Advanced Essay #4

My goal for this essay was to show how American people will eventually stop enlisting in the military because they will realize that their sacrifices are not truly appreciated by the American public and Government/Military. While researching and writing this essay I realized that the American Military does not focus on returning soldiers and veterans enough. Veteran soldiers are not given the support they deserve post war.


Matthew Willson

Advanced Essay #4

3/28/16


Historically, the armed forces have been revered in America. With the recent wars in Afghanistan and Iraq, soldiers’ perceptions of military service and the public’s views on war have changed. While these changes may have begun during the Vietnam War, the effects of recent wars in Afghanistan and Iraq have been had different.  Soldiers have begun to seriously doubt whether their sacrifices are truly appreciated by the American public. If this continues, views of being in the American military will change significantly, and it will become much more difficult for the military to successfully recruit and retain soldiers.

Since the Vietnam War, America has been involved in approximately 18 wars.  According to Stephen Kinzer of the Boston Globe, soldiers are today’s American heroes:  “Who is a hero? In today’s America, it is someone who chooses a military career, puts on a uniform, and prepares for war. Placing soldiers and veterans on this kind of pedestal is a relatively new phenomenon. Past generations of Americans saw soldiers as ordinary human beings. They were like the rest of us: big and small, smart and dumb, capable of good and bad choices. Now we pretend they are demi-gods.” The following picture captures this point of view perfectly.

There is a soldier on top of a mountain or hill. His face is hidden in darkness. The scenery and the soldier are depicted in dark colors while the American flag that he is holding shines bright in contrast to the darkness surrounding it. The biblical quote below the photo could be positive in a different context but instead it connects God and the bible to the actions of the US army. In this way, the soldier’s work is reframed not as violence and war, but rather “peacemaking.” To call soldiers the “children of God” not only legitimates violence as a crusade-like religious act for good, it also implies that the soldiers as blindly following the orders of their superiors and God--they are only children.

Historians have written extensively about the ravages of war and their toll on soldiers throughout time. While nobody doubts the impact of violence and war on soldier’s lives, the effects of recent wars in Afghanistan and Iraq have differed from past wars in several ways. Soldiers were fighting wars on two fronts; many saw the duration of their deployments extended because of poor post-invasion planning, and many have also subjected to stop-loss measures that prevented them from leaving the military until their units returned from war, even if their tour should have been finished.  It is clear that US soldier’s own perspective of their role has begun to change because of the recent wars in Iraq and Afghanistan.

One reason is the way they are treated after they have finished their tour of duty. According to Gabriela Acosta of USC, “Almost a quarter million Iraq or Afghanistan vets have been diagnosed with mental health injuries from combat service. Many more are not diagnosed, yet go on with their lives while experiencing short-term memory loss, headaches, insomnia, anger or numbness -- conditions that can range from merely annoying to highly disruptive on the job and within the family.”   Unfortunately, many soldiers that suffer from PTSD or other mental and physical injuries they received while serving time in combat are not provided with equitable resources to survive and live a healthy life after they serve their country and put their lives on the line. It is disappointing to see the American society have so much faith in their military when so many people's lives are traumatically changed by it. According to Stopsoldiersuicide.org, “22 veterans take their lives every day.” This statistic is horrific and America should recognize this and try to fix it. We are clearly not supporting the needs of soldiers when they come back from war.

The VA (United States Department of Veteran Affairs), the agency charged with taking care of returning soldiers,  has also received a large amount of negative press in the past few  years regarding their poor support  and terrible veteran healthcare system. According to CNN, “the managers at the VA concocted an elaborate scheme to cover up long wait times there. The sources said more than 1,400 vets were placed on the purported secret list and that documents were shredded to hide the evidence. According to sources, at least 40 U.S veterans died waiting for care at the facility, many of whom were on the list.” This is just one example of many terrible things the VA has been guilty of over the years.  

At the same time, it is important to remember that most people don’t serve in the military, and the wars are being fought far far away from US soil.  The military’s promotion of their actions in the press has also created expectations in the general public. Loudly describing the Iraq invasion as an example of ‘Shock and awe’ created an unrealistic public perception of the war. According to Captain Scott Hubbard (a returned Iraq vet (US News)) “We expected to come in and throw another 3-pointer and everyone stand up and cheer. There was a lot of emotion, a lot of rhetoric, all the country music songs getting everybody fired up.  I think a lot of folks screaming for war just don't understand what it takes.”  With the impact of the press and misperceptions of the public fed by the military itself, returning soldiers wonder whether the public is behind them and whether they have the capacity to truly understand what they have experienced.     

Overall, the poor treatment of returning vets and the public’s reactions to news surrounding the war has created serious doubts in the minds of the soldiers regarding whether or not America truly values their military service.  According to Anna Mulrine (US News), “the sacrifices are great and sometime soldiers wonder why they keep making them.”



Bibliography:


https://www.bostonglobe.com/opinion/2014/12/07/joining-military-doesn-make-you-hero/AtnLFFGkkVvxX2gKXKJE7L/story.html

Kinzer, Stephen. "Joining the Military Doesn’t Make You a Hero - The Boston Globe." BostonGlobe.com. Boston Globe. Web. 28 Mar. 2016. <https://www.bostonglobe.com/opinion/2014/12/07/joining-military-doesn-make-you-hero/AtnLFFGkkVvxX2gKXKJE7L/story.html>.


https://msw.usc.edu/mswusc-blog/veteran-mental-health/

Acosta, Gabriella. "The Impact of War: Mental Health of Veterans and Their Families." USC.EDU. USC, 2013. Web. 28 Mar. 2016. <https://msw.usc.edu/mswusc-blog/veteran-mental-health/>.


http://www.cnn.com/2014/04/30/health/veterans-dying-health-care-delays/index.html

Bronstein, Scott, Drew Griffin, and Nelli Black. "Phoenix VA Officials Deny There's a Secret Wait List; Doctor Says They're Lying." CNN. Cable News Network. Web. 28 Mar. 2016. <http://www.cnn.com/2014/04/30/health/veterans-dying-health-care-delays/index.html>.

http://www.usnews.com/news/iraq/articles/2008/02/13/how-the-war-in-iraq-is-changing-the-american-soldier

Mulrine, Anna. "How the War In Iraq Is Changing the American Soldier." US News. U.S.News & World Report. Web. 28 Mar. 2016.

<http://www.usnews.com/news/iraq/articles/2008/02/13/how-the-war-in-iraq-is-changing-the-american-soldier>



E1 U5-Loco Pero Juntos

                            Loco Pero Juntos...

Mi nombre es Liliana Rivera.

La hija de un papá que vive Puerto Rico,

Y una mamá de Filadelfia,

Pero la nieta de inmigrantes.


Tengo tres hermanos,

Tres hermanos quíen son muy diferentes,

Pero toda mi familia es muy diferente.


Veo…

Veo pelo loco.


Saboreo…

Saboreo el arroz amarillo y frijoles de mis padres y mis abuelos,

Una tradición de la familia Rivera.


Oigo…

Oigo la música rock,

La favorita de la familia Rivera.


Huelo…

Huelo el perfume “Angel” de mi mamá,

Es mi favorita olol.


Toco…

Toco las manos de mis sobrinos,

Los niños de mi hermana.


Escucho música rock, es muy importante para mi.

Cocinamos con mi mamá, nos conecta.

Celebrando con mi familia siempre y es divertido.

Necesito mi familia, me importa mucho.


Nosotros, mi hermana y yo,

Somos productos de Puerto Rico y Rusia.

Nacimos judios puertorriqueños norteamericanos.

Nacimos en la encrucijada.

Somos diferentes pero juntos.

Mi papá está muerto, nosotros nunca lo olvidamos.

Nosotros queremos ser fuerte.

Desde que nací, me encanta mi familia.

Somos todo lo que tenemos,

Nosotros somos una familia

Lily's song

Los Nubes - Caroline Pitone

Caroline's song

Caroline C. Pitone

Soy yo

La hija de mis padre cariñosos

Niña con una hermana mayor y bonita que vive en los nubes

Producto de la sociedad

Veo los edificios en la ciudad

Saboreo los dulces de las tiendas

Oigo los voces de mis amigos

Huela la pelo de mi mamá

Toco las manos de mis queridos

Necesito mi familia y mis amigas a mis lados

Hablo con una voz alto y grande

Bailo con los nubes

Escapo de la luz cerrado

Somos productos de la sociedad

Somos de América

Hablamos lenguajes diferentes

La lengua de cultura y de lugar en donde vives

Somos differentes

Vivimos en el mismo lugar

No somos de Filadelfia

Somos parte de Filadelfia

Mis amigos y yo somos unidos y somos completos


audio provided by Orion and Caroline Pitone


Mi familia no inmigrante- Justin Stewart

Yo soy humano

Mi familia y yo todos somos

Yo no soy inmigrante

Yo soy de Filadelfia

Mi familia es de Africa

Pero no somos inmigrantes



Veo la Africa

Saboreo tierra en Mi boca

Oigo el gritar por la noche noche

Huelo la muerte


Toco preocupado


Mi abuela es de la tierra de bisonte

Mi abuelo es de la tierra de mar

Mi mamá es de la tierra de arból

Mi papá es de la tierra de no dinero

 

Somos productos de América

Somos Americanos

Hablamos inglés

No somos inmigrantes. Vivimos en América

No somos inmigrantes.

Mi mama y yo estamos en América


Audio by Orion

Justin's song

E1 U5: Somos Todo

Imani Williams,

Soy completa.

                        Mis padres no son inmigrantes

      Lejos.

    

Producto de Filadelfia.

                     Familia que viajes.

Veo la memoria de mi infancia,

Saboreo mi madre famoso salmón,

Oigo risa de mi familia,

        toco las plantas en el jardín.

       

Nado con el delfín en la playa.

Yo vuelo alto con el pajaro en el cielo.

       Escapo a la puesta del sol,

Necesito mi familia permanecer toda.

 

Somos productos de Filadelfia.

Somos Africanos.

Hablamos inglés.

   La lengua de pollo y arroz.

        

Somos Americanos y vivimos en America.

    Hablamos el mismo idioma.

Somos completos.


Spanish 2

Mi Corazón

Yo soy humano.

Mi familia es mi mundo, mi inspiración.

Separada, clandestina

Es la herramienta de mi conciencia,

Mi cuchillo de cristal.

Soy nueva. Mi familia me hizo.


Veo las encrucijadas,

Estoy enferma y nerviosa,

Pero nosotros siempre superamos.

El gusto de comida con mi madre baila desde mi lengua.

Huelo la aroma dulce.
Oigo la risa lucha en contra del silencio.

Toco el peso del aire alrededor de mi.


Recuerdos desde mi infancia.

Vuelvo a mi pasado.

Corro por la ciudad.

Canto con mi poesía.

Nado en las estrellas.


Somos productos de trabajo duro.

Somos familia.

Tenemos problemas,

Pero nos protegemos.

Mi familia es mi alma.

Tenemos comunidad,

Somos completos.


Spanish Poema

ILP Blog Post

I am enjoying my ILP. The fact that I am able to work at my church is allowing me to accomplish many things. The first thing is that as I stated in my previous blog post my knowledge of Technology has increased. I have learned how to do things such as set up mics and control them all. The other main thing that I have been able to accomplish is that I have been able to became more active in my church. I have became a very active member and as of right now I will be baptized in the month of June. My ILP is a success and is continuing to be an amazing experience for me. 

My ILP

Since the beginning of the school year my ILP is at Greenfield Middle School where I assist the teacher in class and I help the students out with the class activities. So far, I don't have any concerns or problems with my ILP. I am really enjoying it especially dealing with little kids. This doesn't give me any stress which I'm glad and I'm always looking forward to this every Wednesday. 

¿Mi Historia o Nuestra Historia?

Soy de la ciudad del amor fraternal
No sé amor pero sé dolor

porque

Recuerdos desde mi infancia

Que a veces parten el alma

Yo oigo mi mamá y papá

“Todo es bueno”

Yo veo la historia por la encrucijada.
Yo toco mi camino debajo de mí
Yo saboreo el ácido mi historia,

Pero huelo al principio del futuro.


Mi corazón descalzo escondo de la ciudad,
Yo corro a mi familia
Pero mi familia pelea
No sé adónde correr.


Nuestra casa es ilimitada,

Todos somos familias.

No importa nuestra historia

Somos completos.
Emily's song (1)

E1 U5 (Soy Completo)

Spanish - Soy Completo

Matthew Milligan

Soy yo

El producto de mi familia

Soy yo un lobo

Yo corro con mi manada


Veo el amor en mi familia

Saboreo la cocina de mi mamá

Huelo la dulzura de vida

Oigo la voz de mi hermana

Toco las manos de mis amigos


Camino por los tréboles verdes

Nado sobre el mar irlandés

Alzo a mi casa

Necesito mi gente, mi verdad


Somos productos de inmigración

Somos Americanos

Hablamos inglés:

La lengua de libertad y oportunidad

No somos inmigrantes pero ellos viven en nosotros

No somos perfectos pero estamos contentos

Mi familia y yo estamos en nuestros casa

y

Somos completos











ILP Blog Post

My experience at my ILP (The Philly Zoo) is very amazing. I get to use my public speaking skills a lot, I make lots of friends, I help people, and I gain a lot of knowledge about animals that I d. This ILP has really help my communication skills get better, and I now have a better understanding on what animal and environmental conservation is. I enjoy working at my ILP.

Ilp Blog Post

I had a great time and am still having a great time at my Ilp. It is a very interesting course considering that it has to do with law. I've always enjoyed having conversations about what is allow and what is not allowed in this country that won't break the law. In this course I get to discuss these things with my classmates and teachers and have a well thought out discussion. I enjoy my Ilp and am looking forward to finishing it off this year.


Malachi ILP

My ILP was pretty solid. At the beginning it was just kind of a question and answer experience but recently its been more of a hands on work kind of feel ya dig. But overall its pretty chill my host is a very reasonable person and understands where I come from whenever Iḿ not so out going. 

Chen: ILP Update

My ILP still remain the same and is going great. Every Wednesday I go to greenfield to help out. This is something I enjoy doing because I really like helping out the children and even teacher. I am looking forward to seeing and helping the children again because the smile of the children face makes my day. Especially when I know that they are smiling because of me. I helped them on their works and read books to them when needed. I also play with them at recess. The best things that stand out is the fact that I am not only helping the children but teacher as well. I helped the teacher get some work or activity done that is eventually passed out a few days later for the children to do. Helping out is something that I look forward too every week because it is something that related to what I want to do when I get older.

ILP Review

What went well at my ILP was that I got more real world application, I had opportunities to help people in my community, I got a chance to interact with new people , and to explore and visit new exhibits. Somethings that I am looking forward to teaching a course at the Franklin institute. I am looking forward to this because I can't wait to get a chance to share my knowledge and what I learned with people. Somethings that stand out at my ILP the different exhibits and the fact that I get to interact with kids more often. I like my ILP a lot, it is a fun and I learn new things every time. 

HWellner ILP Update- 3/28

So far, my ILP at the Free Library of Philadelphia has continued to go just as well. My partner and I have been able to work on some interesting projects and create some interesting pieces for the library, including interviews and documentaries. There was small communication errors that happened, but they have since been fixed and overall it has been a good experience so far. We we're able to to see what it's like working with other people in order to create content that we are continuing to improve and make better. I am looking forwards to making more works and meeting new people to interview or work with in order to expand our skill set, and continue to learn.

Saldivar 3/28/16

ILP: What went well is that I'm starting to get use to the type of lighting that has to be used. Before I'll mess up the lighting by showing to much meaning it was to bright and then at times it'll be too dim. What I'm looking forward to is to hopefully move on to sound or audio work instead of lighting. Also for the school year to end so I won't have to deal with ILP, until next year. What stands out is that the person was out and I didn't go, and was out for spring break so I spent 2 weeks not going. Nothing else is important.  

ILP

My ILP has been going great and I have been learning a lot about Veterinarians and their line of work. I have met some of the sweetest cats, even though some of them are hard to deal with. I have been helping prepare for surgeries happening the next day and mainly just assisting the technicians. I've been learning about different diseases that cats could possibly contract and I've been learning more about cat anatomy. I hope to learn more and experience new things. 

Nadia Green ILP Check-in

​What went well in my ILP is that I was able to get a lot of information and data entered into the database. I was able to be  advance to the next step and sort the data into specific categories. This will lead me into the final stages of the information sorting. 

What I am looking forward to is finishing with sorting the data more specifically and moving onto the next step, which will be the presentation that I will have to create. 

What stands out that happened so far is my findings in the information that I was measuring. There were many interesting things as far as the amount of money spent by the different schools in the city and comparing in to the initial budget. What also stands out is the different tools and methods that I am learning and using to sort the information that I have. 




Shareef-Trudeau ILP March Update

Since last checking in about my time at the library I have spent my time in the teen center continuing my work of creating book tags. Occasionally I will participate in "book face Friday" which is a hashtag put on the libraries social media accounts featuring a book every Friday. Everything has been going very smoothly and I have come to enjoy my time interning there. I am looking forward to bettering my relationship with the library staff and opening up more opportunities for myself there. 

ILP Progress

Since the last check in I have switched my ILP from volunteering at the free library to participating in debate. This was a better suit for me because I was already spending a lot of time working on debate, and I was actually getting something out of debating. Since switching things at debate have went pretty well, as my partner and I placed in third in the final tournament of the season in the novice league. Because of this I'm looking forward to the upcoming tournaments to see how well my partner and I do. It stands out because its actually something fun that I like doing instead of something that I'm forcing myself to do in order to get an ILP grade. All in all I'm happy about it. 

ILP Semester 2 Reflection A. Swartz 3/28

I think that the group work has gone well, because it has been productive, informative, and interesting. We do many interesting things. I am looking forward to continuing our project, because I want to see where it leads and what happens next. We had a big discussion about our project, and I really enjoyed that and it helped me connect with the other people. I think it is important to remember that other people are different from me, and will have different (incorrect) opinions and I should keep this in mind, while sharing ideas.

Wes Midgett ILP Update

​So far, mostly everything has been going well. The only thing that has gone wrong was that my ILP director was out of town for a couple of weeks so I wasn't able to go to my internship. I am looking forward to learning how to screen print. I would say the location is the things that stands out most, it is at an art gallery close to school.