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Elona Myftaraj Capstone
Election Country Project
For this project we were assigned a country in order to learn about their election process for electing their president, and find someone in that country to ask questions to a second person in the country about the presidential elections. The ones we contact in the country could be anything from, a school/ offices/ business and average people. The election country that we were assigned was S.Korea. Through our research we found that S.Korea's president is elected through a plurality vote and serves a single five year term. We also found that their Presidential election are going to be held in December 2012 and that they recently had an election for the National Assembly in April 2012. The person I contacted for help with this project was through facebook.
Conversation with S.Korean Citizen:
After sending him the questions and having the set up ready he unfortunately backed out on us and was unable to help. We contacted sever agencies as well however there was no response from them as well.
After the project I realized that there were many di fferences between the S.Korean and the American election systems, such as in the states a president can serve for two terms four years each, but in S.Korea they only serve one term of five years. I also noticed that their National Assembly has an important role in th e country.
There were many ups and downs in the process, for anyone doing this project I would tell them to keep in mind the language and time barriers, the time difference is very different and that was also a big issue for us. I did however learn a lot through this process including finding a person around the world that can help.
Globalization Benchmark
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1s3euMlHdpORmqtO5QmL8IckF3qxwCM738EIeSZNcsr0/edit
Reflection on project:
Some of the most challenging parts of this project were finding what part of globalization that we learned in class to use and to pick from and collecting the images. To collect the images we had to take the pictures ourselves but I dont have a very good camera so that posed a problem and my favorite image in the project is one of a child's hands holding the American Flag as it is growing out of her hands, its a little hard to describe but that is my favorite picture, mostly because it fits perfectly with what I was trying to explain about globalization in that section of my benchmark. I personally believe that evidence of globalization in Philadelphia is greater then that of other states because Philadelphia was the first city created and it hold the most history. I learned a lot through this project, inclulding how to connect globalization to different places in Philadelphia, and the process of finding the places I need in order to best explain Globalization.
World of 100
History Benchmark Q2- Women's Rights
http://www.schooltube.com/video/94e0f18067e246029059/
I chose this topic because women's rights is something important to me, as well as a delicate subject. I wanted my project to serve as a reminder of all of the hardships women have gone through in the past in order to be seen as equal. What I like the most about the project is the examples of historical women I've used as examples as well as all of the background research. Something that was challenging in creating this project was picking the perfect sound track and the format in which to present it. One of the most interesting things I came across was the fact that women almost gave up on equal rights several times as well as during WW1. I feel that this project could improve with more description. I did not put as much words in the final presentation as I originally planned. Something new that I tried was using C-Span for this project and I feel that it could have gone better. Overall I really enjoyed this project I felt that it was a very nice change and it really resonated with me. I now value women's more then ever.
Women's Rights
http://studentcam.viddler.com/videos/watch.php?id=9290e455
Marriage project-Reflection
Court Case
Case
10-948- CompuCredit Corporation v. Greenwood.
Cheif
Justice John G. Roberts
According to http://www.scotusblog.com/case-files/cases/compucredit-corp-v-greenwood/?wpmp_switcher=desktop
The decision made
by the courts was that the federal statutes that both create a right to sue
also bar waiver of rights under thee statute are sufficiently explicit to
override the strong federal policy in favor of arbitrability expressed in the
federal arbitration act. The relative language is virtually indistinguishable
from that and the credit repair organization fact that we have before us today
the cases inclide the ADEA and CROA which create a cause of action for
aggrivated parties to bring actions for damages and both statutes explicitly
bar waiver of quote "any right under the statute. Well, that statute
didn't have as this one has a disclosure requirement that says you have a right
to sue. And that's the sole distinction between the two statutes. So the --
first of all the disclosure statute is a -- describes in layman's terms, gives
a quick description of an operative civil liability section which is set out in
1679(g) and which tells us exactly what Congress had in mind in creating a
cause of action. And when you look at the language of the actual operative
provisions in (g), it's almost as if Congress deliberately went out of its way
to use language that would not preclude arbitration.The
Supreme Court's decision will clarify the extent of the federal policy favoring
arbitration and will elucidate how consumers may proceed against credit repair
organizations under the CROA.
The decision the court made is not really clear basically, they were both in the wrong to certain dagree, the wording used in both documents was almost identical, and there was a part in their documents saying that they did not have the right to sue the other party.
Lobbying post 4 Letter to representatives
For
the fourth part of this lobbying assignment I decided to
contact, Council Woman Joan L. Krajewski. She is the one that represents
my district, district 6. Council Woman Joan L. Krajewski is the Vice-chairwoman of the public safety committee,
"She sits on the Committees of Public Property and Public Works,
Licenses and Inspections, Public Safety, Fiscal Stability, Legislative
Oversight and Disabled and Handicapped. She was first elected councilwoman in
1979 and has since continued on a similar path. She was the
first woman in Philadelphia City Council history to hold the position of
Majority Leader. I also found out that she grew up in the same neighborhood as
me and I found that very interesting.
Council Woman Joan L.
Krajewski is one of the people that is directly responsible to me. I was
hesitant in contacting her, for I was unsure of the method to use. I then
decided on writing a letter, I came to the realization that it takes
a long time for the letter to get through. In order to inquire regarding
my topic I contacted her through phone, and email as well as the letter. I
also forwarded the email out to the governor and our city's mayor;
they have yet to reply to me.
In the letter I wrote, my reason for contacting
them, along with links and a summery of my previous blog posts. In the letter I
explained the safety in schools problem and how much education reform is
needed, along with statistics on the high school drop out rates. And proposed
several changes in order to better a students school life. I am still waiting for a reply from
any or all of my representatives and am hoping for a positive response.
The letter I wrote:
Dear
Representatives:
My
name is Elona Myftaraj, I a senior at Science Leadership Academy. I am working
on a project, and lobbying for education reform is my main point. I am
contacting you because you are my representative and I hope it wont take too
much of your time to reply to me. I am contacting you in order to
discuss, and make aware a few serious problems in our school system. "Across United States
public schools, just 74.9 percent of students who were freshmen in the fall of
2004 graduated from high school on time in 2008, according to a report from the
National Center for Education Statistics." There have been many school
related incidents that I fear has many students feel that they are not in a
safe environment. This is a link to a blog post I wrote on education reform,
and suggestions for change. http://www.scienceleadership.org/blog/Lobbying-_Education_Reform:2
A perfect example of my lobbying
topic is the violence erupted at South Philadelphia high school where
off-campus and lunchrooms attacks targeted about 50 Asian students, injuring
30, primarily by African-American students. The Asian
students boycotted classes for more than a week after the attack, stating that
they had endured relentless bullying by African-American students while school
officials did nothing about their complaints. I want there to be a change in
education and in schools because there are many kids that come from "The
Hood" or bad neighborhoods, and I believe that schools should be a safe
haven as much as a place of learning, kids need to have a place or person they
trust and I believe that this is a part of a teachers job.
I feel
that it is incidents such as this that make students loose faith in schools and
the school system. Therefore I am asking for your help to actively join me in
taking action for education reform and an accurate schedule along with
locations for public meetings regarding education reform.
Thank you in advance
Sincerely
~ Elona Myftaraj
Lobbying education reform 3
Even though this was set to take place, very little change to be seen. In fact there has been more negative change then positive. Because of the failing economy the Pennsylvania public schools with about $1.5 billion in education sector cuts and a 50% cut for state-owned/funded four-year colleges. This has caused many several schools such as Cardinal Dougherty to shut down. There has been a lot of talk and few meeting about education reform, but no real action has taken place to benefit education.
I also found several places during my search, places that I could visit in order to sit in on the meetings regarding education reform. At some of these place if and when I get a chance to speak I will bring up foreign education systems. What is working for the other countries such as Germany, South Korea, and Japan that is not working for the states. During these meeting I also wish to bring up the case of the feeling that the schools bring to kids, and whether we should change it. Whether we want the kids to fear or feel safe in schools, are all things to bring up. The representation of US schools in the world community is also of concern and something that should be discussed. The fact that neighborhood schools in the states are in conditions compared to at times worse then jail is a growing concern. In the past being educated and able to attend school was a privilege and a dream for a lot of kids, now days it is seen as a nightmare waiting to end. Its time to change the views students have on school to a positive one.
http://www.cardinaldougherty.org/
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FDs-QSwLls8&feature=fvst
http://www2.ed.gov/about/overview/budget/budget11/summary/edlite-section1.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PLzCBAFStm0
http://www.psea.org/general.aspx?id=7882
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SrNTE7nNVkY
http://www.myfoxphilly.com/dpp/news/budget_reform/030811-education-slammed-in-pa.-budget-cuts
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QbGQjA9pH4I&feature=fvst
http://www.whitehouse.gov/issues/education
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dh6-cauZkzo
http://www.esquire.com/blogs/politics/education-reform-2011-obama-5054121
History Of A Bill-BM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HNO1io69Yl8
Lobbying part 2 -myftaraj
Who Represents me:
Senators:
Casey, Robert P., Jr. - (D - PA) | Class I |
393 RUSSELL SENATE OFFICE BUILDING WASHINGTON DC 20510 | |
(202) 224-6324 | |
Web Form: www.casey.senate.gov/contact/ |
Toomey, Patrick J. - (R - PA) | Class III |
502 HART SENATE OFFICE BUILDING WASHINGTON DC 20510 | |
(202) 224-4254 | |
Web Form: www.toomey.senate.gov/?p=contact |
Governor:
Tom Corbett
PA Representatives:
Chaka Fattah Sr.
Mayor:
Michael Nutter
City Council President:
Anna C. Verna
District Rep:
District 6 - Councilwoman Joan L. Krajewski »
http://www.phila.gov/citycouncil/JoanLKrajewski.html
http://www.phila.gov/citycouncil/CouncilMembers.html
http://www.house.gov/
Lobbying- Education Reform
I want to lobby for the better education reform so that the U.S will once again be the greatest nation for education. We all know that the universities in the U.S are the greatest, but I believe that fundamental education should be just as important. We know that we have Harvard, Yale, Princeton and many more incredible universities but we are laking in elementary, middle and high schools were the students will feel secure and willing to learn instead of feeling forced to.
There are of course high schools that graduate students that end up attending these Ivey League universities, but what about the rest, what happens to the students that don't get into big named school, and not to mention the students that drop out of high school all together. I believe there needs to be an education reform, we need to create more schools such as Science Leadership Academy were the students feel welcome, were the teachers are first our teachers, our friends , our councilors, our back up, our safe place.
In January of 2010 violence erupted at South Philadelphia high school where off-campus and lunchrooms attacks targeted about 50 asian students, injuring 30, primarily by African-American students. The Asian students, boycotted classes for more than a week after the attack, stating that they had endured relentless bullying by African-American students while school officials did nothing about their complaints. I want there to be a change in education and in schools because there are many kids that come from "The Hood" or bad neighborhoods, and I believe that schools should be a safe haven as much as a place of learning, kids need to have a place or person they trust and I believe that this is a part of a teachers job.
Some of the main supporters for my lobbying idea are the Education Reform Center, and the Education Reform now Foundation. One of the biggest posing challenges for this however, is the budget crisis, schools have had to lay-off teacher because they cant afford to pay them, and some of the neighborhood high schools cant even afford supplies needed for every student let alone higher teachers. The United States needs to spend more money on education because it is one most important things that keeps the nation together. And it is necessary for the continues growth of a nation and the well being and comfortable life for its people.
What we need to change:
What we need more of:
http://www.edreform.com/http://www.edreformnow.org/
http://www.usatoday.com/news/education/2010-01-22-asian-bullying-philadelphia_N.htm
http://www.cfr.org/education/education-reform-us-competitiveness/p25816
Lobbying-Education Reform
The United States of America. Hearing these words used to make other nations tremble, but now we are falling behind on education because the students don't feel compelled enough to learn. Comparing America to Asia and Europe our primary and secondary education standards have been increasingly decreasing. For example a school in Asia had a higher rate in test score then one in Europe. Several places in Asia require students go to school year round, in South Korea the students are in school from 8am to 5pm everyday and many stay much later for study. Europe ranging from around 4-8 hours per day. I want to lobby for the better education reform so that the U.S will once again be the greatest nation for education. We all know that the universities in the U.S are the greatest, but I believe that fundamental education should be just as important. We know that we have Harvard, Yale, Princeton and many more incredible universities but we are laking in elementary, middle and high schools were the students will feel secure and willing to learn instead of feeling forced to. There are of course high schools that graduate students that end up attending these Ivey League universities, but what about the rest, what happens to the students that don't get into big named school, and not to mention the students that drop out of high school all together. I believe there needs to be an education reform, we need to create more schools such as Science Leadership Academy were the students feel welcome, were the teachers are first our teachers, our friends , our councilors, our back up, our safe place. In January of 2010 violence erupted at South Philadelphia high school where off-campus and lunchrooms attacks targeted about 50 asian students, injuring 30, primarily by African-American students. The Asian students, boycotted classes for more than a week after the attack, stating that they had endured relentless bullying by African-American students while school officials did nothing about their complaints. I want there to be a change in education and in schools because there are many kids that come from "The Hood" or bad neighborhoods, and I believe that schools should be a safe haven as much as a place of learning, kids need to have a place or person they trust and I believe that this is a part of a teachers job. Some of the main supporters for my lobbying idea are the Education Reform Center, and the Education Reform now Foundation. One of the biggest posing challenges for this however, is the budget crisis, schools have had to lay-off teacher because they cant afford to pay them, and some of the neighborhood high schools cant even afford supplies needed for every student let alone higher teachers. The United States needs to spend more money on education because it is one most important things that keeps the nation together. And it is necessary for the continues growth of a nation and the well being and comfortable life for its people. http://www.edreform.com/http://www.edreformnow.org/ http://www.usatoday.com/news/education/2010-01-22-asian-bullying-philadelphia_N.htm http://www.cfr.org/education/education-reform-us-competitiveness/p25816
Spanish Benchmark Q4
Esto es el link por mi proyecto:
Reflection:
La experiencia de la guerra civil en España fue algo muy doloroso por toda la
gente pero creo que también es algo que lo ayudo mucho, la guerra civil es
historia, si es algo mala o buena no es importante. Le que importa es lo que aprenderán
de la guerra y como están ahora. Y por esto La tema de mi proyecto es “los
efectos de la guerra civil.” Por este proyecto yo no quise explicar solamente
una de todas las cosas que pasaron durante y después de la guerra, por eso escogí
hacer una Collection de poemas que representaron todo y se conectaron con una
tema mas grande, y esto es la guerra civil.
Cuando empecé este proyecto tenia “major writers block” y no sabia de que me estaba
metiendo, entonces me acorde de todas las personas que sufrieron en la guerra,
todos los niños que murieron y todas las mujeres maltratadas, y mi “writers
block” se fue. No se porque pero entonces no podía dejar de escribir, todas las
películas que vimos en clase sobre la guerra civil y todas las cosas que
aprendimos me llegaron. Y creo que por esto escribí ocho poemas de la guerra
civil. Me gusto mucho mi presentación final porque reflecte lo mucho que
trabaje tenerlo, yo creo que mi proyecto final es muy sentido y no creo que
cambiara algo si podía.
History/English Bm Q4
http://www.schooltube.com/video/61cf8c2ea795813c9adc/EnglishHistory-BM-FINAL
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gmsj53QoARs
Reflection :
My favorite part of the project has creating my own history. Originally I thought "Hey I know a lot about WW1, lets do something about that" only to find out I was kidding myself. Yes, I knew a lot about WW1 but nothing compared to what I learned through this project, I think that one of the most challenging things for me were coming up with my own history, I enjoyed it the most but also had the hardest time coming up with what primary source documents I was going to make, and whether to make the US the good guy, or the bad guy, it was a long thought process.
I think that one of the most interesting facts I learned was that the man in charge of hiring and preparing the assassination of Franz Ferdinand archduke of Austria-Hungary, was the chief of the intelligence department of the Serbian army, Dragutin Dimitrijevic, whom surly enough was also the leader of "the black hand," "the name of a secret military society in the Serbian army in the kingdom of Serbia." I learned that the actions of one individual make a huge difference, especially since World War one started because of the murder of an individual, and because of the man that pulled the trigger. Systematic changes impact our history by determining and effecting the way of life of not only an individual but for the whole nation. One decision in history can be so influential that it leads man to do from the unthinkable acts to the most kind and gentle, two perfect examples of this are, Hitler and Mother Teresa.
I really enjoyed working on this project, I learned a lot through it. I think that if I included music in the final presentation it would have helped a lot, there are a lot of silent pieces and I thought they would have been good for dramatic effect, but I'm not sure if everyone will think of it the same way I do. If I had a do over one thing I would change about my process would be my organizing the information I gathered, if I had done so from the beginning I wouldn't have as much of a panic when it came time to put everything together.
Emyftaraj Musical instrument blog #2
slinky lab
Physics instrument
Personally I feel making a guitar would be the best way to bring physics into this project. With this we can measure the wave lengths of different tone and notes.
A guitar is played by tugging on the strings to make sound, you can manipulate the sound by placing your fingers at the top of the guitar and changing the notes. Im thinking of making an average guitar and this is how its shaped.
I was initially hoping to make a drum type of instrument because I really enjoy the drums however since we can not I decided to go with the guitar, with this instrument you can hit the wood area and different other places on the guitar to make different beats and I really like that about it.
I chose this instrument because it is fun to play and something I enjoy.
Reflection
El capitulo que lei fue "Por Ustedes" y se hablo sobre tres amigos que estuvieron solos y el autor le estaba diciendo que esto fue la primera ves que lo hico porque a el no le gusta dar discursos ni cree que los narradores deben recibir coronas porque estan haciendo algo que les guste y no lo ve mucho como un trabajo. Y que el siempre ha creido en contra de otros criterios muy respetables. Solo por la desgracia que no pueden hacer otra cosa y que su trabajo solitario no debe merecerlos mas recompensas ni mas privilegios que los merece el zapatero por hacer sus zapatos. El autor dice que todos quienes trabajan deben ser respetados y tratados buien como toda la gente. Desde ahora me gusta mucho ese libro porque esta hablando sobre la vida y experiencias del narrador.
Worst man made disaster in US history: Tennessee Coal ash spill
Reflection:
Our group had a slow start with this project but in the end we pulled through. I learned a lot about the Tennessee Coal Ash Spill and much about the disasters that other students presented. We had a few ups and downs, especially meeting deadlines we set for each other but we collaborated and found incredible amounts of information to learn from. I think if we could have been a little more organized if we practiced before presenting but it was a lot better the second time around.
Because most of us were doing individual research and it was all put together by one person, while presenting we were a little unorganized. However by the second time we had everything together and could tell our story. I think that if everyone would be a little more creative during the infograph part it would have made our project much more attractive.
Be Concise
Be Visual
Be Smarter
Be Transparent
Be Different
Be Accurate
Be Attractive
Be Varied
Be Gracious
Be Creative
I think we worked very well with being concise, different, smarter, accurate, visual, varied, creative, and attractive. Maybe not so much in the transparent and gracious, because as I said before the first group we presented to was a little messy but got a lot better after the that. I dont think we put up enough information in order to be transparent and im not sure how we could have been gracious in this project.
By Marina Stuart
Group Mates: Elona M, Shi F, and Mustapha I.Elona Myftaraj
Marina Stuart
Shakeelah Finney
Mustapha Idriss
Reflection:Novelas
1)
Durante este proyecto yo
aprendí que actuar no es tan fácil como parece y es muy difícil trabajar junto
con amigos porque ellos también sentían lo mismo que yo. Todo fue especialmente
difícil cuando los muchachos se vistieron como niñas porque casi no podíamos
resistir de reír. La parte mas difícil para nosotros fue arreglar y encontrar los
ángulos de la camera para que toda la escena fuera filmada. 2)
Yo escribí todo lo que
nosotros teníamos que decir y eso me gusto pero también fue un poco difícil. Yo
creo que nosotros trabajamos muy bien juntos, escuchamos las ideas de todos y
lo combinamos en nuestra novela. Yo creo que nosotros trabajamos muy bien
juntos y eso fue nuestra fortaleza mayor. 3)
Si podíamos hacerlo otra
ves yo creo que quisiera cambiar nuestro establecimiento porque nosotros usamos
“the teachers lounge” y la habitación fue muy pequeña, eso hico cosas mucho mas
difícil para filmar porque necesitábamos cambiar los ángulos de la camera
constadamente. Yo creo que esto saco mucho de nuestra novela porque
necesitábamos hacer muchos “cuts” cortos. 4)
Yo quiero que todos que
vean nuestra novela se dan cuenta de los esteriotipas de mujeres y cuando lo
vean piensen dos veces antes de hablarle a una mujer con falta de respecto y
con mala actitudes que todos los hombres son mejor de mujeres y que los hombres
son mas importantes. Quiero que cuando todos los hombres ven a nuestro proyecto
empiezan a tratar a una mujer como sus iguales y no como alguien que son debajo
ellos.
Differences in prices:1920's Vs. 2011
I
chose to focus on cars, shoes and food because I thought those would be the
most interesting. First the car advertising;
As
you can see the advertizing techniques, car models, car types, shapes sizes,
have all changed but I think that what has changed the most is the prices.
Depending
on the type of car the prices for new cars average between 15,000$ and well
into the millions while in the 1920’s the average cost for new cars was $240 which is about $2,696 today.
Next up the shoes:
1920’s Vs. 2011
Again
I looked at the prices of each item and found that the prices of designer shoes
in the 1920’s were valued at no more the 50$ while the prices for designer
shoes today average between 100$ to well over 50,000$
And
last but not least Food:
1920’s Vs. 2011
You can clearly see the difference the 1920’s have all of the meats, fruits, and vegetables in one place, while 2011 everything is separated by category to avoid contamination and all are well refrigerated and covered, while in the 1920’s everything is placed out on a table.
Las munecas de la mafia: Reflection 2
En la parte
que vi tampoco me gusto muchos. El audio fue terrible siempre cambiaron a
las microphones y no se oía bien. Las mujeres siguen sin hacer nada mas de ir
de compras y tener ataques emociónales con los hombres y con sus mismas. Los
hombres siguen con engañar los mujeres y tratarlas muy mal y matar a los otros.
Todo sigue muy dramático y todos los actores siguen jóvenes y guapos y locos.
El Principito
Picture story - history
Story 2:
acceleration of Cart lab
Q2 Spanish 5 Benchmark
Elona Myftaraj
Ad #1
Los efectos de anuncios y lo que no nos quieren decir
Por este proyecto yo decidí seleccionar a Chips Ahoy como uno de mis anuncios porque en el momento que lo vi me di cuenta de lo que significa. Casi toda mi familia, y todos mis amigos comen a Chips Ahoy, y la única cosa que sabia sobre estas galletas fue que tenían mucho chocolate. Y pensándolo sabia que muchas dulces no le hacen bien a nadie, y lo escocí por esto también.
Cuando estaba investigando la compañía (Nabisco) de las galletas encontré que Chips Ahoy son en segundo lugar en ventas en los estados unidos con un media $355 millones de dólares en ventas cada ano.
También encontré que un “Single Serve” sola tiene 2.5g de satúrate grasa, 190 calorías, y 13g de azúcar. el público objetivo es todo el mundo porque también lo vendan en Latino America, Sud África, Canadá, México, España, Portugal, Australis, y en Stockman Latvia. Pero se venden mas por los niños y los adolescentes y se eso porque los anuncios de las galletas son muy bonitas y interesantes a ver. El tipo de estilo de vida, valores y opiniones que representan en la compañía son, apoyar la creatividad los niños "la promesa nota almuerzo" y que cuando uno come esta galleta será inmediatamente feliz, sano y salvo.
Información crucial en este anuncio que el público debe saber es que no es tan bueno por ti como te hagan pensar, y tiene mucha garza mala.
Las compañía no nos engañe a todos, los ingredientes utilizados en la fabricación de las galletas que se acaba de destacar lo buenos que son y pongan los insolubles de ellos en pequeñas letras en la espalda.
Elegí este anuncio porque la gente no se dan cuenta de la cantidad de grasa insaludable en las galletas y cómo mucho más saludable que sería sólo por no comer o comer pequeñas porciones de las gallets. El producto que estoy hablando es Chips Ahoy y la compañía detrás de ellos es Kraft Foods 1999-2011.
Con la venta de esto creo que lo único que la empresa le importa es hacer dinero, especialmente cuando los anuncios son para el populación de jóvenes. Dudo que los adolescentes en la escuela SLA que son muy técnicos pongan todos los anuncios en línea, así como en la televisión para tirar en los espectadores mayor y esto nos afecta porque estamos siempre en línea y cuando tienen hambre se ven un anuncio para Chip Ahoy y sin pensarlo dos veces, lo compran y comen, sin saber los ingredientes en los alimentos. Hay muchos estilos de vida representados por las galletas tres de los más comunes son "el wizzard de Oz", "Rockey" y "Backstory."
En mi contrapublicidad yo sustituye las cosas buenas que el anuncio dijo sobre su producto y lo sustituyó por todas las cosas malos, con la verdad.
La información mostrada sobre el producto que no estaba en el original de
la cantidad de cada tipo de grasa y otros ingredientes Cambios estéticos y / o adiciones que cambio los trozos de chocolate con trozos de grasa.
Esto es muy importante porque sólo añada al problema de la obesidad que tenemos hoy. Y por eso escogí escribir sobre chips Ahoy como mi primer anuncio.
Elona Myftaraj
Ad #2
Los efectos de anuncios y lo que no nos quieren decir
Cuando estaba buscando el segundo anuncio estuve viendo por algo que afecta los mujeres, y el anuncio que me afecto lo máximo cuando lo vi fue uno con una mujer bebiendo cerveza (beer). Escogí este anuncio porque afecta todo el mundo las mujeres y los hombres. El estilo de vida y los valores presentados son que una mujer embarazada también puede, y debe ser tratado como un juguete sexual en lugar de respeto. También nos dije que son más fáciles de aprovechar porque están embarazadas.
Parte de la información mas importante que el anuncio no nos dice es que, el alcohol es muy malo para los bebés por nacer, causa de mortinatos (still births), defectos de nacimiento y muchas problemas de salud después del nacimiento.
Elegí este anuncio porque las empresas están empezando a utilizar las mujeres embarazadas en los anuncios de cerveza, cigarrillos y cosas que no son saludables, no sólo para la mujer embarazada sino para todos.
la empresa que fabrica estos productos es Nova Schin beer by Primo Schincariol.Creo que lo único que valoran es el dinero, que no entiendan la vida, y que es preciosa por eso usan las mujer embarazada a su favor. Esto incluso puede ser peligroso, si la mujer embarazada convertido en un tema caliente y luego se aumenta la posibilidad de que sean perjudicados (violaciones, atacados).
Con la venta de esto creo que lo único que cosa que le importa la es hacer dinero, especialmente cuando los anuncios a la desventaja de todo el mundo, especialmente la mujer.
Se dirigen a las mujeres de SLA más que los hombres, ya que es básicamente enseñando a los jóvenes que se pueden tratar a las mujer embarazada de manera terrible y seria bien. Y el hecho de que están borrachos y mujeres embarazadas seria más seguro por los hombres, de esa manera pueden tomar ventaja de ellas y no tienen que preocuparse por ellas porque ya están embarazadas.
La información que no nos dicen es que si una mujer embarazada bebe le duele al bebé, y si ella es bajo la influencia entonces un hombre puede tomar ventaja de ella y posiblemente darle enfermedades de transmisión sexual, que podría incusar en la mata de su bebé.
No nos dicen que una bebida alcohólica afecta los sentencia y la capacidad de tomar decisiones correctas.
El anuncio efecto valores de SLA porque nuestra escuela es parte y tome el educación más alto de la ciudad, y el hecho de que este anuncio influye los jóvenes negativamente debería significar en no está permitirlo que se publicarán en cualquier cosa.
Yo personalmente Crecí creyendo que uno debe respetar a sus mayores y por lo menos a mí valorar la vida, una mujer que está a punto de dar la vida a un bebe en un anuncio así es el último objetivación de la mujer. Y siempre me enojo mucho cuando veo las mujer tratadas y devaluado y tratadas como animales, es injusto y cruel.
Creo que mi contrapublicidad va a ser muy afectiva, especialmente por las mujeres porque me cabe duda de que se sentirían bien viendo una mujer que está a punto de dar la luz haciendo algo que podría hacerle daño a ella dañaría o inclusa en la mata de su bebé, el hecho de este anuncio es inhumano.
Voy a mostrar esto anuncio en las salas de SLA porque, quiero que todas las chicas aquí serian en contra de este anuncio y quiero que todos vean la cantidad de las mujeres embarazadas efectos negativos de este anuncio .
A blast from the past!! Joseph Wharton
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PLZO_fPBV7g
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Spanish 5 Benchmark Q1
Miembros del grupo:
Emilisa Lopez
Elona Myftaraj
Stephanie Millwood
Marina Stuart
Tuesday, November 2nd Voting interview
Voting Address:
3380 Richmond St
Philadelphia, PA 19134
(215) 291-4172
Interview
Q - What would you like to see changed in our political system?
A - "Nothing, I think we have a pretty good system going"
Q - Do you know why we vote on tuesday?
A - "No, I don't"
Q - Are you always sure of who your going to vote for when you walk into the booth or are you still deliberating?
A - "I always know who Im going to vote for"?
Q - What impact do you think your vote will have on the election?
A - "I think that every vote counts, and if enough people think the same way we can have an impact."
Q - Where have you encountered the highest amount of ad campaigning?Radio, Tv, print, internet, other.
A - "I'd have to say tv and the paper mostly."
The person chose to stay anonymous.
Reflection:
I was kind of nervous to start but after I opened the door the people were really nice. They pointed me to the direction of the voting closed the door behind me. I went around 3:00 in the afternoon, so there was no one there beside the people that aid in the voting process. I told one of them my purpose for being there and asked if it was ok to ask him a few questions. After a little thought he said sure, no problem but I want to remain anonymous, I said that was fine and asked him the questions. Afterward I thanked them and left. It was a surprisingly pleasant experience for me.