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English Portfolio
Throughout
my ninth grade year in Science Leadership Academy, I have overall progressed to
different stages of writing. Here in my English portfolio varies my multiple
pieces of work that show I have progressed in many categories in finishing the
school year.
In the beginning of the year, Ms.Dunn assigned
us the project of creating a "Me Magazine”. The magazine contains
articles, pictures, and facts about your life. In my magazine, I put three
articles that are written on my inspiration for music, passion for the Twilight
Saga, and Christmas that my family attends each year. A reason for creating
this project was so we could reflect on our work at the end of the year. After
reviewing my magazine in May, I seen how much I improve on my academic
life.
In the second quarter benchmark, we were
learning about vignettes. A vignette is a story that illustrates a short
episode in life. We read multiple examples of vignettes and we were assigned to
create a vignette about an important part in our lives. I chose to write about
my third grade year. The vignette explains important details in the year that
lead up to my two front teeth being chipped. These important details have
changed me to become who I am now and for that I titled this piece Karma.
Karma
January 2005
I
was in third grade when I perceived this world as unfair and confusing. Being
the victim of damage changed my perspective on how I labeled people. Being nine
years old supplied me with happiness and a peace of mind of my surroundings. I never
expected being shattered in half by people I knew and respected. I figured that
no matter what I did in that moment, I would still get hurt for what I did
wrong. But what did I do wrong? Was that consequence necessary for picking that
choice? I say no, but what I think doesn’t matter. Karma has that funny effect.
What goes up must go down.
And I did.
September 2004
When I came into the classroom
the first morning, I stopped and they stared. Finding a seat was harder that
year considering the fact that I tripped on the walk there. After about two
months of the stumbling issues, the laughter stopped. My classmates realized
that I didn’t have the best sense of equilibrium. Yet they could tell my
intelligence carried me to the honors as if I was on a magic carpet ride. (Simile)
That was what kept me from recognizition the first month.
Ms. Whaley finally got through a
class lesson without interruptions. The reason why was because half of the
class was asleep. We were supposed to have one partner to complete the
assignment with. The awkward problem was which partner. During the lesson, only
so many of us were awake. Destiny and I were the most wide-awake. So
automatically we should have worked together. But that’s not how it followed
through.
Tap, Tap, Tap!( Rep-for-affect)
Danielle woke to me banging on her
desk behind me. I told her as quiet as I could to wake up so we could work
together instead of the new girl and me. Yeah, it was wrong but usually when I
stood beside Destiny, I drifted away from the social group I belonged- or
though I belonged- in.
“Danielle, wake up!” I shook her
lightly.
“Huh, what you wake me up for?”
“ We have to work together, hurry up
before she hear me.”
“ Who?”
“Destiny!”
“Oh good, I don’t know why you even
talk to that little girl.”
I lied completely. “ I only do it
cause I feel bad for her.” The honest truth was that I enjoyed Destiny’s
company and it was a lot healthier than Danielle’s or the rest of my friends. Though
I would never admit that to them.
“Its not fair to her to have to be
here and get messed with.” I added in for my benefit.
“Jordan, its not fair to us to have to smell her.” Danielle
laughed harshly.
(Dialogue)
What was even worst than her comment
was the fact that Destiny heard that. She heard our whole conversation and the
only thing I could do was continue to look at her with guilty, pleading, and
worried eyes. (Magic 3)
I
knew I did a bad thing by turning away from Destiny. I made it worse when I
talked about her even though it wasn’t true. I was changing in a bad way, being
easily influenced by the anger and hatred around me. The poison was affecting
Destiny too, she looked into my eyes and knew I was sorry but didn’t care. I
was just another label to her, and I was labeled Liar.
Accusations
were being passed around being the new trend in the catalogue. (Metaphor)
The sweetest gossip however was that boys were stronger than girls and were
undefeatable.
It was obvious that that statement
would be tested soon. Recess was next on the schedule and I chose to be alone
that period. I knew play fighting would turn into serious fighting and that
someone would get hurt. I knew my own strength and didn’t have to prove
anything. But apparently, boys don’t know their’s.
A classmate of mine got suspended for
hurting a girl during the game. Recess was taken away from us all and now the
staff had an angry case of 10 year olds to deal with. For the rest of the week,
the contestants decided to play in the classrooms or afterschool. I still couldn’t be convinced to play and
that was the final answer. No.
January 2005
Tuesday 2:25 pm
English Class
Room 325
“Jordan come on I got your seat”
Danielle tells me.
“Thank you”
(Dialogue)
It was the last class of the day. I wanted
to go home afterschool and do homework and eat. That was how I planned to fix
my worries. Instead my solution was delayed.
I was sitting with my friends while
doing my work when the terror started.
“Destiny, girl I like your hair! Who
did it your little brother?” Shamika shot out.
Oh no. I thought to myself. Please just leave this girl alone today.
“No one did anything to my
hair, Shamika.” Destiny replied tiredly, she could tell she was being sarcastic
and sassy.
“That’s what I thought, but I
just had to ask.”
(Dialogue)
This was pointless; the bickering
didn’t make sense enough to understand but enough to make someone cry. And that’s
what Destiny did, she cried. She was fed up with the comments that were
undeserved. I couldn’t help her,
like before I turned my back on my former friend and continue with my crowd.
The only difference was that I didn’t comment at all. Not to defend her or
embarrass. For this decision I knew I was even worse than before.
Beep, Beep!!
The bell rung signifying that the
school day was over. I packed my books and went to stand in line.
“Okay everyone, make sure you have all of your work complete and
have a good night-”Miss Finch was cut off and the life for me began.
The boy who got suspended took his
anger out on Shamika. He pushed her into the wall and she pushed back. Danielle
head-locked him and the rest of the class joined in. There I was trying to get
out of the commotion with a few others and got trapped.
I was tripped and brought to the
floor. I tried to get back up but I couldn’t. Someone-a boy- stomped my head
into the floor.
“Stop, Stop everyone!” The teacher
screamed.
“Jordan?”
I rolled over on my back with tears
in my eyes and blood in my mouth.
“Jordan!” Danielle cried. “She chipped
her teeth!”
These words were foreign to me, but I
couldn’t make since of them because I was hurt. Physically, mentally,
emotionally, and verbally.
“Help her, get her up.”
“Jordan”
“Oh god”
“Ew”
“Ha ha ha”
They screamed all these things and
yet I was still on the floor. It was my best friend- my protector, the
influencer, -Danielle that helped my up and shielded me through their staring
eyes.
It seemed like when we passed Destiny
on the way to the nurse that we knew this was coming. My terror, she served
hers. She didn’t deserve it and now she wouldn’t get it. It was my time to
stand by her and protect just like Danielle did for me. I was in third grade
when I perceived this world as unfair and confusing. Being the victim of damage
changed my perspective on how I labeled people. Being nine years old supplied
me with happiness and a peace of mind of my surroundings. I never expected to
be damaged and cautious about every step I make throughout life. Now when I
smile I know that its because I‘m happy but others see the story behind it.
They see a person who has been broken in different sections and in different
ways. But they still see me smiling and that karma didn’t keep me down.
In the middle of the school year, independent
reading assignments were assigned to us all. I choose to write my review on the
book Eclipse from the Twilight Saga written by
Stephanie Meyer. The book is the third book in the series and because of that,
it answers the questions that left readers in suspense. This is a book that I
recommend to
many.
Third book in the Twilight Saga
By the author Stephanie Meyer, creator of the Twilight
Saga and also the best selling novel “The Host”.
Movie Release Date: June 30, 2010
DVD movie release date: December 2, 2010
Eclipse is the third best selling novel in the
Twilight Saga.
“It keeps you hooked from the outset in the same
direct and spellbinding way as the previous two books.” Says Catherine Roberts
Read more at Suite101: Eclipse
- Twilight Saga: Plot & Overview of the Third Book by Stephanie Meyer http://www.suite101.com/content/eclipse-twilight-saga-a106019#ixzz19HD3VIPW
Main Characters
Isabella Swan- The main character who is in love with
a vampire.
Edward Cullen- A main character who is in a vampire
and apart of the Cullen Family.
Jacob Black- A main character who is a werewolf (shape
shifter) and apart of the Quileute tribe.
Eclipse
is the third book in the Twilight Saga by Stephanie Meyer. Eclipse sees the
couple Bella and Edward reunited from there separation in the last book New
Moon. Bella has chosen to live the rest of her life eternally with her love
Edward Cullen who is a vampire. Edward requests that they get married before
any changing is done to Bella. However, Bella is sensitive on age and doesn’t
want to get any older. But she is also sensitive on the marriage subject.
The
conflict in this book is that Victoria is in morning from her love James being
killed by Edward (which occurred Twilight) because of Bella. She seeks
vengeance against the Cullens but mostly to Bella. Victoria thinks it is fair
to kill Edward’s mate rather than himself. She sees that she can defeat the
Cullen Clan if she creates a newborn vampire army. The newborns are stronger
than mature vampires and she creates 19 of them.
Alice Cullen has a vision of the army
is coming soon and realizes that it isn’t enough of the Cullens to protect
themselves or the town. The Cullen Clan makes a truce with the Quileute
werewolves giving them the advantage to protect Bella. The groups are natural
enemies but they decide to work together to protect what they cherish.
This book revolves on the many
conflicts of Bella’s choice on immortality and her love for Edward and Jacob.
She must choose whom she will be with. Jacob who began as a friend who stood by
Bella in her time of need, grow deep feeling for her and fought for her love
through the book. Before she can have peace in her life, she has to live
through Victoria’s multiple attacks with the ones that love her, protecting her
The third quarter of English, we focused on reading varies of
literature. A major book that we read was The
Odyssey by Homer. After analyzing the book the class was assigned
multiple assignments. One major assignment was our third quarter benchmark, and
another was the myth project. For the benchmark, we had to create a comparison
essay between a character from The Odyssey
and another from a different piece of literature of our choice. I
choose to compare the character Penelope from The Odyssey with Bella Swan from the Twilight Saga. In the essay, the thesis-Although
Penelope & Bella are left behind, Penelope is stronger and uses her
intelligence to survive- is supported.
Jordan
Hairston
Penelope
& Bella Comparison Essay
3rd Quarter
March 11, 2011Two important female characters in literature are Penelope and Bella Swan. Penelope is the wife of the King of Ithaca, Odysseus. He leaves home for years leaving Penelope behind with multiple problems. Bella is the main character from the Twilight Saga. She is in love with the vampire Edward Cullen who leaves her side in the second book New Moon. Being separated affects people differently as it affected Penelope and Bella in different ways. They fall silent at times when they’re alone, they scream and cry. They’re adjusting to the separation at different paces. Penelope is wiser and clever as she faces the obstacles that come her way for twenty years. Bella on the other hand is dependent and reckless as she tries to get over the Cullens’ departure. So although both Penelope and Bella are left behind, Penelope is stronger and uses her intelligence to survive.
Creative Project
The
myth project was an assignment that allowed each person from the class choose a
myth from The Odyssey. I
choose the Muses to focus on. More than that, I focused particularly on the
fifth Muse Terpsichore. Terpsichore is the goddess of choral songs and dance. I
presented this project in a paper and also on a poster board. The project tells
her myth and gives more background information for better understanding.
Takeaway
I think the myth of
Terpsichore and the Muses still exist because they have peace in there art of
inspiration. Ancient people might have enjoyed the myth, music and poetry
because there art guaranteed happiness. The Muses are listed below and there
qualities.
Calliope was the Muse of
epic poetry
Clio was the Muse of
history
Euterpe was the Muse of
lyric poetry
Melpomene was the Muse
of tragedy
Terpsichore was the Muse
of choral songs and the dance
Erato was the Muse of love
poetry
Polyhymnia was the Muse
of sacred poetry
Urania was the Muse of
astronomy
Thalia was the Muse of comedy
http://nibsblog.wordpress.com/2008/09/17/greek-myth-4-terpsichore/
Journals
The
following journals are my reflection to the questions and topics that came up
in class throughout the entire school year.
1) What
are some expectations that are put on you as a person?
Most of the time, a lot of pressure is put on
me. Most of the time I can handle it. Some expectations that are put upon me
are success, and being depended on. My personal opinion on the pressure and
expectations is that it should be thrown away a little at a time. My family is
successful in their careers and overall life. For me, that success feels
promised to me when its not fully guaranteed. My expectations of myself are success and doing the right
things in the right ways. I also expect myself to know certain things and to
act certain ways to maintain the most important expectations. One of my most
self-expectations is to never get hurt or lose. I know that even if I don’t perform
to at 100%, that it’s coming later. Sometimes it just takes patience to see it.
2)
How does your environment shape who you become?
My environment meaning my surroundings and the
people I am around. These things affect me by easily influencing me. If the
people I am around are a bad influence then sooner or later I will pick up bad
habits from them. Bad habits like cursing or slacking around and not worrying
about what may come next. Eventually I will loose those habits by picking up
better habits from better environments. If I am in an organized, clean and safe
place then my world will adjust to that. A working environment has the best
affect than them all. That way I am easily influenced to be hard working, happy
and at peace. I was shaped mostly by a hard working and dreaming environment
yet I was easily influenced by opportunity abused habits.
After
reviewing my ninth grade English portfolio, I see that I have improved in many
ways. Working hard in many areas of work used to be a dread to me, something
that I struggled with, but now I see that once I have a topic that is enjoyable
to me, I can easily get things done. Working in this class this year has made
that possible. With a little more focus, I know that I will enter tenth grade
prepared with a smile on my face and inspiration on my mind.
Portfolio Draft
Throughout
my ninth grade year in Science Leadership Academy, I have overall progressed to
different stages of writing. Here in my English portfolio varies my multiple
pieces of work that show I have progressed in many categories in finishing the
school year. In the beginning of the year, Ms.Dunn assigned
us the project of creating a "Me Magazine”. The magazine contains
articles, pictures, and facts about your life. In my magazine, I put three
articles that are written on my inspiration for music, passion for the Twilight
Saga, and Christmas that my family attends each year. A reason for creating
this project was so we could reflect on our work at the end of the year. After
reviewing my magazine in May, I seen how much I improve on my academic
life. In the second quarter benchmark, we were
learning about vignettes. A vignette is a story that illustrates a short
episode in life. We read multiple examples of vignettes and we were assigned to
create a vignette about an important part in our lives. I chose to write about
my third grade year. The vignette explains important details in the year that
lead up to my two front teeth being chipped. These important details have
changed me to become who I am now and for that I titled this piece Karma. In the middle of the school year, independent
reading assignments were assigned to us all. I choose to write my review on the
book Eclipse from the Twilight Saga written by
Stephanie Meyer. The book is the third book in the series and because of that,
it answers the questions that left readers in suspense. This is a book that I
recommend to many. The third quarter of English, we
focused on reading varies of literature. A major book that we read was The Odyssey by Homer. After
analyzing the book the class was assigned multiple assignments. One major
assignment was our third quarter benchmark, and another was the myth project.
For the benchmark, we had to create a comparison essay between a character from
The Odyssey and another from a
different piece of literature of our choice. I choose to compare the character
Penelope from The Odyssey with
Bella Swan from the Twilight Saga.
In the essay, the thesis-Although Penelope & Bella are left
behind, Penelope is stronger and uses her intelligence to survive- is
supported. The
myth project was an assignment that allowed each person from the class choose a
myth from The Odyssey. I
choose the Muses to focus on. More than that, I focused particularly on the fifth
Muse Terpsichore. Terpsichore is the goddess of choral songs and dance. I
presented this project in a paper and also on a poster board. The project tells
her myth and gives more background information for better understanding. Journals The
following journals are my reflection to the questions and topics that came up
in class throughout the entire school year. 1) What
are some expectations that are put on you as a person? Most of the time, a lot of pressure is put on
me. Most of the time I can handle it. Some expectations that are put upon me
are success, and being depended on. My personal opinion on the pressure and
expectations is that it should be thrown away a little at a time. My family is
successful in their careers and overall life. For me, that success feels
promised to me when its not fully guaranteed. My expectations of myself are success and doing the right
things in the right ways. I also expect myself to know certain things and to
act certain ways to maintain the most important expectations. One of my most
self-expectations is to never get hurt or lose. I know that even if I don’t
perform to at 100%, that it’s coming later. Sometimes it just takes patience to
see it. 2)
How does your environment shape who you become? My environment meaning my surroundings and the
people I am around. These things affect me by easily influencing me. If the
people I am around are a bad influence then sooner or later I will pick up bad
habits from them. Bad habits like cursing or slacking around and not worrying
about what may come next. Eventually I will loose those habits by picking up
better habits from better environments. If I am in an organized, clean and safe
place then my world will adjust to that. A working environment has the best
affect than them all. That way I am easily influenced to be hard working, happy
and at peace. I was shaped mostly by a hard working and dreaming environment
yet I was easily influenced by opportunity abused habits. After
reviewing my ninth grade English portfolio, I see that I have improved in many
ways. Working hard in many areas of work used to be a dread to me, something
that I struggled with, but now I see that once I have a topic that is enjoyable
to me, I can easily get things done. Working in this class this year has made
that possible. With a little more focus, I know that I will enter tenth grade
prepared with a smile on my face and inspiration on my mind.
TFarah History/English Q4 BM
I really liked the research aspect of this project, because even though sifting through so much information was hard, it sort of had that lazy-fun-ness of when you're reading something on Wikipedia that links to another article so you start reading that, and you end up somewhere totally unexpected. It was especially fun because it was something I already had some interest in education, even though I hadn't really expected to be doing a project about education reform. I knew that changing Bill Gates' childhood would have a huge impact on the computer industry, but it was strange to see how that effect carried over to the realm of politics and public education. It was also weirdly interesting to look pictures of really, really old computers, and to see how many other people had made their own predictions of what 2011 would look like without Microsoft.
If I did this project again, I would make sure I started with a clearer idea of exactly what I wanted the project to be. I had ideas for my fake primary sources when I started, but I didn't really think about how I would put them together into a single project, and I feel like it's a bit awkward to just have a bunch of random papers. I also found the graphic organizer really helpful. I think if you do this project again, you should have some additional organization tools for students, because with a project like this it's really easy to just get totally lost.
Final Stroke
This year in art has really inspired me, it has brought out my artistic quality more than I ever imagined it would. The thing I love most about art though is the class itself, being able to go at your own pace and have the freedom to create whatever you want is the best. Leaving SLA, I love Ms. Hull with all my heart, she has given me a new outlook on teacher-student relationships as well as art. I always had it settled that when I went to college, I was going to stop my art. Now, I will go off if I don't get a teacher like Ms. Hull.
My four years here are done, and its been great. : )
Photo Fun
Photo editing is really fun once you get the hang of it. I am by no means the master of Photo Shop but with the skills I learned in digital video class I can make some pretty cool images. At first photo shop for me was a little intimidating but its not as hard as it seems. For this photo I wanted a edgy pop art confetiti look to the picture so I really just adjusted the lighting levels. Also around the eyes I went in and filled the area in with black to make the eyes stand out. And filled in the hair to frame my face.
A picture is really interesting because it captures all feelings and happening of one moment and freezes it. You can change and edit a million times but you still get the same feeling and emotion as the original.
Getting My Mojo Back
The past couple weeks I lost myself, myself as Desireé and my self as an artist. I need to get back to the person I was and the artist I had become. With this project I started from scratch. I set up still life objects as my models and started with charcoal between my fingers. Then just drew. It took more than four class periods with a couple of struggles. My struggles came down to a battle between my worst enemy, the human mouth, on the skull I was drawing. It was challenging but the most important part is remembering to be patient and not get frustrated. Everything doesn't have to be perfect that's the beauty in art.
During those class periods I only thought about what I was drawing not everything that was keeping me depressed. I drew until I felt finished. When I was done I stood back to take it all in. I wasn't completely in love with the finished product but I was happy with it and a little tiny bit proud that I finished the piece.
P.S. Sorry about the Quality of the picture I had to use my phone my computer hasn't been functioning at its best for awhile now.
Jesus Jimenez - Humanities Portfolio 2011
The world is an unfair place. It's our duty as citizens of this planet to try to do the best to make it fair for everyone. (The beginning of the year)
I
have many beautiful memories of this past year. My knowledge of the
world has not only expanded, but my views of what goes on in planet
Earth have changed as well. During my year in both English 2 and
World History, I was introduced to many subjects that I could’ve
ignored if it wasn’t for school. One of them was inequality.
Inequality is defined by Dictionary.com to be a “Difference in
size, degree, circumstances, etc.;”. I find this to be an accurate
definition for the world we currently live in. An Op-Ed I wrote
earlier in the year has a lot of the points I thought to be very
important when pitching ideas to make the world a more equal
place.
Here’s one quote from that
Op-Ed: “We could go for a social-political view like Marxism or
such, that can give the people actual power in their government. Many
of them are possible solutions to inequality in the world. Too many
beliefs and righteousness is in jeopardy for other people for them to
agree with this.”
A year ago I couldn’t see
myself writing about things like this. After reading through some of
my stuff from this year, I can’t help but think that some of the
reason the world is like this is my fault. I try to be the best
person I can possibly be. When there are moments in life where I
think I did something wrong or unacceptable, I usually try to fix it.
But things like this, that affect the world or a society, I want to
take the blame for it because I’m not doing anything at all. I
could be making a change in the world or have an interest in
something.
A few more things, the 2010 -
2011 school year has been an excellent one for me. I have not only
grown in age, but in experience. Experiences from opportunities given
to me from events, work, and especially people. "We have to be
simple minded when it comes to changing personalities slightly. Think
too much, and we might change the character completely." this
quote is from my Literary Lenses Explanation. We took the book:
“Their Eyes were Watching God”, and looked at it through
different views (Feminism, Marxism, etc.).
The biggest message I took away from this year's classes was that there will always be inequality in the world. Yes, we can try to make it a better place and all that stuff, but there will always be an opposition with it's followers going against the point that both you and I know is right. Then I learned another thing, just because I'm just one person doesn't mean I should stop doing something I know is right. Many people in history have done magnificent things on their own and with the support of people. I'm positive I'll be one of them one day, if something ever comes up in the world that I strongly disagree with, I will make my voice be heard. Not only that but I would've been part of something way bigger, and that's how you fight something bigger. You fight it with support and numbers (amounts of people).
Zombies: Life of the Undead
By: Alexander Ringgold
Miss Me
Kyla Carden
Natikwa Goodwin
Jareese Long
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Portfolio - Journals
Feb. 17th, 2011.
Um, An impossible task that I’m usually faced with is completing a giant assignment at 2 am during the end of summer because I never do my work right when I get it. I’m not exactly alone though since half of the grade is up messaging each other asking how the heck they’re going to complete it in 3 hours. Somehow we all manage to finish and get a passing grade though we normally help each other on the questions to get it done as fast as we can. I’ll never learn to get my work done…
OH WELL, I’m passing.
Feb. 2nd 2011
A hero in my opinion doesn’t need to be able to fly, or melt things with their awesomeness. They are just somebody who has exceptional qualities and strong emotions. Somebody with an enormous amount of intelligence is just as much a hero as somebody with no fears. Sure Superman and all are great but the chances of somebody who can fly around and save the day dressed in tight clothes are kind of small. Chuck Norris is obviously an exception, as he does possess the powers listed in the beginning of this article and many more of course.
January 20, 2011.
1.) My advisor mister chase is an excellent storyteller. He once rambled on about bees or something for a good 10 minutes. Making it up as he went along. It was pretty cool.
2.) I really enjoy reading story’s about survival in the wilderness. My favorite book has been brains winter since I read it in the 6th grade. I’ve read it several times. I would love to read stories like this more often but can never find one that catches my attention. Hopefully I’ll find one soon.
January 24, 2011
1.) To me, being an adult is nothing more than being at least 21. Although, ACTING like a 21 year old is something a lot of people need to learn. If you abuse your children or commit constant felonies you aren’t an adult, just a fully developed buffoon. You know you’re finished when you have all privileges, aside from the senior citizen discounts.
Portfolio - Independent Reading
Into Thin Air
By: Jon Krakauer
Into
thin air, this
compassionate story of survival brings you into a benumbing scenario with
almost no hope of living through a living nightmare. Option calls it “A searing book” while Elle states “Into Thin Air
is being billed as ‘one of the most memorable adventure sagas of all time,’ and
is likely to earn that accolade . . . Krakauer makes one excellent decision
after another about how to tell it.” Being a New York Times best seller, this
book is not one to be overlooked and is a great investment of time.
Jon Krakauer is an ordinary man who is
tasked with the job of describing the commercialism on Mount Everest. Jon
thinks to him self “What better way to do this then climb the mountain myself?”
So that he does. Before climbing up the mountain however, he realizes it’s not
an easy task so he joins the climbing industry with the name of Adventure
Consultants who assigns him a group of hiker companions as well as a leader
under the name of Robert Hall.
Throughout the trip Jon begins writing down
his experience, hoping to be able to share the experience after. As the hikers
and he gain altitude, they begin to succumb to the wide array of effects that
come with hiking such as weight lose, sickness, and drowsiness. From the
inexperienced hikers to the veterans, all people begin slowly bringing
themselves to their unaware endings that will soon befall them.
The turning point in the story is when
Robert signals for a turning point in the trip. For those unaware, turning
point is a given time where everyone must head back to their campground to risk
death. In this case it is 2:00pm. As the hike returning down ensues. Several
members of the trip die from blizzards and oxygen depletion in the unforgiving
terrain. Miraculously, Jon survives.
Without a doubt, the most heart grabbing
character in this story would have to be Robert. This is for the sole reason of
his skills of a leader. In one instance he risks his life to save others from a
terrifying blizzard that had come over the mountain.
I
feel as though people could learn the importance of teamwork and good planning,
as well as never expect the best luck. I doubt any of the hikers anticipated
there hike going to hell in such a high degree, but with teamwork, some managed
to overcome nature.
I
can wholeheartedly say that this is one of the greatest books I’ve ever read.
My favorite form of reading is a man verses nature type theme, and the fact
that this actually happened to people fueled my excitement even more. Although there were some flaws with the
book grabbing my attention, the most notable of course being that for a while
in the beginning I was bored out of my mind. being there wasn’t much of my
interest. I liked that it strengthened itself content wise greatly during the
middle and ended very strong.
Being
a real experience to somebody, changing something would drastically alter the
storyline as everything affects it in some way. It would be rather entertaining
to put this in a desert scenario though. Rather than a blizzard it would be a
sandstorm, or perhaps dehydration replacing reduced oxygen levels.
I
don’t find myself relating to any characters in this book. I have never leaded
any organization nor have I been put in a near death scenario. I obviously have
not ever died as well.
I’m
sure some of the survivors left to die felt alone, scared and like they had no
God or master looking over them. I’ve felt this way in some cases, although not
in their scenario. Overall, I could relate to this book in very few ways. I
just do not find myself relating to a situation where the temperature is far
below freezing in a blizzard and I have no means of survival.
I
would say anybody who enjoys a great story about survival through teamwork as
well as luck, or just anybody looking for a great booking renowned for its
content.
Anthony Buchanico
Orange Stream
January 10th, 2011
Portfolio - Macbeth Creative Piece
Portfolio - Odysseus Compare and Contrast
Anthony
Buchanico
Orange
Stream
English,
March 6th 2011
In the eyes
of several, Odysseus can relate to almost any fictional character ever made due
to the major influence his story has had on modern day media. One of the most
significant instances of this would be the Star Wars prequels. Although
different in several ways, the tale of Odysseus can closely be related to
Anakin Skywalker and his struggle for sanity due to his loved one.
The
story of Odysseus starts off with a foresight to the end of the journey where
he has been stranded on a land away from all he loves and only one person to
care for him due to his carelessness.
Similarly, if we go to the end of Anakin’s journey he is stranded alone
in his own landmass of a prison with only one man to care for him. This can be thought of as the first
notable similarity. It shows both the character’s poor judgment in teamwork and
desire to save their lover has been their downfall. Going back to the beginning
of Odysseus’ journey, he must gather men to help him save his loved one from
harm without them exactly knowing what his intentions were. Likewise, in episode two of Anakin’s
journey, he finds his loved one and himself facing certain danger. With the use
of his crew known as the Jedi, he manages to save his loved one, and himself.
This states another ground point. Although these occurrences are not in similar
order, they can still be thought of as similar purposes. This occurrence in
Anakin’s life can also be thought to pertain to Odysseus and his crew facing
Circes, seeing as it was a wicked beast that tears apart people and Anakin was
faced against a set of beasts himself.
These
journeys, no matter how similar, are still “A long time ago” and “A galaxy far
far” apart. For one, the Star Wars
trilogy is scientifically ions ahead of Ancient Greek civilization seeing as
they use terminating lasers, aircrafts and many more futuristic inventions. The
stories, no matter how similar in plot cannot be an exact copy of the other. If
they were to do so it’d more likely be called “The Odyssey: Episodes 1-9!”
Another thing that can be associated in plot differences it that the challenges
and humans they face are different people of consisting of difference race and
sex, Obi-Wan is Anakin’s Athena and Padme is the Penelope of the time.
Moving
back into similarities, looking at “Star
Wars: Episode III, Revenge of the Sith,” we find Anakin losing his sanity
in order to keep the one he loves and the mindset he believes in an everlasting
reality. He was so set on this that he betrayed those who he had once loved all
for one woman. Sound familiar? Odysseus sacrificed all he had close to him in
order to save Penelope from the suitors. Even after 10 years he still
sacrificed his life and slaughtered mass amounts of people just to be with the
one he aspired to hold close to him. Their love had blinded the both of them
and drove them to the walls of insanity. In the category of both a similarity
and difference lies the child of Odysseus, Telemachus, where is he found in the
Star Wars saga? In one perspective, Telemachus may be thought of as the force.
It was always a part of Anakin’s life just as Telemachus was to Odysseus.
Neither of them had noticed it for quite sometime however. But in the end, it
helps them both reach their final goal. Another way to think of the force is to
recognize the Goddess Athena.
Athena
was always a divine power Odysseus had that could help him during his harshest
times. When Odysseus and his son were fighting off the suitors in their home Athena
was there for the protection of Odysseus. She’d always offer Odysseus a wiser
option to the situation. Anakin also had that ability, to use the force to help
him out of a difficult situation. There are also other Gods that stood in
Odysseus’ way, just as their were other sith that would obstruct Anakin’s
journey.
So,
as stated previously, love blinded these individuals and drove them to the ends
of the Earth to save the ones they desire. They betrayed everything they held
dear and suffered immense hardships just to be close to the one that they
wanted.
Portfolio - Macbeth Creative Piece
The first notable thing I had done in the year in my opinion was my Macbeth benchmark. Macbeth is an amazing tale of greed and it's recommended for everyone. In this project we had to trace a character throughout the book and note how their behavior had changed over time.
Macbeth Creative Writing
Anthony Buchanico
In the story of Macbeth, Macbeth had gone from such a bold and noble man with no sense of violence except those against his loved ones, yet when he heard of his chance to be king he slowly fell under the lust for power and began his journey consisting of slaughtering anybody in his way. This can be shown throughout the story in his words as well as the words of others.
In
Act 1 scene 3 Banquo and Macbeth have come to contact with the witches and are
discussing the prophecies told to them. Macbeth has been said to become king
while Banquo has been told his children shall inherit the throne afterward.
While in discussion whether this prophecy may be true Banquo states, “If
you can look into the seeds of time, and say which grain will grow, and which
will not.” To see which grain will grow and which will not is to take note of
whose future will flourish and whose will come to an end.
Act
1 scene 5; Macbeth is in deep thought over the plan to end the life of the King.
To end the life of someone he considers a friend is just too much for him to
simply go about doing, but he would do almost anything for the power of king as
well as make his wife happy. So
while in a soliloquy, Macbeth cries “Stars, hide your fires!
Let not light see my
black and deep desires.” In short, Macbeth doesn’t wish for such controversy
over being king, but doesn’t want to admit he will eventually fall to his lust
for power.
For
Act 1, scene 7 the majority of Macbeth’s time is spent arguing with his wife
over the deed to end Duncan. Macbeth is taking the side of finding another way
to go about obtaining kingship while his wife wants the deed done immediately
and to the fullest extent. She accuses Macbeth of being everything under a man
and the only way to bring his masculinity back he would need to murder someone
with a familiar face. As a
response, he replies with “I dare do all that may become a man; Who dares do
more, is none.” He’s saying manhood cannot be judged by taken lives. And this would
turn him to a beast rather a man.
The
remainder of Act 1, scene 7 is spent discussing the way to rid of the king.
Lady Macbeth’s influence had finally hit Macbeth. Rather then take his task
with confidence like on the battlefield; he is extremely timid at the thought
of the murder. For words of confidence, Lady Macbeth responds with “Screw your courage to the sticking-place.”
Saying this had told Macbeth to center his courage before taking the task. This
gave him the confidence shown on the battlefield to apply to the murder of
Duncan.
After
the dawning of the day Duncan’s death is discover, Act 2 scene 3 is spent
detailing the conversation with the ones close to the king such as Macbeth and
Macduff. Although most are unsuspecting, Donalbain had sensed guilt among the
crowd. “There's daggers in men's smiles.” Is said by him when he suddenly feels
a large amount of guilt in the crowd. He senses one man had done this. That
Macbeth did the deed is not apparent however.
Act
3, scene 4 begins to show the ruthless man Macbeth is becoming. He begins to
find out Banquo knows Macbeth completed the death of Duncan. As a result he
begins to contemplate yet another murder to keep his secret safe. He begins to
enter another soliloquy. This time he states “I am in blood Stepp'd in
so far, that, should I wade no more, Returning were as tedious as go o'er.”
Saying this shows Macbeth knows he has to murder again, he doesn’t think of it
as such a crime though. He’s done it once he’ll do it again. The only
difference now is his hired assassins shall do the deed.
Act
4, scene 2 Lady Macbeth has had a growing regret over the murder since the deed
was committed. She is slowly falling apart. Macbeth realizes this and tries to
assure her the problem is over and nothing bad will come from this anymore. She
is still rather doubtful about it no matter what he says. She realizes they are
traitors no matter what. “When our actions do not, our fears do make us
traitors.” This shows just that.
Macbeth
has been a horrible king. His citizens are afraid of his wrath and are afraid
to make any action. There are few people who aren’t afraid to go against him.
These people are devoted. Going against him they tell each other his rude ways.
One man, Angus notes how afraid his subjects are. “Those he commands move only
in command, nothing in love: now does he feel his title Hang loose about him,
like a giant's robe upon a dwarfish thief.” Angus is saying his power is not
meant for him and is too much for him to maintain. This is related to the dwarf
owning the oversized robe in that manner.
Macbeth’s
final time of battle is near. He realizes the forest is coming after him. The only thing he can do is stay
devoted and fight for his life. “I have almost forgot the taste of fears;
The time has been, my
senses would have cool’d
To hear a night-shriek;
and my fell of hair
Would at a dismal
treatise rouse and stir
As life were in't: I
have supp'd full with horrors;
Direness, familiar to my
slaughterous thoughts
Cannot once start me.”
This is a short speech about how Macbeth shall embrace death with acceptance in
a way, but won’t let it bring him down so easily. If this is really how his
life is supposed to end. It is at least worth the test.
In
the final act of the play, Macbeth’s mistress has come to an end. He shows very
little grief nor feels it. He just
embraces it. She was but a mere assistance to him in the long run. Thought of
as his puppet. “Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player
That struts and frets
his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no
more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full
of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.”
These words signify the end of Macbeth’s heart. He is nothing but a shadow of
his former self, a walking beast who’s hungry for any power possible.
As
shown above, Macbeth’s character has changed dramatically. Once the most modest
man in the entire world, he is not a relentless demon seeking nothing but
personal benefit. This gives the strong message that power can change even the
kindest of hearts. Power destroys people.
Macbeth Analysis
Anthony Buchanico
In the story of Macbeth, Macbeth had gone from such a bold and noble man with no sense of violence except those against his loved ones, yet when he heard of his chance to be king he slowly fell under the lust for power and began his journey consisting of slaughtering anybody in his way. This can be shown throughout the story in his words as well as the words of others.
In
Act 1 scene 3 Banquo and Macbeth have come to contact with the witches and are
discussing the prophecies told to them. Macbeth has been said to become king
while Banquo has been told his children shall inherit the throne afterward.
While in discussion whether this prophecy may be true Banquo states, “If
you can look into the seeds of time, and say which grain will grow, and which
will not.” To see which grain will grow and which will not is to take note of
whose future will flourish and whose will come to an end.
Act
1 scene 5; Macbeth is in deep thought over the plan to end the life of the King.
To end the life of someone he considers a friend is just too much for him to
simply go about doing, but he would do almost anything for the power of king as
well as make his wife happy. So
while in a soliloquy, Macbeth cries “Stars, hide your fires!
Let not light see my
black and deep desires.” In short, Macbeth doesn’t wish for such controversy
over being king, but doesn’t want to admit he will eventually fall to his lust
for power.
For
Act 1, scene 7 the majority of Macbeth’s time is spent arguing with his wife
over the deed to end Duncan. Macbeth is taking the side of finding another way
to go about obtaining kingship while his wife wants the deed done immediately
and to the fullest extent. She accuses Macbeth of being everything under a man
and the only way to bring his masculinity back he would need to murder someone
with a familiar face. As a
response, he replies with “I dare do all that may become a man; Who dares do
more, is none.” He’s saying manhood cannot be judged by taken lives. And this would
turn him to a beast rather a man.
The
remainder of Act 1, scene 7 is spent discussing the way to rid of the king.
Lady Macbeth’s influence had finally hit Macbeth. Rather then take his task
with confidence like on the battlefield; he is extremely timid at the thought
of the murder. For words of confidence, Lady Macbeth responds with “Screw your courage to the sticking-place.”
Saying this had told Macbeth to center his courage before taking the task. This
gave him the confidence shown on the battlefield to apply to the murder of
Duncan.
After
the dawning of the day Duncan’s death is discover, Act 2 scene 3 is spent
detailing the conversation with the ones close to the king such as Macbeth and
Macduff. Although most are unsuspecting, Donalbain had sensed guilt among the
crowd. “There's daggers in men's smiles.” Is said by him when he suddenly feels
a large amount of guilt in the crowd. He senses one man had done this. That
Macbeth did the deed is not apparent however.
Act
3, scene 4 begins to show the ruthless man Macbeth is becoming. He begins to
find out Banquo knows Macbeth completed the death of Duncan. As a result he
begins to contemplate yet another murder to keep his secret safe. He begins to
enter another soliloquy. This time he states “I am in blood Stepp'd in
so far, that, should I wade no more, Returning were as tedious as go o'er.”
Saying this shows Macbeth knows he has to murder again, he doesn’t think of it
as such a crime though. He’s done it once he’ll do it again. The only
difference now is his hired assassins shall do the deed.
Act
4, scene 2 Lady Macbeth has had a growing regret over the murder since the deed
was committed. She is slowly falling apart. Macbeth realizes this and tries to
assure her the problem is over and nothing bad will come from this anymore. She
is still rather doubtful about it no matter what he says. She realizes they are
traitors no matter what. “When our actions do not, our fears do make us
traitors.” This shows just that.
Macbeth
has been a horrible king. His citizens are afraid of his wrath and are afraid
to make any action. There are few people who aren’t afraid to go against him.
These people are devoted. Going against him they tell each other his rude ways.
One man, Angus notes how afraid his subjects are. “Those he commands move only
in command, nothing in love: now does he feel his title Hang loose about him,
like a giant's robe upon a dwarfish thief.” Angus is saying his power is not
meant for him and is too much for him to maintain. This is related to the dwarf
owning the oversized robe in that manner.
Macbeth’s
final time of battle is near. He realizes the forest is coming after him. The only thing he can do is stay
devoted and fight for his life. “I have almost forgot the taste of fears;
The time has been, my
senses would have cool’d
To hear a night-shriek;
and my fell of hair
Would at a dismal
treatise rouse and stir
As life were in't: I
have supp'd full with horrors;
Direness, familiar to my
slaughterous thoughts
Cannot once start me.”
This is a short speech about how Macbeth shall embrace death with acceptance in
a way, but won’t let it bring him down so easily. If this is really how his
life is supposed to end. It is at least worth the test.
In
the final act of the play, Macbeth’s mistress has come to an end. He shows very
little grief nor feels it. He just
embraces it. She was but a mere assistance to him in the long run. Thought of
as his puppet. “Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player
That struts and frets
his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no
more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full
of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.”
These words signify the end of Macbeth’s heart. He is nothing but a shadow of
his former self, a walking beast who’s hungry for any power possible.
As
shown above, Macbeth’s character has changed dramatically. Once the most modest
man in the entire world, he is not a relentless demon seeking nothing but
personal benefit. This gives the strong message that power can change even the
kindest of hearts. Power destroys people.
American Transportation - What if?
Reflection: I greatly enjoyed this project. I found the ability to deeply study one piece of history and change one aspect to create a new one quite intriguing. While fulfilling, it was challenging to find the tiny details that would change the outcome of history. The most interesting thing that I researched was the individual impacts of Senator Pell and the founder of the NARPA on the magnitude of future outcomes. Specifically, their efforts in advocating for the bill were the sole reasons that Amtrak and rail transportation exists today. They are only one example of individuals having such an impact on the historical record. Systemic changes also affect the historical record in many ways. For example, if Amtrak was never founded, the 9/11 Shanksville, PA crash. In addition, these all revolved around the one decision as to whether or not Amtrak should be created. In the future, I would like to see a possible adaptation wherein students could work in a pair with two separate changes and create an alternate history based upon two separate PODs. Also, if I were to repeat the process, I would create more primary sources for each event and expand my list of events even further.
Capstone
Blog #1
When you pluck the strings, the sound waves head into the hole directly beneath them, and resonate inside, bounding off the walls to enhance the sound and give it longevity. In addition to that, you can see the strings vibrating after you pluck them.
Globalization Benchmark
This benchmark was actually really fun to work on. I got to go around the city and take pictures of different things, some of which I don't know much about, and others that have a lot if meaning to me. I got to connect these things back to Philadelphia. The only issue i had with this benchmark was my camera getting stolen, and losing all my pictures. Other than that i feel that this was a great experience.
The History of My People
Yadi Angeles Q4
For this quarter, we took 200 pictures, made sculptures, copied a piece of art by a famous artist, drew a bike, and drew from observation. From all the work that I went through with the other classes, I couldn't quite focus on this one, so I didn't always put my all into every assignment. This was definitely my worse quarter, but I was able to get most of the assignments done.
In all the stress of my other classes, I was unable to do a picture from outside.
These are the unedited pictures from the 200 pictures I took:
And these are my final product:
These are the sculptures I made:
This is the art I copied by a famous artist:
This is the finished piece:
I was unable to upload my bike pictures.
HISTORY OF SCIENCE LEADERSHIP
Ryan Francis
Kyree Armstrong
Q4 ArtWork
-Take 200 photos, then edit 3 of them.
-Draw a bike three times;line negative and shading.
-Copy a famous piece of art.
-Create a sculpture
In this quarter i got off to a rough start i did not feel like doing anything. That made me get caught behind. The day i decided to do everything had me over whelmed. I started to work on everything then I realized that time was running out. This was not one of my best quarters. My favorite project was the sculpture and the photo editing. I had fun doing everything else as well but the most appealing to me was those two.