In every young girl’s life there is the need to find out who one is, what/who does one want to be, to be accepted, wanted, and to to strive one’s best abilities. In urban communities, (especially ones that are widely populated with minorities) those important needs encouraged aren’t always steered in the right direction of a prosperous future. Acknowledging this economic error, I decided to provide my community an act of community service that helps decreases this issue for my senior capstone. As a young girl, I myself was in need of assistance of those mental necessities. I greatly lacked social and athletic skills. Then, I was directed to WINS (Women In Naturals Sciences) an after school/summer enrichment program that promotes the educational value in the sciences (especially women in the sciences) and offers a large sum of professional and development key skills as well as trips needed for the professional fields (interviews, college tours, internships.. exc.) which changed me for the better. To give back I became the manager’s, Ms. Betsy Payne and the coordinator’s Ms. Kimberly Godfrey assistance in the nomination process for the upcoming girl’s willing to participate in this program, in workshops for the current girls in WINS, and the Academy of Natural Sciences’s assistance in being a WINS explainer in their exhibit Outside-In. My initial topic for this project was “Making a Difference” to show that the little good deeds done for someone else can create a huge impact for the community.

• "WINS (Women in Natural Sciences)." Drexel University -. Pat Warner, n.d. Web. 29 Jan. 2015. <http://www.ansp.org/education/programs/wins/>.

This source is very reliable and gives the viewer a general background information as to what the program WINS is essentially about. There are also guidelines as to what steps can or should be taken for young's wanting to be involved in the program and for faculty/staff teachers who would like to nominate young impressive girls. This sources will be very handy when I put my presentation together for me to explain to my audience what WINS is and how it was founded, what was it’s purpose, opinions from other girls there, how it branched out, and how it looks for it’s scouts.

• "Women in Natural Sciences." Women in Natural Sciences. College of Natural Sciences, n.d. Web. 29 Jan. 2015. <https://cns.utexas.edu/wins>.

In this source this is a program that has the exact name as wins, initial purpose, and abstract. The only difference is that this version of Wins is a college level step up. This program in Texas is exclusively for students who are in the University of Texas at Austin College of Natural Sciences. But other than that the two are very similar. It offers a lot of outreach and volunteer opportunities that students will gain benefits with while being in the program. In my capstone I would use this to compare and explain in depth the importance of a program like WINS.

• WINS 30th Anniversary. Perf. Betsy Payne. WINS 30th Anniversary. Academy of Natural Sciences, 20 Sept. 2012. Web. 29 Jan. 2014. <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5-3M_md_7Lc>.

This is a youtube video that is mostly about the WINS 30th anniversary in being of strong existence. In this video girls who have graduated from WINS along with the manager and coordinator of the program explain about their experiences and the impact that WINS has had on their lives. They also explain about the class trips, and science based workshops that go on in the program. In my capstone it would be great to show a piece of this video because my big sister in the program actually speaks on her experiences in WINS and how it basically helped her succeed throughout her high school career.

• "WINS." Women in Natural Sciences. N.p., n.d. Web. 29 Jan. 2015. <http://www.natsci.colostate.edu/faculty-staff/women-in-natural-sciences/>.

This would be a following up example of the WINS program in Texas. This also another WINS program but it is in Colorado State University; College of Natural Sciences. This webpage states their goal in promoting women in the field of natural sciences by providing them with a large amount of educational opportunities that involve networking, mentoring and much more. I could speak on how we are even more lucky because of lot of these programs that are similar to the WINS in Philly are college based and only for college students in that particular college, while the wins in philly targets rising female freshman high school girls that are within the Philadelphia school district instead. Helping the generation at a young age.

• "Afterschool Alliance :: The Importance of Afterschool and Summer Learning Programs in African-American and Latino Communities (2013)." Afterschool Alliance :: The Importance of Afterschool and Summer Learning Programs in African-American and Latino Communities (2013). N.p., July 2013. Web. 28 Jan. 2015. <http://www.afterschoolalliance.org/issue_59_African-American_and_Latino_Communities.cfm>.

This is a well written essay on the importance and massive effect of after school programs on minorities today. I would use this the back up my argument in why WINS is important and why I think I chose my capstone to be aiding them in getting more girls to apply for the program. I choose my capstone to be solely based on helping my mentors in keeping a strong foundation of the program not only because of how it impacted my life but also because of how its services will and can impact hundreds of other lives in the philadelphia area.

• "Women In Natural Sciences." YouTube. YouTube, 28 Mar. 2012. Web. 29 Jan. 2015. <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bii4u-P1BO4>.

This is a video on youtube on a student's perspective of what wins is. The video is mostly a lot of pictures, but in each picture the girls in it are smiling, touching animals, pipetting, enjoying themselves, and each others company. There is not one picture where there is only one girl in it. This shows more of the sisterhood and closeness that comes with WINS. You’ll receive good friends that you’ll learn to love and keep for a very long time. It’s more than just an after school program, it’s a never ending cycle of sisterhood among the girls.

• Zielinski, Sarah. "Ten Historic Female Scientists You Should Know."Smithsonian. Smithsonian, 09 Sept. 2012. Web. 29 Jan. 2015. <http://www.smithsonianmag.com/science-nature/ten-historic-female-scientists-you-should-know-84028788/?no-ist>.

This is a website on some basic information and research on the top ten female scientist that changed the course of history. During one of the series of classes and workshops given in the program Wins there is a class solely based on female scientist whose great contribution to science has led us to the discoveries we are well known with today. It is pushed on us to know these things because back in the day women were shunned on wanting a similar education that was given to men and after the long fight for such a change to be made, our reputation of adding on to science must not be stopped. Though it may seem like we are all average, each and every one of us has the potential and intelligence to do something similar as to what these great women in history did.  

• "The Untapped Potential of Young Women in Natural Sciences."TreeHugger. N.p., 16 June 2014. Web. 29 Jan. 2015. <http://www.treehugger.com/green-jobs/untapped-potential-young-women-natural-sciences.html>.

This website is talking about there is a need and demand for more women to actively participate and man a career in the STEM fields. It’s not just an issue in America, it’s an issue everywhere which is why this science based program wins is contributing economically. Young ladies that are willing to pursue a career in the stem field in WINS are in the win for the money. A job for them in that field will be ensured for them in the future for it is needed. With young ladies going into those fields and WINS providing them with enough support to be successful will help increase those numbers in which more females are needed in the careers in the stem field.

• N.p., n.d. Web. 29 Jan. 2015. <http://wins.ethz.ch/about.html>.

Like the other examples this is also another wins program located somewhere else. This one is for females of a much higher educational level. It is offered the Phd students and scientific staff. This is one is much more intense. Some of their events involve scientist flying from across the world from a wide range of industries and doing conventions to learn from one another. It is said that it doesn’t even have to be all about work, conversations can range to personal aspects of life as well. Their purpose is to connect women of scientific backgrounds and career experience socially and academically to make an even huger impact.

• Dacey, Jessica. "Science Is Still a Final Frontier for Women." N.p., n.d. Web. 29 Jan. 2015.<http://www.swissinfo.ch/eng/science-is-still-a-final-frontier-for-women/32572436>.

In this article the author writes how science is just another subject in class that ladies have yet to master. Even though there has been may great women in history who have contributed profoundly to the field leading into new discoveries and innovations, there is still more to be done. Science is a never ending and constantly new subject everyday and it is up to us to keep up to speed with it and stay on the ball to conquer it. She explains that women have to be the ones to led and help situate and make sense of things that are continuing to grow more complex in this field.

These were her final seconds. Her last chance. All she has to do is accept it and help me out. I need her to work with me and come back. She could hear me, right? She has a pulse, she just needs to wake up.

"Mom! Mom, its me your son Mason! Please, wake up mom! I need you..."

Burying my face into the sundress she wore I cried. I cried because I prepped myself for this moment and I failed. She had been sick for a year and I knew her death would come soon. But, now I couldn't bare the thought of actually losing her. I worked so hard in fighting fate, when I should have just accepted and faced it. She was gone and not even the artificial heart and animare cells could keep her alive.

I wiped away my tears and walked over to the monitor. As usual everything looked fine and the monitor showed signs of a pulse, but she didn't move an inch.

“I guess you can’t beat death, huh mom?”

Silence was her reply. I slowly pressed the off button on the monitor and sat next to her in silence. I closed my eyes and rested my head by her arms. Memories of her rocking me to bed when I was young faded into my mind. Songs that she sang to to me with her soft whistle like voice came to mind and soon the tune hummed through my lips. Like it was happening all over again. Doing this my heart beat slowly and I regained some peace. I felt a cool rush to wind blow in from the only small window in my mother’s room, but I ignored the goosebumps that crept onto my skin and stayed comfortable in my mother’s possession. Since this would be the last time. But the suddenly I felt small faint movements within the bed. Knowing how my mind can play tricks on me I ignored it. Assuring myself that it was a figment of my imagination. But, then pokes of  dry crusty fingertips prickled along side of my arm and then my hair. I lifted my hair quickly as possible in shocked of what could be happening.

“Mom!” I shouted to her as I looked into her deep brown hazel eyes hoping she'll reply like “My baby or pudding,”

and a bright chocolate smile would appear upon her face. But all I got from her was

“Who’s Mason? And why do you keep calling me mom?”

Stunned by this reply I sat there and watched as she slowly sat up, caressing her head in her withered hands.

“She wants to see you now. She’s in room 306.”  Doctor Heath said with sorrowful and heavy eyes.

“Thanks.” I replied. I didn’t know what else I could say. Walking down the hospital halls, each step I took felt heavier to the point where I felt like I couldn’t lift my feet anymore. So I stopped, turned to my left and saw a family surrounded by an old women who appeared to be smiling at me. Her bright smile seemed to bounce off the chrome walls of her room and touched on me. I was smiling too. But once her smile had a ripple effect on me, her heartbeat had slowly left her and it was announced to all her family members as soon as she slowly closed her eyes with the monitor making that dreadful sound and that beautiful smile still on her face. Hoping none of her family members saw me staring, I quickly turned aways and began to walk again forget about the illusion of my heavy feet. Two rooms away and I heard urgent worried voices. No. One voice. It was Doctor Heath's voice and he was talking to someone I had never seen in the hospital and usually never forget a face. But he look familiar. For some reason I stopped to eavesdrop on their conversation.

“Is it true? Can it really bring back the de--” Doctor Heath said

“Shhh.. there’s cameras.” said the other guy. Then, he took Doctor Heath's arm and pulled him aside to a corner where a camera wasn’t monitoring.

“Listen, it took 3 -4 days but so far the ape has responded to the animare cells and  has a pulse. We need to do further research on how he responds to our test of fully ---” said the man before he heard my almost crushing a gum wrapper. Stupid robotic janitors must have missed a spot. Before he could move to see where I saw I made it to my mothers room. She was staring at the ceiling holding onto yellow sunflowers with a goofy smile on her face.

“Mom? What are you doing?” I chuckled,

“Oh hi my darling. I was practicing my pose for my funeral. With the flowers or without? What do you think?”

Mother always did have a way with serious situations. She liked to think of the bright side of even the worst case scenarios.

“I think that you have plenty of other important things to worry about then the pose you make when you're dead. Besides it wouldn't exactly be up to you, it would be up to the people who prepare you.” I’d always be the one to bring her back to reality.

“Not if I write it in my will,” she argued

“Oh mother,” I chuckled as I sat beside her and held her hand. “I love you.”

With her free hand against my cheek, “I love you too sweetheart,”

“Alright, how is my favorite patient doing?” interrupted Doctor Heath,

“You should know,” I replied back. Mother squeezed my hand as a hint to be nice. Doctor Heath always spoke nicely and respectfully but I had a bad feeling in the pit of my stomach about him. To me at least he always showed signs of being robotic. As if he had no true feelings and did what he was ‘programed’ to do.

“Well we all know. Her heart is getting weaker and bigger by the second and her body isn’t strong enough to continue on with the state that she is in. What’s even worse that we’re seeing is that the chambers are having trouble filling with blood. So what we can do now is simply hope for the best and pray.“ he said, as if he ever prayed.

Mother looked away at what he said, trying to fight back tears. His phone rang before I could insult him on his incompetence, once he saw the caller he rushed to get out and said

"I need to take this. I’ll be back with your blood test results."

While rushing out the door a piece of paper that loosely hung outside of his back pocket fell to the ground. I picked it up and opened it. While going back to the seat next to my mother and caressing her back with on hand I read what was in there paper in another. It was the researchers inquiry.

'DNA animare cells give life' under the heading was a picture of an ape. So that was what Mr. Heath and that strange man was talking about.

“Mason,” startled by this I hid the paper.

“Yes mom,”

“Can you do me favor?”

“Of course mother,”

“Take this,” she pulled out an envelope and handed it to me.

“Mom-”

“Take it,” She said interrupting me. “One day you’ll need it. And one more thing?”

“Anything,” I looked into her eyes.

“Can you remember me and tell your kids stories about when I die?”

“Mom, you can never be forgotten and thats a promise and I’ll make sure your grand babies don’t forget about you either.” I gave her a smile

She chuckled.

“Little tiny Mason’s running around,” she said as she closed her eyes and went to sleep.

As much as I wanted to stay as close to my mother as possible I had to find out more about those cells. Since they could possible help her. Although the thought of putting random cells into my mother’s body sounded creepy and untrusting with her being in her condition I had nothing left. She was going to leave me soon and we both knew it. But with these cells she could possible could stay just a little bit longer.  I went to the basement to find the old macbook pro my father gave to my mother when they were dating. I always tried to avoid looking at this thing. It was dusty and had a couple cracks but it was the memory of my father. He liked to do things the old-fashioned way. Inside of the front screen I see sticky notes covering everything, but the mid-center. No one ever touched his laptop because well it reminded us too much about him and his death almost destroyed my mother. After he left I put it in the basement so she wouldn’t have to remember. No one ever knew his password but my mother and I. My father was old, but he was smart. His password was a series of numbers and letters. I was surprised I remembered it all. As soon as I opened it there was a typed letter on display.

‘Dear Mason,

My darling Mason. If you are reading this then you are on the right track and your father and I have taught you well. In the envelope I should have already given you, there is a key. Your father, as smart as he is has been saving up since the day I told him I was pregnant. Now darling don’t get too excited but this money is for you to continue your studies in college. The key opens a safe that is in the back on the closet where we use to put all of our old shoes. If you pick up some of those old shoes and feel your way through you’ll feel a hole. That hole is really an opening to a small door. Open it. Once you do, you’ll find the safe. In that safe there should be about 3 million dollars. I know you’ll put it to good use. You father and I raised you beautifully. Baby boy, if and when you read this I should be in the hospital because you know my condition doesn’t allow me to live long. Please don’t cry or even feel sorrow. God will build a way for you and for me. I shall meet you father once again and we’ll be watching over waiting for you to join us. Please live a long and fulfilled live and continue to make us proud my love. I know you will do and discover brilliant things just like your father. If only he could see was wonderfully you have grown into an eighteen year old man. Our little Mason, a man. I love you and I know with all my heart your father does too. Bye now my darling.’

I looked inside of the envelope and it was a key. In the key was engraved my father’s password. That probably was the hint from my mom. 3 million dollars? Why save it when she could have used it to get new organs or even better treatment? As tempted as I was to take the money and rush to the hospital so they could help I knew it’d be too late and my mother wouldn’t accept it. For her condition a heart-lung transplant for her would be almost one fourth of that sum. So I continued on with my search about the animare cells. My father use to work for NASA and I’d always be around whenever he did his research. I use to always be so fascinated about how he conducted his experiments. I started by searching anything about animare cell in different search engines. I saw many articles that popped up like the one that Doctor Heath dropped. But they all said the same thing and I needed more than what those articles covered. Then, I started reading my father’s stickies around the laptop. One that really caught my eye. “DNA cells reanimate brain?” I quickly went to the search bar of the macbook and typed in “cells”. Many different searches came up. But I chose the one that said ‘DNA Cells’. In that was a word document. In that document seemed to be a journal in which my father wrote all of his thoughts down about what he knew about cells reanimating the brain. It would be a serum filled with micro highly advanced brain cells, blood cells and organisms that stimulates the human brain and heart. It turns out my father was the one trying to create this new technology, but because he died he was unable to finish it. But, who did? My father only had only one partner in NASA that he actually trusted. Rubert. Rubert was his high school buddy that my father entered into NASA with. My father always thought it to be  blessing that they both go in. I call it a conspiracy. I could have sworn I saw Rupert trying to make a move on my mother and since that day I never trusted the man. He could have been the one to take credit for my dad’s work and have tried to finish the process my dad started. I’d believe it and I’d find a way to make hims pay for it too. No wonder Rupert came by the house asking for my father’s laptop. It’s a good thing I lied about not having it. There was another sticky note that said “DNA cells prt 2…” I searched it up and found another file but this one happened to be cut off. The basement was my dad’s own personal laboratory. According to the journal he had created his own serum and wanted to try it on a dead animal out on the street before trashbots got to it. I guess he never got the chance. It says that he placed the serum in the mini fridge to preserve it. There was two.

The next day mother wanted to be let got from the hospitals care. She knew that she wouldn’t survive so she wanted to spend her last days home. I didn’t mind. I told her everything that I found and my plans. I still didn’t get the chance to look at the 3 million dollars, but she knew I’d find it and find out about father’s old plans. She too went snooping around his laptop. Though she didn’t want me to try it on her.  I tried to respect her decisions but she didn’t try to respect or understand how much I needed her by my side. She was all I had left, yet she still believed I could make it without her. I couldn't see that happening so I continued on with my research. Every since I got a job mother made me a bank account to manage my own money in my own way. That afternoon I took 1.5 million dollars from the safe and put it into my bank account. Then I spent the rest of the day with her. I cooked for her, laughed with her, and watched movies with her, lying that I finished all my work in school just so I could spend her last moments with me. Together. Just like how it use to be. That night when she went to sleep coughing I tucked her into bed and gave her a kiss goodnight. Then, I went online to amazone in search of the perfect artificial heart and surgobot to perform on mother. WIth the right amount of in the year 2043 you can find just about anything. Once I found right functioning heart with mother’s blood type, a 4 starred surgobot, and asked for express shipping the total cost rounded up to about 1.5 million. This is my mother’s life on the line here. I pressed accept without a doubt in my mind. I went to bed and looked at the article that I saw come out of Dr. Heath’s pocket. I’ve read the article a million times now at school, but for some reason I wanted to read it again.

The next morning mother grew even more ill. Each time she continued to cough blood would usually be the product of it. Whenever I tried to call an ambulance for her she’d just stop me and say “No. Just hold me hand.” And so I did. But I couldn’t bare to see her in this condition. I want to remember her as they way we were yesterday. Beautiful and happy. Now she is weak and exhausted. I closed my eyes and prayed for God to find another way for her. But it didn’t seemed to be working. She just just kept coughing out blood. When she finally stopped she looked me in my eyes and said

“You always did look just like your father. My darling, remember that I love you,”

My first tears in all of this began to fall from my eyes because I knew these would be her final moments alive. Thought my plan could work it there was still that chance that it wouldn’t and it crushed my soul to lose her.

“I love you too mamma,”

“Forever and ever?” she said hoarsely

“Forever and ever,” I replied

Then she closed eyes to what seemed like she fell asleep, but she lost her grasp in my hand. I knew she was gone.  I sat there in silence and a minute later the doorbell rang. I went downstair from her room to get it and saw it was a man with a clipboard, a high definition robot holding a large package.

“Are you Mason Smith?” he said looking up from the clipboard.

“Yes,” I said.

“Sign here,” he said as he handed me the clipboard to sign. I signed it and handed it back to him.

“Here is the manual for the surgobot. He is already programed as you asked and ready to perform. That is the organ,”

“Thanks,” I told him.

“Here’s the number of the seller if you need any help. You have a good day sir,” he said as he walked away.

“Alright. Let’s get to work surgobot,”

“Surgobot 5000 is ready to go,”

“Surgobot carefully take the box all the way upstairs and then go to the first room to your right. Wait for me there,”

Then surgobot proceeded up the stairs. I ran straight to the basement and took one of the serum. My father wrote that too much could possible cause brain damage. I went back upstairs to my mother’s room and found surgobot standing there, waiting.

“Surgobot,”

“Yes master,” it responded

“Please. Do as you were programed to my mother,” breathlessly I pointed to my mother’s dead body and surgobot got to work. I watched it all. I sat down and watched as surgobot 5000 opened up his chest and display of all different types of surgery utensils came out on a tray and took some things from the package and hooked my mother to a monitor. I watched as surgobot cut open my mother’s chest, took out her weak and enlarged heart, put back in the heart I bought, and sew her back up. All the while, all I thought about was my father. I thought about what was he planning to do with this serum. Did he already know about mom’s condition before she even did? Why did he pursue to do such a thing? Maybe , it was because we worked in NASA and he mind just wondered to those things. Maybe he just wanted to discover or create something new. Maybe he knew something. I was wondered and could never figured out what was would go on in my father’s mind, but my mother could. It was like she was a psychic. Which is probably why he loved her so much. Mother understood father like no other. Mother understood me also. I wonder if she knew what I’d be doing. Oh God, please let this work. I can’t loose all I have, not now when I need it the most.

“Master?” surgobot said interrupting my thoughts.

“Yes,” I replied. Within 5 hours of constant nail biting and piercing thoughts rattling in and out of my head surgobot 5000 was finished.

“I am finished what I was programed to do. Is there anything else you would like me to do master?”

“No. Thank you surgobot,”

“Have I done a good job?”

“Yes, you may now go to sleep if you please.”

“Thank you master,”

Surgobot found a corner and put himself to sleep. The monitor now had a beating sound which meant a pulse, but she needed more than just that. she needed the serum. I opened up the top and poured the serum into her mouth and watched as it went down her mouth. Then, I sat down beside her and waited.

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Una mujer presuntamente condujo una camioneta hacia el mar con sus hijos dentro

Este artículo es sobre una madre quien intentó matar a sus hijos. Allí es un video donde la camioneta en el mar con niños en lo. Allí fue tres hijos.  Ellos tenemos un diez, nueve, y tres años. Esto sucedió Carolina del Sur en la aguas de Daytona Beach. El vídeo muestra los rescatistas lleva a dos de los niños a tierra. La artículo dije “De acuerdo a testigos, la madre parecía estar desorientada y caminaba lejos del vehículo mientras su hijo más pequeño aún permanecía dentro.” ¿Pero por qué caminó lejos desde sus hijos? Ella es no una madre. Una madre real que no dejar a sus niños para nada. El realmente triste parte es que la artculo el hijos dicen los  rescatista que “nuestra mamá intenta matarnos, por favor ayúdennos”. Ellos saben qué fue estaba pasando. Yo espero que los niños va a bien muy pronto.  Yo espero ellos encontraron una familia mejor y viven mejor con su madre inmadura. Ellos que no le merecen una madre gusta que. Ellos merecen mucho mejor eso eso. El artículo fue muy tristemente leer.  El artículo me hizo sentir muy triste. ¿Me pregunto dónde está su padre? Quizás él  podría haber ayudado a los niños.

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"Una Mujer Presuntamente Condujo Una Camioneta Hacia El Mar Con Sus Hijos Dentro." CNN En Espaol Ultimas Noticias De Estados Unidos Latinoamrica Y El Mundo Opinin Y Videos RSS. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 Mar. 2014. <http://cnnespanol.cnn.com/2014/03/05/una-mujer-presuntamente-condujo-una-camioneta-hacia-el-mar-con-sus-hijos-dentro/>.

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Senorita Manuel

Estudiante que demandó a sus padres por apoyo financiero pierde “primer round”

Este artículo es sobre un estudiante que demandó a sus padres por no pagar su Universidad. En la primera ronda de la caja de corte, ella perdió.  Hay dos partes de la historia. La mujer, Rachel Canning dije que sus padres la echó de su casa y dejó de pagar su colegiatura. Su padres dije que ella dejó la casa porque quiso ser libre. El juez fue más del lado de sus padres. Pero ella dijo “He estado sujeta a un serio abuso físico y verbal por parte de mi madre y mi padre. No estoy saliendo por mi propia voluntad de una situación razonable en casa para tomar mis propias decisiones. Tuve que irme para ponerle fin al abuso.” ayudar ella mismo. Entonces sus padres dijeron Rachel fue nunca se obligó a irse. Ellos dijeron “Siempre fuimos su grupo de apoyo; la animábamos y la defendíamos cuando estaba en problemas ella misma decidió irse para que pudiera vivir su vida sin supervisión de los padres y sin reglas".  En el caso allí era mucha discusión en dos partes pero tristemente en la final el juez Bogaard negó ella solicitud del pago de la colegiatura por ella universidad. No sé a quién creer pero no estudiante sería demandar al azar sus padres. Eso es raro.

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"Estudiante Que Demandó a Sus Padres Por Apoyo Financiero Pierde "primer Round""CNN En Espaol Ultimas Noticias De Estados Unidos Latinoamrica Y El Mundo Opinin Y Videos RSS. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 Mar. 2014. <http://cnnespanol.cnn.com/2014/03/05/estudiante-que-demando-a-sus-padres-por-apoyo-financiero-pierde-primer-round/>.

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Senorita Manuel

Video de Justin Bieber en la cárcel será difundido con sus partes íntimas borrosas

Este artículo es sobre un video de Justin Bieber en prision que será pronto.  El artículo dije “Luego el video será entregado a CNN y otras agencias de noticias esta semana bajo la ley de grabaciones abiertas de Florida, ordenó un juez de Miami este martes.” Esto me hace pensar. Cuando este video se convierte en público mucha gente va a verla. Me pregunto si justin es violenta, triste, feliz, preocupada o loco en la cárcel.  Ahora, yo quiero ver el video. El artículo dije “Esto es parte de varias horas de video grabadas por las cámaras de vigilancia dentro de la prisión del Departamento de Policía de Miami Beach, en donde Bieber fue ingresado después de su arresto por manejar bajo el efecto de la marihuana y el alcohol, el pasado 23 de enero.”  También la artículo dije hay partes del video donde Justin es aparece orinando, haciendo lagartijas en una celda de la prisión, y más fotos de Justin in la prisión. Que Justin hizo para obtener en la prisión es mal. Él se merece lo que tiene. Pero puesto que tiene mucho dinero, lo probablemente no fue tan malo en comparación con un persona que tiene no dinero.  Yo espero yo ver la video.

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"Video De Justin Bieber En La Cárcel Será Difundido Con Sus Partes íntimas Borrosas."CNN En Espaol Ultimas Noticias De Estados Unidos Latinoamrica Y El Mundo Opinin Y Videos RSS. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 Mar. 2014. <http://cnnespanol.cnn.com/2014/03/05/video-de-justin-bieber-en-la-carcel-sera-difundido-con-sus-partes-intimas-borrosas/>.

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Senorita Manuel

Las cataratas del Niágara, congeladas por el vórtice polar

Este artículo es sobre las cataratas del Niágara congeladas ser por el vórtice polar. Las cataratas del Niágara es un sito bonita. Me encantaría visitar. Es que se supone que es un experiencia asombrosa. Ahora que algunos de lo es de congelado personas como turista cree que sus hermosas. Incluso la artículo dije “Los turistas aprovecharon para disfrutar del inusual paisaje, mientras que millones de personas en Estados Unidos empiezan a evaluar los daños que dejó el paso del temporal.” Yo creo que le es extraño, que pasa a Las cataratas del Niágara. Yo espero que esta no significa nada malo. Las cataratas del Niágara es un significativa y preciosa lugar. Yo espero la parte congelada se funde en el verano o antes.  En el articulo por encima de la escritura hay un video con muchas fotos de las cataratas del Niágara congelada. En el video hay un hombre hablando sobre lo. El artículo también dije “Las bajas temperaturas de estos días no se habían sentido en Norteamérica desde la década de 1990, y hacía 72 que no bajaban tanto en el Niágara, según registros meteorológicos,”  Esto podría ser algo malo después de todo. No estoy seguro de lo que es pero sé que lo es no todos los buenos.

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"Las Cataratas Del Niágara, Congeladas Por El Vórtice Polar." CNN En Espaol Ultimas Noticias De Estados Unidos Latinoamrica Y El Mundo Opinin Y Videos RSS. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 Mar. 2014. <http://cnnespanol.cnn.com/2014/01/09/las-cataratas-del-niagara-congeladas-por-el-vortice-polar/>.

Betty Louis Q3

Senorita Manuel

Al menos 11 muertos en Indonesia tras la erupción de un volcán

Este artículo es sobre un erupción de un volcán en Indonesia. Durante este erupción once personas eran muertos. Lo es muy malo. El artículo dice “El volcán arrojó columnas 2.000 metros de altura de ceniza y nubes de ceniza caliente bajaron por su ladera arrasando todo lo que encontraban”. Yo sería tan asustada si que ocurriera a mí. Yo no seria sé qué hacer. La familias de el personas que murieron, yo espero es buen. Yo lloraría por horas si un miembro de mi familia murió. Quizá días si un miembro de mi familia es muy muy cerca a mí corazón. El artículo dije que los personas once se vieron afectadas por las nubes de ceniza y tristemente mató instantáneamente a. “El volcán arrojó columnas 2.000 metros de altura de ceniza y nubes de ceniza caliente bajaron por su ladera arrasando todo lo que encontraban, dijo Nugroho.” dije el articulo. 2.000 metros es sobre uno milla. Que es es un lote de terreno para cubrir.  Yo espero el personas de Indonesia son capaces de reparar el daño y se mudaron lejos de el volcán. viven cerca de un volcán es muy peligroso Incluso si no se ha surgió en los años.

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Senorita Manuel

Una mujer de 81 años es detenida por alimentar osos en su patio en EEUU

Este artículo es sobre un mujer quien fue  alimentar osos en su patio. Allí fue osos viniendo en su patio. Pero que su fue hacer fue no bueno por que lo es contra la ley. El estado tiene que ley porque el más te importa para la vida silvestre menos tienen miedos de los seres humanos. Si ellos no tengas miedo entonces ellos va a convertirse en demasiado cómodo. La mujer fue advertido antes pero ella no escuchar. A pesar de que el autoridades trató de advertir su, ella Aún alimenta el osos porque “La mujer pensó que los osos se morirían de hambre sin ella. Ella no quería aceptar el hecho de que estarán bien sin ella”. Aunque ella fue detenida la artículo dice que ella debe ser liberada, dijeron, porque su esposo está muriendo de cáncer y ella es la única que lo cuida. Yo espero el esposa de la mujer es se pone mejor. Cuando yo leí este artículo me pareció la mujer era cuidando. Pero quizás la autoridades era correcto. La artículo dice “ Ella los alimentó en gran cantidad, de 17 a 18 platos de alimento de perro en algunas ocasiones. Los osos amaban la comida y continuaron regresando.” Yo espero ella comprende que ella hacer.

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Senorita Manuel

Brad Pitt celebra su cumpleaños número 50

Este artículo es sobre el cumpleanos de Brad Pitt. Brad Pitt es un actor , productor, activista y hombre de familia. Cumpleaños de Brad Pitt fue ayer. Él actuado en muchas películas. Ahora, Brad Pitt tiene cincuenta años. Brad Pitt todavía es muy guapo. Como un muchacho quien tiene cincuenta años, Brad Pitt no se ve viejo. En la articulo Brad pitt dije “Tengo un montón de amigos cercanos, a mi familia, y no he visto que la vida pueda ser más feliz”. También, en el artículo Brad Pitt dice que él es muy feliz que visto su cumpleaños. Yo DESEO brad pitt fue mi esposa. Angelina Jolie es muy fortunatamente. En la artículo hay fotos de Brad Pitt dede cuando él fue realmente joven a ahora. En los fotos Brad Pitt siempre se ve bien. A pesar de su edad es vieja su cara mira lo mismo. El artículo dice que Brad Pitt ‘solo mejora con la edad’ y estoy de acuerdo. ¿Me pregunto, cuántos anos tienes Angelina Jolie? ¿También, me pregunto, cuántos años tienes su niños? Yo espero que ellos vivan muchos años más. ¿Por que es Brad Pitt tan atractivo? Yo espero mi esposa futuro es guapo y edades como él.

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"Brad Pitt Celebra Su Cumpleaños Número 50." CNN En Espaol Ultimas Noticias De Estados Unidos Latinoamrica Y El Mundo Opinin Y Videos RSS. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Dec. 2013. <http://cnnespanol.cnn.com/2013/12/18/brad-pitt-celebra-su-cumpleanos-numero-50/>.

Este artículo es sobre un niño quien escribe un letra a Santa Claus pidiendo por los niños en la escuela parar molestando su hermana. El artículo es muy mal. El niño nombre es Ryan y Ryan es muy triste para sus hermana porque los niños hablan sobre su peso. Ellos dijeron en elartículoo "Amber, (hermana de Ryan) padece trastorno por déficit de atención con hiperactividad y otros trastornos mentales y de humor, nunca mencionó el acoso". Ryan y su hermana son solo en el tercer grado. Ryan escribió (en su letra a Santa Claus) “Recé para que dejaran de hacerlo, pero Dios está ocupado y necesita tu ayuda”. Es muy malo que tenía que pasar por que. La intimidación debe detener! Estoy muy feliz que este problema es en un artículo para personas ver. Intimidación es una problema que necesitas ser resuelto!  Lo muy mal para el comunidad especialmente la niños. El acoso puede llevar a un montón de cosas horribles y gente horrible. Yo era acosado una vez, y fue la peor época de mi vida. No quiero que nadie sienta así. A pesar de que algunas partes estaban tristes me gustó este artículo. Yo espero que sean bien.

1) What is orientalism?

the belief of rumors, unintentional racism, ignorance western mentality of anyone who doesn’t follow the western ways are alien.

2) how do we avoid prentalist?

“All things appear and disappear because of the concurrence of causes and conditions. Nothing ever exists entirely alone, everything is in relation to everything else.” - Buddha

After all that I have learned from Buddhism some of their principles that align most with my values are that (referring to the quote) everything is in relation to everything else. I feel like this is saying that everything has some value, some worth, and is there to be here for a reason and that is my personal belief. In the beginning it talks about how everything both appears and disappears for a certain amount of time. Everything has its place in the world and their own amount of time that is sent in the world, which is also what I believe in.

Quotes:

“ There’s silence in our hearts because there’s inexpressive grief and lack of information so the only thing that we don is stream naturally toward a church a mace of spiritual growth”

“I think religion helps us to deal with what we don't understand, with what overwhelms us, with what makes life hard. It helps us gain an another”

“Alongside the prayers, there were angry calls for vengeance”

“Its very very important that we ourselves not become tragically victimized by this in a way that would turn us into any kind of vengeance mob.”

“I think religion helps us to deal with what we don't understand, with what overwhelms us, with what makes life hard. It helps us gain an anchor” A quote that I was able to grab and collect in my journal entry #13 along with other very insightful quotes and my reactions to them. In the religion unit that was taught in history class I realized that religion can either unite us or separate us. Journal entry #13 sort of shows the positive side of religion but in journal entry #9  it shows a bit of the opposite. It talks about orientalism and how much ignorance it brings. Religion seems to be the backbone or foundation that some people tend to fall back on when they have nothing else. In that there can and will come unity and acceptance with oneself and others. But then there are some other people who tend to go bit extreme to the point where other people’s lives can be in danger. Journal entry #9 is an example for orientalism is still out there today. But that doesn't mean we can't change it. I have come to analyze at many different angles that religion can be both good and bad but it is mostly up to the people and how they choose to take it to decide.