuela con los ninos pobres y no llevarse bien, pero Machuca y Gonzalo. Estan Amigos, pero los familias son muy diferentes. Uno es el izquierdista y el otra es momios. 


2) Los dos protagonistas son Machuca y su amigo, Gonzalo. ¿Cómo te relacionas 
Son amigos. Gonzalo no atacó Machuca cuando los ninos pobres se atace. El tambien ayuda machuca durante el quiz y pasar el tiempo con esta familia.

3) Compara tu vida con la de Machuca. Nombre dos similitudes y dos diferencias.

Las vidas son muy diferentes. La familia de gonzalo es la clase alto y son enojado que los curas son comunismos. La familia de machuca es la clase obrera y los gustan el comunismo.


4) ¿Qué observas sobre Chile en la época (the era) cuando toma lugar esta película?

El país es dividen del comunismo. 

5) ¿Qué crees que va a pasar en el siguiente segmento que veremos en la próxima clase?

Pienso que el militar van a participar.

Pondering

I am still thinking about yesterdays stories, the one's where students stood up and told stories for a few minutes on the topic of "Trust". The winner of yesterday's story telling, Alexis:), her story really touched me. I think she was really brave to stand in front of her class mates and express herself in the way that she did. I also really liked Freda's story; I really feel that she showed allot of who she was threw her story, and I liked that even though I know her, I got to know her a little better.

Blind

Blind 

When I get to hold your hand,

I can barely withstand,

The colors that shape your mood,

I guess I’m blinded by your light, I guess I’m blinded by your light.


When my heart beats ten times faster,

I realize that I can’t help disaster,

The motions that cradle your desire,

I guess I’m blinded by your light, I guess I’m blinded by your light.

 

You, you take me there,

You take me anywhere that I want to be.

You, just don’t compare,

You’re all that I breathe for,

I love you endlessly.


Give me all that you possess,

I’m starving for a sense of accomplishment,

The things that make you, you,

I guess I’m blinded by your light, I guess I’m blinded by your light.


You, you take me there,

You take me anywhere that I want to be.

You, just don’t compare,

You’re all that I breathe for,

I love you endlessly.


 

Alissa DiBartolomeo NHD BM Q3

Click this to view my National History day benchmark !

Reflection on this Benchmark:

      At first looking at this benchmark outline, I was going to do Hitler as my topic, but I couldn't really get the theme out when doing and researching him. I went to go talk to miss Laufenberg and she gave me this topic because in class when we spoke of the Atomic Bomb I was really interested in it.
     After deciding on The Atomic Bomb I looked at the choices I had to do this project, when I seen live performance immediately wanted to do that. But when I thought about it i realized that it would be really hard to reenact The Atomic Bomb because I really can't make a bomb fall. After I realized that I looked at the other choices and saw website. I started to try and see what I could do if i made the website before I picked it. After realizing that I could do that I picked it. Since I wasn't going to perform my NHD project, instead of making a whole website I choose to do an iWeb for my benchmark.
    The most trouble this project gave me was finding primary sources, secondary was easy. Finding websites and videos taken from the exact same time the Atomic Bomb was really hard to find. I went to all different websites looking to see if the information was taken at the same time as the topic. After I found a couple I went looking for pictures and videos. The pictures were really hard to find because before I used them I had to make sure they were from the same day. I was thinking just because they were black and white that it was from the same date. But it wasn't. Looking for primary sources had to be the hardest part of this project.
    The things that went well were the information. Putting the information together was the easiest part of this project. Usually putting information into a project is the hardest part. But there was so much information that I was so easy. All I really had to do was but it all together and write the report.
    If I did this project over I would take my time picking the topic and see if the information would go good with the theme before deciding the topic. Not taking my time blew so much time again that I could have used to help me look for primary sources. Because of the picking the topic in such a hurry, I lost valuable time doing this benchmark. I feel like if I can do this project over, take back the time that I lost, my project would me 10 times better. Not that it isn't good, but the primary sources would be.
    After doing this project I learned so much information about the Atomic Bomb -Moral Debate. I learned why it happened, what it effected, and what was the damage that it caused. Doing this project I am really proud of my outcome project because I really think I took enough time to research about the topic and I gathered a bunch of information on this topic.       

Keiasha Spanish - 2

What did you learn from doing this project? (skills, life lessons, words etc) 

I learn how to manage my time and take the time out the day to learn how to say my day in spanish.

How do you feel about your final product?

I felt ok about it, it was fun.

If you could do your project all over again, what would you do differently/the same?

I would do it over again, I would make it longer and the day longer. 

Did you enjoy this project? Why or why not?

I would do it over again, I would make it longer and the day longer. I would do it over again because it was a fun project and I learned alot.

Machuca

1) ¿De qué se trata la película hasta ahora? ¿Dónde y cuándo toma lugar?

La película se trata de dos niños, uno de clase alta y uno de clase baja durante el golpe de estado en Chile. Los niños aprenden de los clases diferentes y su opinión del comunismo. Los dos niños son amigos cuando sus clases sociales son enemigos.

2) Los dos protagonistas son Machuca y su amigo, Gonzalo. ¿Cómo te relacionas con ellos? ¿Con quién tienes más en común? Explica (explain).

Soy en el medio de los dos en la clase media, que no tiene un parte en este película.
No tengo problemas en mi familia como Machuca, pero no soy pobre como Gonzalo.
No soporto el Comunismo entonces estoy mas en común con Machuca.

3) Compara tu vida con la de Machuca. Nombre dos similitudes y dos diferencias.

Dos similitudes que tengo con Machuca son que tengo dinero y que mi familia no soporte el Comunismo. Dos diferencias son que no tengo problemas en mi familia y mi escuela no es privada.

4) ¿Qué observas sobre Chile en la época (the era) cuando toma lugar esta película?
Estos eventos paso en los años 1970. Había mucha tensión entre los clases altas y obreras. Había muchas opiniones diferentes del Comunismo.

5) ¿Qué crees que va a pasar en el siguiente segmento que veremos en la próxima clase?

Creo que la Militaría va a tomar poder. Creo que Chile va a convertir en Comunismo. Machuca y su familia van a ser atacados porque son ricos.

Machuca.



1) ¿De qué se trata la película hasta ahora? ¿Dónde y cuándo toma lugar?

La película se trata de un niño que se llama Machuca de baja clase el y sus hermanas van a una escuela alta clase y como no son de la alta clase los demás lo bullan. Un niño (Gonzalo) quien es de la clase alta, pero esta bullado también ayuda a Machuca y se convierten en nuevos amigos.

2) Los dos protagonistas son Machuca y su amigo, Gonzalo. ¿Cómo te relacionas con ellos? ¿Con quién tienes más en común? Explica (explain).


Ellos se convierten en nuevos amigos y su relación es buena. Yo no tengo tanto en común con ningunos, por que yo soy de la clase mediana. 

3) Compara tu vida con la de Machuca. Nombre dos similitudes y dos diferencias.


El es da la clase baja y yo soy de la clase mediana
El estuvo bullado y yo nunca a estuvo estado bullada.
Nosotros dos somos hispanos.
Los dos vamos a una escuela buena.

4) ¿Qué observas sobre Chile en la época (the era) cuando toma lugar esta película?

Yo observe que había protestas contra y para Allende

5) ¿Qué crees que va a pasar en el siguiente segmento que veremos en la próxima clase?
En el siguiente segmento que vamos a ver, creo que la familia de Machuca va conocer la familia de Gonzalo y no se van a gustar. 

 

Spaghettios

Earlier in the week my mom had bought spaghettios so i'm excited that she had bought them cause i had'nt had them in a while. So i decided to have some for old times sake. the label said ?" Not with frank slices" so i go " Ohh that's new" i opened the can put it in a bowl and microwaved it. When finished i took it and happily started to eat. I took the first spoonful and my face twisted from happy to disgusted. those were nastiest spaghettio's i've ever tasted in my life. not at any moment did i recall spaghettios tasting the way these did. i look at the hot dog slices and slowly picked them all out cause they made the meal worse then better. 

Stanford Thompson Visits SLA!

Founder of Tune-Up Philly and world-renown trumpeter Stanford Thompson came to SLA on Tuesday, March 1st to jam with the SLA musicians and talk about Tune-Up Philly. Rough Cut Productions will have a much better video of the experience soon, but until then, please enjoy Mr. Lehmann's attempt to share the visit.

Intense AM Thoughts...

​i went to sleep way to early which threw off my sleeping pattern & the reason I'm up this time instead of cozy in the bed sleep. It actually is a good thing since I didn't do any homework so need i'm doing homework with tea. I'm excited about this tea its amazing like liquid goodness "peppermint tea" is a must have. I'm still waiting for Wagner to reply back which is so obnoxious come on people. There's nothing on tv at this time except porn which sucks so I guess music channel here I come. I finally saw the movie "Love & other Drugs" it came  OnDemand its an extremely good movie a little too much at times but good nonetheless. Well I'm gonna finish up my homework & then hopefully I'll get some more sleep.

"Poetry Slam!" : Advertisements that Objectify Women

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It Takes One to Know One

​Darling, 
Throughout your teenage years what have you broken?
A few bones?
Maybe even a few hearts?
NO! That's Not All.
You have cracked your mothers soul like 
the spine
of
a
new
book
And you continue to pose for this foolishness as you witness her blood pour 
And as the pain in the veins of her eyes remain
Reflect on the messages you send to men
Is this becoming a trend?
What has Gotten into Us Young Women?

Sincerely,
Been There Done That
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​Continence: Just Do It®

Your continence has constantly verbalized (Just Do It)
But for what? (Just Do It)
For many males to be mesmerized by her thighs 
Or possibly what lies in between them (Just Do It)
You see she knows the way it will be portrayed (Jus Do It)
But it doesn't matter because she is still getting payed (Just Do It) 
And maybe after this she'll even get laid
But the negative image of her will never fade

But...She is still afraid (Just Do It)
She knows it's wrong
The pitchfork of the devil is dragging her along
It's her choice to move on
And leave all these bad spirits alone

My purpose for all of this is to poetically open your eyes 

to realize 

that these marketing guys 

are not on our side

You see we women are queens 

Not only are we queens but we are also 

Human Beings 

This sexual curse has been rehearsed and rehearsed and it hurts our youth

And our youth is our future

And we shall leave this in the past

Objectification has gone on for far too long 

Let us women stand up and fight for our rights 

For we are not just a body that pleases the sight 

Let us tear down ads where women are posing preposterously 

and standing slutty 

And reshape the world and re-sculpt the minds of our youth  to once again 

cherish the female flesh 

and perish the thought of 

you

you 

and 

you,

not all being beautiful. You see these ads are ugly, what I see in me and think of WE

does not equal what these ads portray. 

These degrading ads have received debatable responses like

"Oh it's not that bad" or

"Where is your sense of humor?"

Well I say there is a line between humorous and disrespectful. 

These ads have crossed the line and have been throughout history for a long time.


How dare you be so mean

and have the audacity to degrade a queen. 

                                                                                                                                   

  • Why did you choose this topic?
  • Why did you choose this type of presentation format?
  • Where did you run into trouble with the project? 
  • What went well with this project?
  • If you had it to do over, what would you change about your decisions or your process?
  • What did you learn?

    I choose this topic because I see degrading advertisements on television, on paper, billboards, etc. and take offense to the brutal material coming from the product. I felt that poetry has a way with words that could get inside people and "grind them up" so the feeling that the marketers should've had when they were brainstorming about advertisements and came up with offensive materials such a the ads above. Out of the sample I collected in my research, these are the subdued versions out of all of the example ads I found. The others were entirely too graphic to use for a project for school. I didn't have much trouble with this project . I actually enjoyed it; my heart was in it. The fact that I found so many ads helped with this project. I wish I could've written a poem for each one I found. If I had more time I would do so. I learned how cold hearted some people are with this project and that a "sense of humor" can be rather offensive to a certain group of people.