Monolouge Pipeline

Into:

I want to show my point of view as a single mother that has 3 children on how I feel about the oil pipelines and the effect that it my have on not only my family but but community as well. I want people to know how I feel about and hopefully it will make a difference. I wanted to raise the importances of how dangerous that this can be and the health hazards that it can cause.  

Monologue 1:

(Setting: In the kitchen making dinner for the kids but you have a lot of things on your mind. After they eat, they get ready for bed)

My name is Kimberly Williams. Well, people call me “Kim” for short. I am 36 years old and I’m a long term resident, living in Fort Chipewyan, Canada. I’m a single woman. Have three children. Two sons and one daughter. I’m in trying to make dinner for them, and get them ready for bed, but so much is going on right now. But anyways “Am I married?” Well, no. Divorced actually. I’m more so married to the environment now, if that’s how you want to put it. The trees, the plants, the bugs, water…yeah, that’s all-important to me. “Kids come down for dinner!” (pacing back and forth shakes head) A lot of my family worked in the oil industry. My mom has worked in the oil industry for years, so it has been a big role in my family. I have always been vocal in my community and always a voice about the tar sands industry. I will always call Fort Chipewyan my home, despite of the situations. Me, well, I believe that my kids and I are being jeopardized by this. (leaning against the counter). You know, my kids love to swim in the lake near the house, but now…one of the hardest things to tell them is no because as a mother, I fear for my children, and I am afraid of what is in that water. When I was little, in 1970, there was an oil spill that only a few people knew about. As I was walking along the beaches, I saw a bird covered in oil and GUESS WHAT?? People were still swimming. I know, (acting surprised) it was mind-boggling. Now, what would you have done, if you saw birds covered in oil? Cause, I know that if I saw a bird covered in oil, I wouldn’t allow my kids to swim. The waterfront where we used to dive off the dock into the water has no water anymore. It’s bone dry. (pulls out the salt and pepper for dinner) The water levels are low and the flood lakes are not flooding. You know what my main question is (confused) “Where are the people that are responsible for this? This community is very close and everyone knows each other so if anything would happen, we would automatically know about it. We have meetings about the tar sands and we are speaking out against them. I just want the industry to take another look at this and realize that what they are doing is not right. Yeah, it’s hurting us and possibly killing us. Like I said I’m 36 years old and I want to continue to raise my kids and see them grow. (trying to hold back tears) My neighbor told me something and it was really true, now that I think about it. She said, “Everyone always thinks about the next dollar but in reality, we need to take time to develop something better than what we have.” Come on kids! Hurry so ya’ll can get into bed early for tomorrow. You can’t possibly tell me that there isn’t a better way.

 

Monologue 2:

(Setting: Outside cutting wood)

Hi, my name is Mike. Mike Daniels that is. I’m 45 years old, married, and have 2 kids. I live in Winsboro Texas. I am also a carpenter. As you can see, I am building this new tree house. Well, I’ve been one for years now. I fell in love with the community for its beauty and nature. Later on, I purchased the spot that I liked, and later on, got married to my beautiful wife, started building my house, and later down the line, I had my 2 wonderful kids, Mike Jr. and Melissa. I own 20 acres of land with spring fed creeks, and hardwoods. (puts wood down) Now look. It’s about to be destroyed by this stupid oil pipeline. My property now, is being threatened because they now want to run the pipelines through my grounds. MY GROUNDS! The Canadian oil company, TransCanada wants to run the Keystone XL pipeline through the heart of the community. But here’s the bad part. The pipeline carries the most dirties oil in the world and it can really harm myself, as well as my family. I don’t want them to get sick ad possibly die. “Hold up where is my wood?” (looking around for it)…oh there it is. Anyways, really, I didn’t know anything about this “project” that they were talking about doing until my next door neighbor came and told me that she had caught surveyors on my property. So I do some research about it and when I got home, I found all these stakes coming up from the ground all around my property. I was so confused. As the weeks go by, my wife told me that she had received some mail stating a request for looking at my property. I thought it was kind of to late for that being as though there were already stakes up coming out of the ground. (laughs a little) I don’t know what they were going to do. Now look, I love this place and I would die in this place. So I refused to give them the permission to make any more moves. Two months later, I received another letter from the Houston attorney saying that if we didn’t respond within a week, then they would have domain over the property and come anyhow and take me to court. But who are they to tell me what I can and cannot do? At this point, I just don’t know what to do. So I wrote them back telling them that they can come and do what needs to be done, as long as I have a 24hr notice that they are on my property. I watch them do what needs to be done and all but wait…I found out something that was very surprising. I talked to Harry Balswind from Nebraska University and he said that TransCanada did not have a presidential permit and that the EPA was not approved. So wait? I’m thinking to myself, “What was all that for then? Look, I was so mad (cuts wood really hard). Pres. Barack Obama needs to know that having these pipelines are not cool. I have a life to live and so does my family. Having them hasn’t proved anything for our best interest and neither has it created jobs for people to work. You have to treat the landowners with respect and they need to stop with all of the lies. Just tell the truth. Safety should always come first. I think I should stop now and check on my kids.

 

 Monologue 3:

My name is Victoria Meadows. My husband and me have been living in Channelview Texas for a while now. We both are business owners of a motorcycle repair shop. Were we live, is not far from the San Jacinto River so other oil and gas companies like ExxonMobil, Shell, and Chevron ship petroleum. Unfortunately, those type of companies pollute the are with toxins and most of the community is effected with the chance of having cancer. I am one that is active in my community and I am apart of a group called The Fight Against Pollution. We come together and think of ideas of trying to stop the air pollution and Channelview and make it a better place to live. (concerned)My community has struggled so much in the past 4 years and it’s our job as a community to stop the XL pipelines from coming through the grounds. In 1989, Shell oil blew up and it killed a lot of people and also polluted the air very bad. Uhh …what else happened? Oh, in the early 90’s there was an explosion. I can’t remember where it was though. Uh, Let’s see. The river flooded in 1994 but a lot of the oil companies refused to cut of their lines because of the pipelines that had exploded. So with all of that happening, you mean to tell me that you want XL PIPELINES RUNNING THROUGH OUR LAND?? Okay, I get it. You just want to hurt us even the more (getting mad) I don’t think it fair, Not only to me, but to all of the other families living here. This has to be the nastiest oil that we would be having if they still do decide to bring it to us. This is a really bad idea and they need to not follow through it. A lot of people ask me, (sarcastic voice) “Why do you live here?” It gets annoying after a while but I just say because I was born here. All of my memories were created here and I met my husband here. It will be like leaving a place where I spent my life. I don’t think it would be a good idea if I moved and let everyone suffer instead of trying to make a difference and helping my fellow peers and neighbors.

 

 

Lobbying part 2- Curfews

​The person who represents me in district 13 is Allyson Schwartz. She was born in Queens, New York. She was elected in 1990, as the Pennsylvania State Senate for northeast Philadelphia. She has not voted on the curfew law. Her biggest task is healthcare, but she is also working on: Economy and Jobs
Fiscal Responsibility 
Building Livable Communities
Crime and Law Enforcement 
Defense 
Education
Energy
Environment
Foreign Affairs
Labor
Pennsylvania Specific Issues
Seniors
Taxes 
Veterans
 
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 But Frank Dicocco of district 1, voted for the curfew. I disagree with his theory of making curfew stricter completely, he says they are brought on specifically for flash mobs. The should a better reason for creating this curfew. He should have taken a more stricter turn for the parents, they are the overall solution to this problem.
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Reflection
What grade would you assign yourself for each category?

Exceeds Expectations

20-19


Meets Expectations

18-16


Approaches Expectations

15-13


Does Not Meet Expectations

12-1

Design

18

Knowledge

17

Application

19

Presentation

18

Process

20


TOTAL: 92

Strengths of your process or product

Weaknesses of your process or product

Writing the descriptions was pretty easy for me because I knew what I wanted to say so I just had to get it down on paper.

Putting everything together was easy for me  because I don’t really have a problem with
imovie.




I had the most problems doing the recording because sometimes when I recorded it didn’t sound like me, so I kept redoing it because I though it might seem like someone else did it. The peer edits were also a little frustrating because I got somethings which turned out not to be correct and it would confuse me.



How did you apply the SLA core values to your project?

I was asked the question and answered “Qué hice el verano pasado”
I researched what I did in summers past and looked for pictures.
I had people review what I wrote and I also reviewed other people’s writing
I put my whole project into an imovie and added music to make it more fun in the silent spots inbetween voiceovers
I looked over my project and am doing this questions, when I looked over it I think I did a good job and I tried my hardest

What did you learn about Spanish through completing this project?

I learned that there were a lot of things that needed to be said in past tense and also I leaned things about transition in sentences that I forgot over the summer.

What did you change about your final project based on peer feedback?  What did you change based on Srta. G’s feedback?

I wouldn’t want to change anything because I feel like I did good. The only thing I would change is to find a spanish verison of the song I used.

If you had the opportunity to start your project all over again, how would you do it differently?

I wouldn’t do it differently, I didn’t get stressed from this project and I completed everything on time

Did you enjoy this project? Why or why not?

Yes, because it was fun and creative, it opened a chance to have something creative in a project instead of just text

Do you have any suggestions for me if I do this same project next year?

No, I think this project was great the way it was. it didn’t confuse me and we had enough time for everything.


http://dl.dropbox.com/u/12879973/Spanish%20bm.flv

Blog Post #2: Lobbying against curfew: Representative

I am still against curfew, I'm represented by Maria D. Quinones-Sanchez from the 7th district. She represents the 7th district, she is known as the first Latina to serve in the Philadelphia city council. I am going to figure out her thoughts on my lobbying topic, curfew. She was born November 12 in Philadelphia, PA. She is married with 2 kids. She has been in office since 2008 till 2012. She had a high of, 80% of votes November 6 of 2007. She was guaranteed a 4 year term.
In the past "Cyber Action" has completely disagreed with the curfew law that was set. This group in particular is basically setting a goal making sure everyone in the community is trying to get the council members to not agree with the law at stake about curfew. It seems as though council woman Maria D. Quinones-Sanchez was agreeing with the law that was being made about curfew. I believe that she is for the curfews and that she is not about to stand down in any way to make the curfew law, out.
It's ironic how she is Latina and I am also. Yet I feel we have nothing in common. I noticed she had done some pretty outstanding things in her time such as; focus on education throughout the city, focus on crime and public safety etc; her accomplishments are in a way similar to my community service. I help around the neighborhood and volunteer at the PSPCA. We both have a connection where we both interact with the community in a positive way.
A little more about Maria D. Quinones-Sanchez:
- She is from the 7th district
-  The youngest in city council
-  Known for her reduced crime rates
-  Known for her increase in economic opportunity
-  Known for outstanding achievements
-  Made history November 2007 by having 80% of votes and being Latina

Blog Post #2

​People Who would represent me:

City Council 

Mayor Nutter

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Councilmen Curtis Jones

Michael Decker


I would need to get in contact with each individual person or program to find out more information specifically with why after school sport programs are failing and why Philadelphia after school sport programs are failing and what needs to be done to get more of these programs and what these officials are doing to get bills passed and other things passed to bring these necessary programs back. I will also try to go to different sites that have been shutdown and talk to those people about what can be done; I will also talk with students and kids that have lost these sports programs and how they feel about losing them as well. 

http://www.phila.gov/citycouncil/CouncilMembers.html


http://www.fueluptoplay60.com/


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Lobbying #2: Lobbying: Advocating For Homeless Youth In Philadelphia

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5th District Council Representative DARRELL L.CLARKE

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Representative Darrell L. Clarke is a member of the ethics and housing/ 

homeless committees and also is and advocate for public safety in Philadelphia.



 Current Work:

Representative Darrel Clarke was also responsible to advocating for the reconstruction of the Girard avenue and Spring Garden street stops along the Broad street line. Representative Clarke knew that those stations were anywhere from 75-80 years old and that they no longer met the Americans with Disabilities Guidelines. Using the money from the Federal American Recovery & Reinvestment Act, he has done close to 36.7 million dollars in work. 

Although many people know him for changing the subway stops Representative Darrell Clarke is mostly know for his dispute with the Boy Scouts of America over their anti-discrimination policy. When the representative heard that the Boy Scouts weren't allowing homosexual males to be scout leaders he immediately started his plan to action. Representative Darrell Clarke was quoted saying “At the end of the day, you can not be in a city-owned facility being subsidized by the taxpayers and not have language in your lease that talks about nondiscrimination,”  “Negotiations are over.” The Boy Scouts had been living in their building since 1928 but now are facing eviction if they don't not pay up. 

 
Contact Information:

http://www.facebook.com/councilmandarrellclarke
http://councilmandarrellclarke.com/site/
City Hall, Room 484
Philadelphia, PA 19107-3290 
(215) 686-3442, (215) 686-3443
FAX: (215) 686-1901


Addition Information:
http://209.157.64.200/focus/f-news/2540958/posts
http://www.freerepublic.com/focus/f-news/1935732/posts

: Lobbying Assignment #2 - Researching Officials -

Chaka Fattah was a resident of Philadelphia Pennsylvania and attended Overbrook High and eventually went on to Community College of Philadelphia.  He got his MGA from U-PENN’s Fels institute of Government. Fattah first served in the House of Representatives in 1983 until 1988 and then as a State Senator from 1988 to 1994.

Chaka Fattah has stood up for some what I believe would be good initiatives. One of my favorites would be the Clean Energy Act of 2010. However it seems like he is mostly involved in students and student education which is understandable considering his background and where he was taught. Most of his “Major Achievements” has a lot to do with education and some of his other achievements has a lot to do with energy efficiency.

To relate to Chaka Fattah I would attempt to relate on on a level of what I feel about education and I respect that he is very involved with education because that is the key to the future and keeping these young people off the streets. The government takes money away from our schools and the sports teams and don’t realize that sports and after school programs give children something to do. I think he would respect where I’m from and what school I go to and all of the things I am involved with and that would give me a great impression and something to connect on.

From there it could be a nice transition to energy efficiency and how I worked at the EPA. From there I would go into the whole fracking thing and talk about the effects of that in the waters and how water relates a lot to energy and it’s efficiency. Without water there is no life and I would also talk about how fracking is horribly regulated an something should be changed about that. He has a good history with wanting to switch ways in which we use energy.

Curfew Lobbying Blog Post #2

    There are various council members here in Philadelphia, ten to be exact for the ten different districts. Those who represents my lobbying topic would be those who’s on the Rules Committee.  The chair of this committee is Anna C. Vera, the vice chair is James F. Kenny and there are seven members who consist of Darrell L. Clarke, Frank DiCicco, W. Wilson Goode, Jr., William K. Greenlee, Donna Reed Miller, Blondell Reynolds Brown and Frank Rizzo Jr.  I’m sure I wouldn’t need to talk to all of these people so I would first start with Anna C. Vera because she seems to have the most experience on this committiee.  In 2008 she was beginning her THIRD FULL term as council president which shows she must be really good at her job. Anna represents the 2nd district and her community interest is more so with housing. Because she seems to only oversee the Rules Committee more so than actual perform the same jobs as the council members, more than likely, I would be redirected to a council member who could represent me and my lobbying ideas.


Anna C. Verna Biography
http://www.phila.gov/citycouncil/AnnaVerna.html

City of Philadelphia Rules Committie
http://www.phila.gov/citycouncil/rules.html

Map of Philadelphia District Neighborhoods 


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Lobbying #2

Public Officials that directly impacted minor curfew in Philadelphia 



Mayor Nutter

Philadelphia Police Commissioner Charles Ramsey 

Deputy Mayor for Public Safety Everett Gillison

Philadelphia City Council
 

Who represents me ? 

Blondell Reynolds

Blondell Reynolds has voted for the the 9'0CLock curfew in philadelphia, and she played a major role in getting the curfew enacted. After looking at my represenatives bio we have a lot in common. She mainly focus's on education and children. 

Links to article related: 

http://www.phila.gov/cityCouncil/CouncilMembers.html

http://politic365.com/2011/08/19/philadelphia-flash-mobs-%E2%80%94-is-curfew-a-fair-solution-other-cities-are-watching/

http://philadelphia.cbslocal.com/2011/08/15/city-officials-looking-to-permanently-re-write-curfew-law-in-philadelphia/








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DONT WEAR THE RAIN!

Topic #3-

 

Weather-

 

Title- Don’t wear the rain

 

We all need to know how to say the weather in order to prepare for your day ahead. You want to know if it’s going to snow so you can wear a warm outfit. Or if you’re going out to party at a club and outside is hot and inside is much hotter you’re not going to wear something thick or bolcky. So I am going to help you know the weather like the back of your hand.

 

Weather & Seasons

ENGLISH

SPANISH

PRONUNCIATION

    GUIDE    

How’s the weather?

¿Qué tiempo hace?

kay teeAIM-

poh AH-say?

It’s cold.

 Hace frío.

AH-say FREE-

oh

It’s hot.

Hace calor.

AH-say cah-

LURE

It’s windy.

Hace viento.

AH-say beeAIN-t

oh

It’s raining.

Está lloviendo.

es-ta-

youWay-dao

It’s snowing.

 Está nevando.

Es-ta- neeA-

bah

It’s cloudy.

Está nublado.

Es-ta now-bela

-do

 

 

 

It’s sunny.

 Hace sol.

AH-say sole

Winter

Cel Invierno

een-beeAIR-

noh

Spring

La Primavera

pree-mah-BAY-

rah

Summer

El Verano

bay-RAH-noh

Fall

El otoño

oh-TONE-yoh

GO TO THIS TO LEARN IN A FUN WAY -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oU9I59_QcKs  

             

Emalyn is clueless about the weather today, so she is going to ask her friend Alexis what it is like outside.



Creative Project and Reflection

Download here :
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1084844/Presentation2.pptx

Rick Kinard

10/25/2011

English 12: Sexuality & Society in Literature

Quarter 1 Creative Project

Reflection

 

A clear explanation of what your creative piece is about, what it represents, and how you attempted to get the point across.

 

My creative I chose to do a poem because it was a form of art that I felt most confortable doing and presenting. After reading the scarlet letter watching the Juno, it seem that the characters acted/felt one-way and said something different. The poems were basically the inner thoughts that were not said in the movie and/or text. I didn’t try to disguise it I just said it plain and simple.

 

How you went about crafting your piece. What was your process like? Did you encounter any problems/issues as you went along?

 

In class we talk a lot about what characters dialogue. We specifically examined what they said with their mouths vs. what they said with their body language. We noticed that what they said didn’t always match up with what they felt and/or thought. So with that, I kept each main character from Juno and the scarlet letter came up with a theme for their feelings/thought. Then I linked two from each that hand similar themes. For example, the theme I came up with for bleaker was about concealed emotions. Then I went about coming up with the poems because I already knew what I want to write. I just put it all in a powerpoint. The pictures chosen behind the text were silhouette because you can see them but not their entire identity just like in the character's thoughts. 

 

What are the aspects of the project you believe you did well?

I believe I the part of the project I did well was the preparation and application. I believe it was because we were told about the project before hand and shown examples of other projects. I just knew what I wanted to talk because it was a topic that stayed in the classroom for a while. When were told we were doing a creative project, I thought poetry. My project just took off from there.

 

What aspects of the project do you feel you could have done better?

I feel as if the creativity level should have been way higher. Compared to other people’s ideas I don't feel like my Project was that creative.  On the other hand I also do not believe I could have shown much more creativity in my poems. I knew what I wanted and when I was finished I thought about what everyone else said they were doing and I felt as if my project wasn’t up to par.

 

If you could do it all over again, what would you do differently?

If I had another chance or more time, I would not have did something completely different but I would have added something to it. I would have tried to make a sculpture or did a drawling representing the theme of each poem and/or person. 




Public Officials Help with Stem Cell Research

​I am a proud South Philadelphian and my house is located in the 2nd Congressional District of Philadelphia, which is represented by

Democratic Congressman Chaka Fattah.

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Before, we go into Chaka Fattah and his policies here's some quick information about him:

-Born on November 21, 1956. 
-First assumed office on January 4, 1983. 
-Served as a member of the Pennsylvania House of Representatives from the 192nd district from 1983 - 1988. 
-Served as a member of the Pennsylvania Senate from the 7th district from 1989 - 1994. 
-CURRENTLY member of the U.S. House of Representatives from PA's 2nd district since January 3, 1995. 
Fattah's Community Interests/Policy Initiatives: 
-One of his major contributions was his Communities Commited To College (H.R. 1579). This "provides a 50% tax credit to donors who contribute to “qualifying scholarship trusts” which are partnerships between local school districts and community based organizations. (from http://1.usa.gov/rP4dHA
-Student Bill of Rights (H.R. 1295) makes public schools more valuable by assuring that highly effective teachers work there, early childhood education is started, and theres a college preparatory curriculum. 
More policies can be found here : http://1.usa.gov/rP4dHA

Now, when it comes to my main point, and what I'm lobbying for - More federal funding for medical stem-cell research - Chaka Fattah is a complete supporter. In fact, Chaka Fattah has voted IN FAVOR of 6 different stem cell research enhancement acts including: 
-Stem Cell Research Enhancement Act (2005)
-Stem Cell Therapeutic and Research Act of 2005
-The Alternative Pluripotent Stem Cell Therapies Enhancement Act (2006)
-Stem Cell Research Enhancement Act of 2005 (voting in 2006 to overturn Bush's veto against stem cell research)
-Stem Cell Research Enhancement Act of 2007
-Stem Cell Research Enhancement Act of 2007 (once more before Bush vetoed against again) 
Data from : http://bit.ly/rZKurc

It is safe to say that Chaka Fattah is in favor of stem-cell research and definitely believes in all of its potential medical benefits, similarly to the way I look at the future of stem-cell's usage in the medical science field. 
More Fattah info here : http://bit.ly/cCa1cMhttp://1.usa.gov/aI4IFi


A member of the U.S. Congress who is one of the most influential bill creator when it comes to stem-cell research is congresswoman Republican Diana DeGette of Colorado's 1st Congressional District. 

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More about Diana Degette here. http://degette.house.gov/


Diana DeGette sponsored the Stem Cell Research Advancement Act of 2011 (H.R. 2376). This bill was introduced on June 23, 2011 but has not yet been passed by the House, therefore; it has not reached the Senate nor the President (Obama). This bill calls for the Secretary of Health and Human Services to conduct stem-cell research as long as the stated requirements are met. The requirements often change but these are the summarized requirements for the 2011 Act.
-the stem cells have been donated to the vitro fertilization clinics
-determined that the embryos couldn't be used in any female and were going to be discarded. 
-individuals that donated embryos have signed required papers.
-keeps the Secretary of HHS "from using any funds for the conduct or support of human cloning." 
More details can be found here: http://bit.ly/t6zoOz


Both of these public officials share common viewpoints with me when it comes to stem-cell research and some of their other acts/policies. There is no doubt in my mind that Fattah will continue to vote in favor for Stem Cell Research Enhancement Acts as will DeGette. I hope that they continue to advocate for the advancement of stem-cell research due to the medical breakthroughs that can potentially result from their support and advocations. 

El verano pasado proyecto: Abril Woodburn

Reflection

What grade would you assign yourself for each category?

Exceeds Expectations

20-19


Meets Expectations

18-16


Approaches Expectations

15-13


Does Not Meet Expectations

12-1

Design


16

Knowledge

19

Application

16

Presentation

18

Process

17


TOTAL: 86

Strengths of your process or product

Weaknesses of your process or product

I think I used my language skills very well and was loud and clear enough. I also thought it was pretty cool that i had music playing in the background






I wasnt very organized and i didnt do everything in the same order as everyone else so even though i had something i didnt have what was wanted specifically and that messed me up.



How did you apply the SLA core values to your project?
I didnt really use inquiry but i researched alot of summers from my past and i think i gave a pretty good presentation. Collaboration was big too, because we had to rely on others to peer edit.



What did you learn about Spanish through completing this project?
I learned a lot about watching my sentence structure and making sure the spelling is right. A lot of words that I thought had accents really did not.


What did you change about your final project based on peer feedback?  What did you change based on Srta. G’s feedback?




If you had the opportunity to start your project all over again, how would you do it differently?
I would start it the same as everyone else so I could actually get a better process grade on it instead of doing it in different orders and  having my process grade suck.


Did you enjoy this project? Why or why not?
I thought it was cool. Its going to be interesting to see some of these and see students when they were younger.



Do you have any suggestions for me if I do this same project next year?
I would just take a little longer to explain what exactly you want first next etc, I dont really feel like you explained that too well, or you could just get rid of that all together and just make a checklist that they could do in any order because in my opinion that just works so much better then just telling kids what to do when to do it on a creative project.

Lobbying Topic - Solar Energy #2

        I put in some time researching the city officials that are in favor of implementing clean energy all over the city. I immediately stumbled across the Philadelphia Government Mayor's Office of Sustainability. It is a website devoted to Mayor Nutter's plans on making the city the number one clean city of the world. This included the Solar city partnership page. A pretty small page for something that's supposed to represent the entire city, or at least that's what i think. So i dug deeper and found the Greenwork Energy Word Press. Again it talks about Mayor Nutter and also other local and federal officials who celebrate the installation of the solar PV at the water pollution center. After digging a bit more I uncovered a handful of Facility Plant and Utilities Owners are in favor of green energy to their facilities. But few think about the surrounding cities itself. It was even claimed that the Philadelphia Water Department's Solar array could fuel 28 homes a year. Interesting. So i plan on contacting Nutter or even a secretary if possible and talk about our common interests in helping out the city. You know, the stuff that can't be found online.

Lobbying Topic - Solar Energy #2

        I put in some time researching the city officials that are in favor of implementing clean energy all over the city. I immediately stumbled across the Philadelphia Government Mayor's Office of Sustainability. It is a website devoted to Mayor Nutter's plans on making the city the number one clean city of the world. This included the Solar city partnership page. A pretty small page for something that's supposed to represent the entire city, or at least that's what i think. So i dug deeper and found the Greenwork Energy Word Press. Again it talks about Mayor Nutter and also other local and federal officials who celebrate the installation of the solar PV at the water pollution center. After digging a bit more I uncovered a handful of Facility Plant and Utilities Owners are in favor of green energy to their facilities. But few think about the surrounding cities itself. It was even claimed that the Philadelphia Water Department's Solar array could fuel 28 homes a year. Interesting. So i plan on contacting Nutter or even a secretary if possible and talk about our common interests in helping out the city. You know, the stuff that can't be found online.

Blog Post #2: Curfew

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​The representative of the district I live in is Frank DiCicco. He is in charge or district 1. He is also a resident of South Philadelphia. He has dealt with many careers such as public serving as a Committeeman, a long stint at Philadelphia Traffic Court serving as a Director of Scofflaw and Enforcement Units, Courts, and Violations and Cashiers, Budget Analyst, and more. DiCicco always believed in community involvement, which makes a strong community. He has served at many places because he believes in helping everyone and getting involved.

Frank DiCicco voted for curfew. In 2010, he stated the reason he votes for curfew is because of Flashmobs from teenagers. He said that it has created fear for residents and something needed to be done. On September 22, 2011, Nutter announced the new curfew for minors. My legislator is arguing something different from me. I am against the curfew. Now that I think of it, I am not against it. But I would like for the government to realize that there are minors that work after school. Here is a link to the document that was made to make sure the curfew was definite:
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Blog Post #2: Curfew

frank-diccico

​The representative of the district I live in is Frank DiCicco. He is in charge or district 1. He is also a resident of South Philadelphia. He has dealt with many careers such as public serving as a Committeeman, a long stint at Philadelphia Traffic Court serving as a Director of Scofflaw and Enforcement Units, Courts, and Violations and Cashiers, Budget Analyst, and more. DiCicco always believed in community involvement, which makes a strong community. He has served at many places because he believes in helping everyone and getting involved.

Frank DiCicco voted for curfew. In 2010, he stated the reason he votes for curfew is because of Flashmobs from teenagers. He said that it has created fear for residents and something needed to be done. On September 22, 2011, Nutter announced the new curfew for minors. My legislator is arguing something different from me. I am against the curfew. Now that I think of it, I am not against it. But I would like for the government to realize that there are minors that work after school. Here is a link to the document that was made to make sure the curfew was definite:

Lobbying for funding for Philadelphia After school programs: Blog post #2

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Congressman Robert Brady and Senator Robert P. Casey Jr. are two of the several political leaders that represent me and can, quite possibly, support my lobbying case. 

Robert Brady is Philadelphia's congressman. He represents us, District 1 (the city of Philadelphia) in the house of representative. He was born and raised in Philadelphia. Later in his life he became a carpenter and joined both the Carpenter's union and the teacher's union. His main priorities are to defend the rights of veteran officials and other members of the armed forces. Despite his emphasis towards the rights of soldiers, he is pushing to withdrawal American soldiers from Afghanistan. Some of his other priorities directed towards making more laws for the development of Philadelphia and helping people with low economic income. He also supports laws that supply Americans with quality healthcare and prescription drugs. 

Senator Robert P. Casey Jr is an advocate for the state of Pennsylvania in the Senate. His main goals are to create laws that will better our economy, raise employment rates in America, and benefit the children in the same. In the past, he has supported laws that have covered more than 14 million children in America with health care and that work to raise business tax cuts in order to raise the rate of employment in the U.S. He also supports America's  economy and pushed to make it stable. An example of this is his opposition to China's devaluation of its currency,which raises the unemployment rate in America. He wants to help stabilize our economy. 

I feel like both of these political leaders share something in common with me. Robert Brady and I are alike because we were both born and raised in Philadelphia and feel a strong need to help those less fortunate then us. Senator Robert P. Casey Jr and I are similar because we both support the rights of children and want to make conditions better for them in America.

I feel like Senator Robert P. Casey Jr will be more likely to support my lobbying case because he is more concerned with the rights of children than congressman Brady is. Congressman's Brady's interest's are concentrated more broadly on the rights of the citizens of Philadelphia in general, and not specifically of the children of Philadelphia. Congressman Brady might also support my lobbying case, as he works to help people with disadvantages. Some students in Philadelphia are at a disadvantage because of where they live- they feel unsafe in their own neighborhoods. This is what has compelled me to support after school programs in Philadelphia public schools. It might also compel Congressman Brady in the same way. 

Sources: 

http://casey.senate.gov/about/biography/

http://www.brady.house.gov/index.cfm?sectionid=40&sectiontree=6,40  



Net Neutrality - Blog post #2

In the ongoing debate of net neutrality, the people representing me on a federal level are the House Representative for the 1st district of Pennsylvania, and the Senators of Pennsylvania. These elected officials are as follows: Robert Brady is my Representative, and Robert Casey Jr. and Patrick Toomey are Pennsylvania's Senators.

Robert Brady has served seven terms, and is currently serving his eighth term as the Representative of Pennslyvania's first Congressional district. Robert Brady has consistently earned high marks ("A" or 100 percent, depending on the grading system) from every national human rights organization that scores Congress. Robert Brady is a huge advocate for improving the quality of life for financially disadvantaged people, as well as the well being of veterans. In addition, he voted no on H J Res 37, a bill intended to stop the FCC from enforcing rules that would keep the internet a free place, which supports my cause.

Robert Casey Jr has been a Pennsylvania senator since 2007. He's very interested in the U.S job market. He's made many pushes to give tax breaks to small companies, and eliminate tax incentives for large companies to send U.S jobs overseas. He is also a huge supporter of future generations, and is an avid advocate for child education and child care. He voted yes on S Amdt 3907, an amendment to a bill that prevented telecommunication providers from performing surveillance on their consumers through the services they provided. This is another key point in net neutrality, that internet service providers cannot do anything with the information sent through their service unless it violates a law/terms of service.

Lastly, Patrick Toomey, even though he was elected to the first Congressional district of Pennsylvania just this year, he had previously served the fifteenth Congressional district of Pennsylvania from 1999 to 2004. He is very interested in improving the economy, and as such serves on many boards and committees regarding the economy. He voted yes on H.R.3709, a bill that prevents local and state governments from taxing internet access for another five years. Even if it's not the most related bill to net neutrality, it does illustrate some interest in maintaining internet accessibility, one of the founding principles of net neutrality.

Although it seems that net neutrality is on the back burner of legislation, based on these voting records, I think it's fair to say that they would all be in support of net neutrality, or at the very least neutral.

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1. This project was intended to make us learn what people did during their previous summers while also practicing conjugations. 
2.I used Inquiry because I wanted to know what I did that was good and bad when my peers peer edited my work. I used collaboration when they edited my work and I edited their work. I used research when I went through my Step dad’s iPhoto and looked for pictures of previous summer. I used presentation when I made my iMovie. And my reflection is what you’re currently reading.

3. I learned how to conjugate better in the past tense and about other people's summers.
4. I feel like I understood it really well from the get go. I feel like I moved forward a lot more once I sat down with my step dad to find pictures from previous summers.
5. I would look for more pictures of past summers and use a lot more descriptions.
6. I enjoyed this project a lot. It helped me learn something I wasn't very good at (past tense conjugations) and it felt like a good, and laid back way to help me learn spanish. 

Bike paths lobbying-Blog #2

The second step to my lobbying topic is to find out the State representative regarding to my topic. My representative is also the representative of the State of Philadelphia Traffic Court. The representative for the Philadelphia Traffic Court is FRANK DICICCO, along with seven traffic court judges.


 
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            Frank Dicicco councilman is currently serving as a Philadelphia’s First District City Councilman. Dicicco started out his life resident in South Philadelphia and his career began at Philadelphia Traffic during the year of 1967. After 1986 Dicicco left Traffic Court and became a Budget Analyst for the Pennsylvania State Senate. However, in 1990, Frank Dicicco advises his skills to bear as the “Deputy Director of Special Investigations for the Philadelphia City Controller.” But after 1993, Decicco decided to return to Philadelphia Traffic Court and work as an Administrator, which he then run for the First District City Council. Dicicco is now working for the Philadelphia district 1 and the founding of Philadelphia.

           

            During November 18, 2009 Councilman DiCicco introduced a Bill regarding to bikers and vehicle in Philadelphia. The bill is basically states for riding safety purposes and to recognize more laws in Philadelphia/Pennsylvania that is relating to double wheels vehicle. Dicicco and other council members are working together to enforce more laws as well as rights for the bikers out there in Philadelphia.

 

 

 

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In this project, we had to collect pictures from our summer and write captions to go with them in the past tense in spanish. The mission was to show that we have a firm understanding of past tense conjugation in spanish. 
I used the research part of the core values in this project when I needed to look up a word or conjugation. I used the inquiry value when i asked questions about this project. I used the collaboration part when I peer edited to improve my project. When I did the voiceover i used the presentation value. I am doing the refection part of the core values right now.
I learned about conjugation in the past tense for normal verbs and even some irregular verbs. I also learned more about imovie. 
If i could do anything differently, I would add more pictures.
I enjoyed this project because I got to look through pictures from past summers.

Spanish Lesson (Anita Hutchins & Maribel Kang)

Asking/Telling Time

What if you were placed in a situation where you had to ask for the time in Spanish or someone who only spoke Spanish asked you for the time? Here is what you would need to know:

1.
What time is it?(English)=¿Que hora es?(Spanish)
2.
If the hour is 1, say "es la".
If the hour is 2-12, say "son las".

1:00=Es la una. 3:00=Son las tres. 5:00=Son las cinco.
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3.
If the minutes are 1-30, say "y" between the hour and minutes.
If the minutes are 31-59, state the hour ahead. Then, say "menos". Finally, say how minutes there are until the next hour.

2:12=Son las dos y doce.  7:36=Son las ocho menos veinticuatro.

Additional Information:
-If the hour is 1, say "una" instead of "uno".
-If the hour is on the dot, say "en punto" after the hour.

7:00=Son las siete en punto.

-Cuarto=15 

3:15=Son las tres y cuarto. 3:45=Son las cuatro menos cuarto.

-Media=30 

7:30=Son las siete y media.
Greetings

 

If you want to start, then end a conversation with a Spanish-speaking person, what would you need to know?

 

1.Openers

-¡Hola!= Hi

-¡Buenos Dias!= Good Morning

-¡Buenas Tardes!= Good Afternoon

-¡Buenas Noches!= Good Night

 

2.How are you?

-¿Como estas? (informal)

-¿Como esta usted? (formal)

-¿Como estan ustedes? (plural)

 

3.Responses to “How are you?”

-Feliz= Happy

-Bien/Regular= OK

-Mal/Horrible= Bad/Poorly

-Mas o menos= So so

 

4.Farewells

-Adios= Goodbye (Generic)

-Chao= Goodbye (Slang)

-Hasta luego= See you later.

-Hasta manana= See you tomorrow.

-Mucho gusto= Nice to meet you.

-Un placer= It’s a pleasure.

-Encantada/o= Charmed.

Courtesy phrases

 

If you want to be friendly with a Spanish-speaking person, what terms do you need to know?

 

-Gracias. = Thank you.

-Muchas Gracias. = Thanks a lot.

-Mil Gracias. = Thanks a million.

-De nada. = You’re welcome.

-Por favor. = Please.

-Con permiso. (when someone’s standing in your way)= Excuse me.

-Disculpe. (to get someone’s attention)= Excuse me.

-Perdon. (if you accidently bump into someone)= Excuse me.


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Basic Conversation

If you want a basic conversation with someone new that speaks Spanish, what questions would you want ask? How do you respond to these questions?

 

Basic Conversation Questions

What is your name? = ¿Como te llamas? (informal), ¿Como se llama? (formal)

Where do live? = ¿De donde eres?

How old are you? = ¿Cuanto anos tienes?

 

Basic Conversation Answers

Me llamo es… = My name is…

Soy de (blank) pero vivo en Filadelfia = I am from (blank) but live in Philadelphia.

Yo tengo (#) anos = I am (#) years old.

Lobbying Blog Post #2

Philadelphia City Officials

State Representative Tom Murt

State Representative Dennis O’Brien

State Representative John Taylor

City Council Brian O’Neill C

City Council Jack Kelly

City Council Frank Rizzo

City Commisioner Joseph Duda

 

Anna C. Verna, who is the president of the city council, became the first women in Philadelphia’s 300-year history to become the president of the city council. Verna is a one of the supports of tax reductions She always been a supporter of wage and business tax reductions and committed to public services. Anna C. Verna represents the 2nd district in Philadelphia. According to Philadelphia’s City Council page, it claims Anna C. Verna fought for $6,000,000 in funding in the city’s operating budget for 100 more police officers and supports the idea of curfew. In December 2006, the council passed a bill that she strongly supported calling for $30,000,000 of the city’s surplus to be set aside for recreation, police and fire facilities. She’s going to make sure there is also money to improve public education.