the old one!
the new one !
the reason i changed my slide because i feel like i put to much words and i had to present it so there is no reason for me to talk when every thing i had to say was right there . but now i learned how to make it simple because less id much more.
I changed the seize of the leaves and the worlds so that there would be the rule of the thirds. I also used contrast. The red leafs are a contrast to the white world and the white worlds are in contrast to the black bubble rap. I also used bleed off with the light moon so bleu is off. I think this one is better because put more thought in it.
My first slide used the rule of thirds because the words from my favorite quote are at the top and bottom and my beautiful smile is in the middle. It also used contrast because the words from the quote are blue and red.
I thought that my slide was perfect the way it was, so I decided to make a new slide. I still wanted to focus on smiling so I stacked the smiley face on the left hand side. Still using the rule of thirds I put Smile in the 2/3 and 3/3 portion of the slide. I contrasted the black of the background with the purple, red, green, blue, pink and yellow of the smileys.
These slides use the large words, the rule of the thirds, and contrast. I thought that this was the best way to get someone's attention and to make people notice them. This way everyone will be able to look at them and clearly understand the message, to smile.
For my slide first I changed the size of my name. It is all about me so I wanted me to be bigger. Next I made my title one line to just under line my name. The three pictures I made bigger and made the to on the end bleed off the end. I also made them bigger so you can see them better. For the swords I made them a little smaller and in the corners to be a crest.
For my first slide, I just had my picture and the things that I liked. For my new slide, I took information from Presentation Zen and made my picture bigger, and made it bleed of. My font is bigger and the colors contrast against the black.
I used rule of the thirds in my second slide. I decided to make the words big and have my picture bleed of the slide. I used a mask to make the edges less hard. The contrast of the black on the light blue word was great contrast.I made my face the main point of the slide.
The attraction between a male ad female seems to always be a question well answered. However, I decided to focus on what actually makes a female attracted to a male. Is there an actual scientific reasoning behind it or is off of self judgment. Could it be the way a male walks, or presents himself that makes a female attracted to him.
Through a study found from the book "human physique and sexual attractiveness in men and women" I had found that women like men who are tall, who have slightly narrow waist and broad shoulders. Men who are athletic and have well toned muscles are more preferred because it symbolizes they are more likely to be a good hunter, which could mean they could provide for their family. With males being big and strong they can protect the family from other males and danger. Women are also attracted to male that are successful because it shows that males have the ability and resources to be able to provide for the family
In conclusion, just like males, females are cautious about the male they choose to mate with because women believe that men have the most valuable reproductive resources to offer. Men produce thousands of sperm while women only produce about 400 eggs in their lifetime. The time of pregnancy and child bearing are long process which puts more pressure on what women find attractive about guys. They find the security and long relationship to be attributes that make the guy more attractive. In other words a women finds a man that can provide for them, will stay there for a long period of time, and will be able to protect them. Kind of the same things we need in society today to survive.
By: Dyamond Logan
P.S ( i was absent, I went on a college tour and i didnt have any internet connection)
My old slide: My name, both in English and in Chinese are on the slide. I made the font really big. I think black and white are the most simple and out-stand color, so the background is white and the letters are black. The image of me is pointing at my names. Shadows and reflections can make the images and letters really cool, so I did them. My Chinese name has 3 characters, but my English name has two letters, so I put a little heart between my first and last English name.
I think my old picture is not so bright, so I edited my picture so it looks brighter now. I noticed that my fonts and images are not so clear. I think it's because the effects make them not so clear, so I deleted all of the effects. The look pretty clear now.
I changed what I changed because I considered the things they told us on Presentation Zen. Then, I applied it toward my slide. I used the rules of thirds. First, I moved all the pictures to one side and all the words. Another thing is that I moved all the words to one side. I also made the words bigger so, they would stand out.
Next, I used bright colors on a black background for contrast. Also, I took the colors from the pictures, like the color of my hoodie or the color of one of the sheep. Then, I used those colors for the font color. I made the pictures bleed off of the slide so, it doesn't seem clutter.
Lastly, I aplahed the back of the pictures, so you won't get distracted by the background. So, you would only see the faces of the people. Then, I made them smaller and put them together and overlapped them, like a collage.
The first slide I did not use the whole slide and every thing was to small. On the new slide every thing was made bigger and the color of the chart changed. Also it was all rotated.
This is the old slide.
This is the new slide.
I made some changes to my keynote slide. I deleted a few of my elements and moved some things around. Before, I had way too many elements and it would not be easy for the eye to see and enjoy because there was way to much to comprehend all at once.
I made a lot of my pictures bleed off of the sides. Also, I over- lapped alot of my pictures. I guess you call call it a collage. I made some contrast with some of my pictures. I made contrast also with the black background and all the colors from the picture.
For the old slide I felt as if everything wasn't big enough and the words needed to be much bigger so that people can see it. For the car, the car had full contrast but the road was hard to see. So I chose to change the road so that people can see the road. I also chose to make the picture bleed off of the page because the old picture I thought was to dull.
In the new slide I thought that the picture was great because it has great contrast. The poem goes along with the slide show and the frases goes very well with the slide show. I felt as if this was a very good slideshow and I am satisfied with it.
Well, In my first slide I used Alpha, big text, and minimum use of contrast. But i had alot of empty space even though you can, but it didn't make the slide worth remembering. The text wasn't big enough but the quotes were very strong, and the colors were very interesting. My first slide i used alpha but didn't use it very well.
My second slide I used alpha to put my words on my picture so they can stand out. Also i used make type big so my audeince can get more of a better meaning of what picture meant, I added a title the is very large and has much contrast. Also contrast rule because I use one color and change the main meaning of what I was trying to say in another color. The other rule i used was empty space to leave audience guessing wanting more, its not much food but there is a lot of substance.
My interview with a fellow in a great hat at
some ridiculous morning hour.
1.
Why did you decide to come out and vote?
“Like all great rights, I believe
it needs to be exercised. “
2. What change would like to see in the political realm?
“I would like to see an end to
the fighting, finger pointing, and arguing so we can focus on some greater
cause. I don’t know which greater cause but something other than yelling. “
3.
Do you vote every election day?
“I try to.”
4. Do know why we vote on Tuesdays?
“Nothing productive gets done on
a Monday.”
5.
Where have you heard the most campaign ads?
“Radio and TV, mostly radio.”
(However, he found that TV had a higher number of ads.)
6.
What is the most memorable campaign ad you saw this election?
“The first Dan Onorato in which
he explained the proper pronunciation of his name. That was a great ad!”
7. Are you always sure of who you are going to vote for when you enter the voting booth?
“Yes.”
8.
What changes would you like to see in the city because of the election?
“I would like to see the city
waste less money.”
9. “Well you know what they say ‘Every vote counts.’”
10. Did you learn about voting in school?
“To be honest I can barely remember school but I think it did. Yes,
school did.”
Neighbor/Friend 21 years of age.
1. What motivated you to come out and vote? grand mother
3. Do you vote in every election? No
7. Are you always sure of who you are going to vote for when you walk into the booth or are you still deliberating? Yes always sure.
10. Did you learn about voting in school? yes at West philly high.
5. Where have you seen the most campaign activity? mainly internet and tv.
My first attempt was not very good. I had some spacing issues and I spent most of the time fixing it. Then when it was fixed it looked too perfectly spaced. In the better one I used better spacing so that it looks nicer and you are more likely to remember it.
Also I didn't like the layout so I decided to revamp the entire look of it. I moved the picture over to the side so that it was by itself. Then I moved the words over to the right.
I still kept many of the same things though. Like I still used the contrast from black red and white. Also I used the same background which bleeds over. I still used all the words and images but I just changed the color and font size of them.
For some reason it won't let me upload the second fixed picture
In the first slide that was created, there was a lack of priority. The first slide had three different points and according to presentation zen: One slide, One point. All my wording was disorganized.
In my new slide, i decided to incorporate the rule of the thirds. By Placing all the words on the one side and all my pictures on the other side. Also, i added some more contrast and prioritized what the slide was about. Making my picture bigger has done this. Also, some bleeding was done.
There were many things wrong with my slide. The background in my picture was awful and the words was too small. So I decided to change my slide to make a lot more better. To help me change it, I used the information giving to me from my classmates and teacher and from presentation zen.
So I had used alpha to take out the background from the picture because it was distracting from what was important it. I put a frame around the picture to make it look a little better. Then I made the text bigger because in presentation zen it says don't be afraid to make the words big. I made "never" green to make it contrast with the other colors. And I put the heart on the picture because its showing that the two friends love each other.
I wanted to make the adjectives in a more simple line instead of all over the slide. Though I kept the pictures of myself "bleeding" to the lower right and left corners, I also changed the way my name was displayed.
For the first slide, I was afraid to make things to close to each other or making the texts big. After I took another glance at the "Presentation Zen" website, I then realized that it was okay to make things big and close to each other. I also learned how to use the rule of the thirds, something that I didn't know how to use before. I focused on the rule of the thirds in my new slide. The Old slide out of the two is the first. The New slide is the second slide.
The New slide has a lot of properties from the "presentation zen" website. The texts on my Dr. Seuss quote is very large and easy to read. Also, in the first column when using the rule of the thirds is my picture and quote. Then, the second column contains the words "Dermatology is my life". That is also bold and large. That phrase is very simple and is self-explanatory. Finally, the third column had all of the dermatology products that I use.
