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With
growth, there comes strengths and weaknesses. As of right now, some strengths
that I have as a writer is the ability to imagine and be creative. So
naturally, writing formal essays and papers that require a serious tone is
difficult. However, as I continue to grow throughout my years, perfecting the
art of writing a serious and very important writing piece has become my main
goal. No one has ever got a professional job by being funny and making up
stories that are untrue, none that I know of anyways.
Producing
this portfolio was no easy feat. The most problematic part of constructing this
portfolio was making the projects that are contain in this portfolio. Each one
had it's own problems and issues. I can't remember a majority of them because I
choose not to. All I really know, and can really advise, is to never procrastinate.
It will be the end of good quality work and sleep, as you know it.
(Q1 Benchmark)
Henry Poeng
Thesis: Macbeth
change of heart at the beginning of the play cost him his life.
The Three Weird sisters in Act One, Scene
3, approach Macbeth and Banquo. They
hail Macbeth first as Thane of Glamis, then Thane of Cawdor, and finally
King. Macbeth and Banquo are
mesmerized in many more ways than one.
Macbeth then says “The Thane of Cawdor lives, why do you dress me in
barrowed robes.” This line shows
how Macbeth feels about being addressed as the Than of Cawdor. Shortly after
the question is asked, the witches vanish without answering anything. Macbeth and Banquo are left to
interpret what the meaning is.
Macbeth sees the witches prophesy as good news and is very happy but
also very confused at the same time.
Macbeth just does not know in what way he will claim these titles.
King Duncan officially proclaims in Act
One, Scene 4 Macbeth Thane of Cawdor.
At that same time King Duncan proclaims his son, Malcolm, Prince of
Cumberland or in other words his successor. Macbeth, who is very surprised when hearing this, goes aside
and starts speaking to him self.
“Stars hide your fire; let not the lights see my black and deep desires”
was one of his lines. This line
that Macbeth said translates to, Heaven, please don’t let anyone see my deep
and dark desires. This specific
lines shows that Macbeth is shocked to hear that Malcolm was going to be king
instead of him self and there fore he is going to do something about it. Then Macbeth’s ambitions start to show.
He was going to be king one way or another even if he has to kill someone for
it.
In Act One, Scene 7 Lady Macbeth
confronts Macbeth and tells him of her plans to kill King Duncan. Macbeth goes aside and weighs out the
consequences of these actions. After some seducing performed by Lady Macbeth,
Macbeth changes his mind and goes with the plan. At the end of the scene Macbeth says, “False face must hide
what false heart doth know.” This
line means to be a flower on the outside and be a serpent underneath. In other words, look nice and innocent
but conceal your feelings from the public. At this point Macbeth becomes hesitant about what he’s
getting himself into but his ambitions start to take over.
In Act Two, Scene 2 Macbeth has killed
Duncan. He and Lady Macbeth are
flooded with guilt. Macbeth says
that he heard voices shortly after he killed King Duncan. The voices said, “Glamis hath murdered sleep, therefore
Cawdor shall not sleep”. In direct
translation it pretty much means that Macbeth killed someone who was sleeping,
therefore he doesn’t get to sleep as a price to pay. At this point Macbeth is starting to go a little bit crazy,
as well as Lady Macbeth. The guilt
is going to impact everything from this point on.
In Act Three,
Scene 2 Macbeth has hatched a plan to kill Banquo. He indirectly tells Lady Macbeth who doesn’t really
understand. While telling Lady
Macbeth, Macbeth says, “O, full of scorpions is my mind dear wife.” This quote
explains just hwa tkinds of things are going on in Macbeth’s head. This
indicates the type of thoughts that are going on inside of Macbeth’s head. Evil scheming thoughts that plan to
destroy all his enemies. At this
point in the play, Macbeth is planning to kill anyone in his way without
hesitation.
In Act Three, Scene 4 Macbeth has killed
Banquo. After slaying Banquo,
Macbeth is not guilty and doesn’t really regret what he has done. Macbeth killed Banquo because Banquo
has a gut feeling that Macbeth was attaining all this power by unfair means.
Macbeth says this after the deed is done.
He says that he is, “Stepped in so far that, I can wade no more.” In direct translation, this means that
Macbeth has gone so far into his evil deeds that he can’t turn back so he just
going to keep on going. At this
point in the play Macbeth has become pure evil and nothing can stop him, not
even him self.
In Act four, Scene 2 Macbeth is talking
to his subjects, who are of course working for him out of fear and not love,
when he realizes something that the Weird Sisters had done to make him be in
this situation. So he says “Time
thou anticipates my dreaded exploits.” In the quote he says “anticipates”,
which means predict, “Dreaded exploits,” which means evil deeds. This means that time or another thing
has predicted his evil deeds. Therefore he accepts his that this is “fate” and
continues to go forth with his plans.
In Act four, Scene 3 MacDuff and Malcolm are ranting off
about Macbeth in England where they have fled off to live. They are venting their anger towards
each other. This anger would have never started if Macbeth didn’t betray them.
With all this ranting MacDuff says,“ No one in the legions of horrid hell can
come a devil more damned in evils top Macbeth.” This quote means that, no one sent from hell can be more
evil than Macbeth. This quote
shows what other people think of Macbeth.
In
Act Five, Scene 3 the 10,000 men from England are approaching. Macbeth is mad at all the servants that
keep coming to warn him. In an
attempt to shut them up and maybe bring courage upon himself, Macbeth says,
“I’ll fight till from my bones my fleshed be hacked” This line means that
Macbeth will fight to the death no matter what. He has nothing to lose and is blinded by his ambitions to
realize what he’s getting into.
In
Act Five, Scene 8 Macbeth is fighting Macduff in a final attempt to protect
this throne. After some intense
fighting Macduff is on the verge of winning. Realizing he’s going to die on the
spot, he says, “I throw my warlike shield.” This means he’s going to sacrifice him self and die here and
now instead of facing the consequences and bowing down to Malcolm. In a final
attempt at attacking Macduff, Macbeth is slain. At this point in the play, Macbeth is dead. This just proves
that since Macbeth is so stubborn and naive, he threw away everything he had
for everything he wanted but ultimately failed in the end.
In
conclusion, Macbeth had a very dramatic change of heart that widely influences
the whole play. Just one act and
all his inner ambitions are arisen.
Throughout each act, his cold-heartedness grows. Towards the end, his thoughts are
clouded with evil, and he has nothing to lose. Therefore, Macbeth has the meatiest change throughout the
whole play. As a secret message towards any potential readers, Shakespeare show
how taking all the wrong turns to get what you want will bring failure upon
your life.
(Q2 Benchmark)
Henry Poeng
Orange Stream
An Ordinary
Day In The Neighborhood
“Uncle,
are you okay?” My dad’s response tone to this question showed both surprise and
shock. “Yeah I’m fine” he said reassuringly. “What wrong?” then asked. “I just
had this horrible dream… there was a shooting in front of your store and
someone died. I couldn’t really make out who the person was but he was
important.” My dad’s face went grim. “Alright calm down, we are all fine here.
Chill out and get some sleep okay?” Click. My cousin had hung up and my dad put
the phone down.
December
30th, 2010. 12: 47 am. Everyone in the family except for me was
ready for some sleep. (opener) It was tiring just like any other day. My dad
just got out the shower, when he got a phone call. It was my cousin, who was
planning to visit soon from Connecticut. His voice was heavy, he was breathing deep,
and he seemed shaken. He explained to my dad that he just experienced a
nightmare. In the nightmare, people were shooting each other in front of our
store. My dad was surprised to hear this but laughed it off nevertheless. My
dad comforted him and told him to go back to sleep assuring him that everything
was fine. My cousin warned my dad to be careful. I was in my room starting a
recently assigned English benchmark project. (Foreshadowing)
December
31th, 2010. Not much was expected on this New Years Eve. It was just
another boring day of hard work and some extreme grumpiness. The previous
night, I didn’t get enough sleep, but that didn’t stop the customers from
flooding in like there was no tomorrow.
Just what you would expect on a party night, right? Little did they
know. (Foreshadowing)
It
was around 7:45 pm when the most unexpected thing happened. I was taking care of a customer and brooding(vocab) about how to get
out of work, all at the same time. Work being: selling customers whole cases of
beer, candy, cigarette, soda, etc. I live in a beer store so this is an
everyday thing. All this brooding
left me bemused and started an awkward situation. The customer I was serving
got angry and started to become insolent(Vocab)
towards me., which was perfectly fine until it got way out of hand. He kept
going on and on, screaming, cursing, and trying to escalate the tension. (Magic
3) Being very adept(Vocab) at conflicts like
this, I just ignored him and went about finishing the transaction. Then, just
outside the front of the store, BAM! (Onomatopoeia) Sirens blared, breaking the
awkward silence that followed.
Everything
was dropped. “Holy Shit!” (dialogue) screamed a good majority of people.
My mom and I went to peek out the window to see what was going on. It wasn’t
the most pleasant sight. A green dodge mini-van looked like it was going
down the wrong way on Walnut St. and went into a sudden halt not far off from
the intersection of Walnut St. and Frasier. Strange thing is, a patrol vehicle
looked like it caused the crash. Imagine this, a Green dodge minivan pointed
towards Jehovah’s Witness, which is directly left of my store, at a 90-degree
angle, a good size dent in it with a police car perpendicular to the vehicle. (Imagery) The first thing that came to
my mind is, “This is not good.” (Dialogue) So I walk back to attend to
the waiting customers.
Fireworks
went off, or at least that’s what I thought it was. Running back to my mom I
asked “What’s going on out there?!” The response blind-sided me in the face
like somebody was running and just tripped into a wall. (Simile) The driver of the green Dodge mini-van
gunned down two cops! My mom and I ran to the back of the establishment and
notified my dad and my brother of the situation. My brother looked at me
like he just watched a good show of SNL and said, (Simile)
“Please…
it was only fireworks don’t get so worked up” (Dialogue)
“But,
Richard! Come look!” (Dialogue)
With
some proper begging he came and took a glance. Turns out, the scene changed, and there was way more then
just one police car out there. Around 25 + vehicles, Officers out, and guns
pointed. It looked like a lustrous
(Vocab) clump of red and blue in the night, which was very appropriate for New
Years. (Imagery) Then they open fired, emptying about a magazine into the
suspect’s car, at least that’s what the news said. POP! POP! POP! POP! POP! (Onomatopoeia/ Rep 4
Effect). I was scared out of my mind. It looked like an old western movie.
A standoff was happening right in front of my house! I was in shock and awe. So
many things raced through my mind. Will we get out of this alive? What happened
to the cops who got gunned down? Are they okay? This is exciting! I’m hungry,
so tired… sleepy, sleepy… and so forth. (Rep 4 Effect)
The
fun part is how stupid we all acted. My dad, who arrived rather late, ran
outside and looked into the car, as did about 15 other bystanders, my-self
included. Dumb move, I know. Difference was, I was about a quarter-block away
from the car. The cops started yelling and shooed us all away from the danger
zone.
Everyone
pretty much piled up in the store. A good majority of them were very irritated
because they were disrupted from their holiday festivities. The customers
pretty much notified their family, sat around, or tried to make a quick
transaction so they can get out. (Magic 3) Just goes to show you that even
in crisis some people are still extremely selfish. My dad, who did not want to
close shop just yet, decided to play along with the selfish customers and go
sell them ice. This involved him going back outside again. Bad mistake. He was
held outside behind a wall in safety. My dad called shortly after we noticed
that he was missing. He told us to be wary
(Vocab) of the situation and to lower the bulwark
(Vocab) that is the front gate. Daring not to disobey, we evacuated the store
and lowered the gates.
A
mere five minutes later, my dad called on the phone. He told my brother and I
to grab a case of beer so we can sell it to a customer who was buying it the “back-door”
way. We thought he was joking, until we saw our dad approaching the back yard
with a customer in tow. After making the transaction, we all went back inside.
Around this time a copper chopper arrived to the scene rather low. Using the
mounted spotlight, it circled around the suspect’s vehicle and made light of
the situation. (Pun Intended/Humor)
Naturally,
in situations like these, you want to feel safe right? You know that feeling
when you want to grab something sharp and deadly, or just go hide somewhere to
feel safe? That’s exactly what I did. Upon re-entering the house, I ran to my
room and totally missed the light switch. Groping
(vocab) around in the dark, I grabbed my metal softball bat and a metal
baseball bat. I know it seems stupid, but it made me feel secure. Others didn’t
think so. A cop noticed me with the bats and told me “What are you going to
do with those bats? Going to hit a
bullet out the park? You can’t even swing with one hand!” (Dialogue/Humor)
That comment made me feel stupid, but I felt safe so it was okay. Putting the
bats away, I went to go watch what else was unfolding.
When
I arrived back at the place of entertainment, anyone who was viewing the little
show had a face that could make even the most secure in mind cry. Amassing (Vocab) some courage I
peeked over the window, heart racing. The scene had changed. With the spotlight
illuminating the car, some of the higher ranked cops gathered in a circle at
the intersection of Frasier and Walnut St. They appeared to be scheming on how
to handle the rest of the situation. Out of nowhere, down the dark alleyway of
Frasier St. was a heavily armed officer, otherwise known as a S.W.A.T (special weapons and tactics)
operator. Walking down slow mo, or at least that’s how I saw it. He looked
extremely intimidating. This man was dressed in all black with armor and
bullet proof pads spread across evenly all over his body, thick helmet on his
head, attached with a helmet visor. In his right hand, a riot shield, in his
left, an assault rifle. I can only guess that it was a M416, but that’s just
from background gaming knowledge, which made it even more exciting. (Imagery)
His face was made of stone.
(Metaphor)
They
call him the crisis negotiator, negotiator for short. His job was to approach the
suspect and cause a diversion for a S.W.A.T team to arrive, or talk the suspect
into surrendering, or both. From my perspective, it seemed like both. I can
only assume that being a negotiator, you needed to be shrewd (Vocab) and conscientious
(Vocab) of the suspect in critical situations.
My
dad, my brother and I took this given opportunity of peace to talk to my dad’s
friend who happened to be an officer at the scene and likes to visit the store
when he’s off duty. My dad was at the door speaking to his cop friend, who
coincidently had his patrol vehicle right in front of the store entrance. My
dad was chatting away with his friend, while I was talking to my brother, who
was just as excited. He told me to go and listen in. Being his younger brother,
I had to comply.
While
I listened in, my brother was broadcasting what was going on to my other
brother who was in Florida at the time. I found this superfluous, but what the
heck, it was exciting. Apparently,
the showdown on Walnut was being shown live in Florida, which I found extremely
strange. My dad was talking to his friend. We got the gist of the situation.
Apparently, the cops were waiting for S.W.A.T. to arrive, there were 200+
personal surrounding the perimeter and all branches of law enforcement were
deployed. This was the first event in Philadelphia law enforcement history of
its caliber. All of a sudden, the radio exploded with a sharp command that was
lost in a sudden burst of confusion. We ran back inside. “Don’t panic, don’t
panic, don’t panic!” I constantly told my self. (Rep 4 Effect/Dialouge)
After
a quick break, we all resumed our position in front of the window and stared at
the scene. Nothing interesting happened just yet so I went to back to getting
some work done. Unable to keep myself away I ran back just in time to get
blinded by a burst of flares. The flash looked like a firework that had gone
wrong. It looked like an extremely bright light with flares coming out the
sides with a loud pop that is redundant now and days. This special item causes disorientation of anyone
unfortunate enough to witness it. Good thing I was behind the window. I just witnessed a flash bang.
(Imagery) I peeked back up to examine the next set of events. Assuming that
the suspect was disoriented, S.W.A.T moved towards the car and took out the
suspect. He was dead and covered in blood. It looks like someone missed a
paint ball gun filled with red paint balls horribly. (Imagery) One can only
guess how much anguish (Vocab)
he suffered in that one-hour period, barricaded in his car. The scene at the time was surreal because so much was
happening at once. I was inept
(Vocab) when it came to things like this, but this has only made my mentally
stronger. After the dramatic event over, all the bystanders went back to what
they were doing, including me.
Refreshing
the page on a news site for 10 minutes straight wasn’t the smartest thing, but
it was worth it, just to see what was going on from the news reporter’s
perspective. The reports say that
the two officers that got shot were in good condition and had been released
from the hospital. A sigh of relief went around the crowd that was around
the computer. (Imagery). All the excitement left me tremendously enervated.
Crawling to bed, I took the time to reflect on what was just witnessed.
With
this reflection came inner thoughts. What you do will follow you for life, but
how you repent for it is what makes the difference. Shooting cops will be the
end for you. Be prepared for the unexpected because this is the type of world
we live in. Think of the possible consequences before doing anything. As I
slowly drifted to sleep, I whispered to myself “This is just another
ordinary day in the neighborhood.” (Dialogue) and dozed off.
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Down here!
This is just for
kicks: :D
Now this is the
story all about how
some guy got flipped, turned upside down
and I'd like to take a minute just sit right there
I'll tell you how I almost pulled out all of my hair.
In West Philadelphia born and raised
In a beer store is where I spend most of my days.
Selling, taxin, relaxing all cool
And enjoying this day off from school.
When this one guy, who was up to no good
Starting causing trouble in my neighborhood.
He robbed one gas station and the cops got scared.
They said “get out the car with your hands in the air”
The cops called
for some back up, when it came near
The crazy driver shot the two cops with a frightening sneer.
If anything, I
could say this scene was super rare
but I thought oh heck no, it’s safer in there.
Then back up pulled up round seven or 8.
came out and said “yo dawg get the tazer.”
Hey Look at
that! S.W.A.T is finally here.
Extracting the body with guns in the air.
(Over
exaggerated)
(Q3 Benchmark)
3/7/11
Henry Poeng
Odysseus:
Great teller of tales, Trojan War hero, and main character of The Odyssey.
Everett: Master Tactician, Leader of the Soggy Bottom Boys, George Clooney and
main character of O Brother Where Art Thou. Odysseus and Ulysses are both
selfish at times, and overcome their conflicts in the same manner. But, it’s
how they are assisted on their journeys that make the difference. Although these two are very similar in
their personalities, they have a different approach to their respective
journeys.
Everett
and Odysseus show similarities in their selfishness during several points of
their adventures. In the movie O Brother Where Art Thou, Everett risks the life
of his crewmates in a vain attempt try and persuade Delmar and Pete to go and
get his hair gel from the back of a burning car. Everett shows that he’s going
to put himself first instead of considering the life of his loyal crewmembers.
This had to potential to get all three of them killed. In The Odyssey,
Odysseus said “Cyclops- if any man in the face of the earth should ask you who
blinded you, shamed you so—say Odysseus, raider of cites, he gouged out your
eye, Laertes’ son who makes his home in Ithaca!” (Book 9, Lines 558-562). Unlike Everett, Odysseus actually puts
his crewmates in grave danger. As a result, he got them all killed in the end.
But, this also shows how they are like in their thinking, and how selfish they
both can be.
O
Brother Where Art Thou is heavily
based off of The Odyssey. There are several hints that show this in the
movie. One would be the prophet, who tells Everett how to get home, much like
in The Odyssey. However,
they are actually different. The Odyssey Odysseus was thrown off course
so many times that it is hard to keep count. It is believed that the main
source of all his interludes was, for the most part, the Greek gods. Poseidon,
earth shaker and king of the seas had a deep grudge on Odysseus for blinding
Polyphemus, his son, and being associated with Athena. As you may know, Athena
and Poseidon HATE each other very much. Using everything in his power that
didn’t involve direct interaction between him and Odysseus, Poseidon further
delayed his return trip home via storms, monsters, etc. Athena on the other
hand was on Odysseus’ side, protecting him and only him throughout a huge chunk
of the epic. If you think carefully, do you see this happening at all in O
Brother Where Art Thou? Nope. In O Brother Where Art Thou there aren’t any
gods, or some supernatural other worldly power to veer Everett and companions
off course, or further then along for that matter. He got home all by himself
without the need of the Gods.
In
The Odyssey, Odysseus overcame his challenges by first, thinking of some
well thought out plan, then eventually needing Athena’s help towards the end of
executing the plan. For example “Naked threats- and Athena hit new heights of
race, she lashed out at Odysseus now with blazing accusation: “Where’s it gone,
Odysseus- your power, your fighting heart? The great solder who fought for
famous white-armed Helen, battling Trojans nine longs years- nonstop, no mercy,
mowing their armies down in grueling battle- you who seized the broad streets
of Troy with your fine strategic strokes! How can you- now you’ve returned to
your own house, your own wealth- bewail the loss of your combat strength in war
with suitors? Come, old friend, stand by me! You’ll see action now, see how
Mentor the son of Alcimus, that brace fighter, kill your enemies, pays you back
for service!” (Book 22, Line 234-246). As long as this quote might be, it has a
huge significance. Without Athena, who knows where Odysseus might be right now.
Some might argue, that without the Gods, Odysseus might have not gotten home at
all or vice-versa. This may be true, but we haven’t really seen the famed
Odysseus “Master of tactics, Great teller of tales” in action without the help
or intervention of the Gods. In O Brother Where Art Thou, Everett gets through
all his challenges by himself. From escaping the chain gang, to making “old
timey” music and sort of getting his wife back. He did it all himself that is
what someone should be respected for. That is a huge difference in terms of
showing character traits and applying it.
In
conclusion, Odysseus and Everett might share the same qualities with each
other, but the manners in which they achieve their goals are quite different.
Sure you might think, “Oh, well if Odysseus didn’t have Athena, he would have
never got home.” or, “ Oh, well if Poseidon wasn’t messing with him so much
then we would have gotten home safe and sound.” which could be very true. My
point is, if your going to talk about someone else’s abilities and what they
are doing, then talk about it right, not with some sort of handicap. That to me
is just plain unfair. It’s just like saying “Yeah! I totally made this turbine
with the help of my twenty friends so appreciate me more because I want more
credit!” It’s the same deal with Odysseus, but must admit that he is insanely
smart and strong. Although these two are very similar in their personalities,
they have a different approach to their respective journeys.
Macbeth and
Banquo are marching back as heroes, embarrassing everyone: making them zeros.
On the way back there was a surprising mental attack. They meet three weird
sisters, full of warts and blisters. They hailed Macbeth as thane of Glamis,
Cawdor and King here after. So Banquo is confused. He asked the weird sisters
to state his news. They declare him the fountain of kings. It was strange
for Macbeth and Banquo to hear these things. The weird sisters soon after
leave, making Macbeth and Banquo puzzled on what to believe. Ross and Angus enter the scene, upon their
face was great amounts of gleam. Bringing them with news of his promotion,
Macbeth says “The Thane of Cawdor lives, why do you dress me in barrowed robes.” Macbeth declares that he will later probe. So continues the story, turn to the next slide to read of
Macbeth’s rise to glory.
Macbeth and Banquo return to the castle where King
Duncan waited with no type of hassle. Macbeth was proclaimed Thane of Cawdor, a
title the traitor had, not long before. This proclamation had Macbeth
convinced. Soon after Malcolm was made the newest prince. A successor to the
throne, someone who has worthy shown. Macbeth goes incognito, off the side,
planning something evil. “Stars hide your fire; let not the lights see
my black and deep desires”
. He has plans for these infrequent criers.
Macbeth’s ambitions start to show, something that will be explained in the next
slide, so come on, lets GO!
Lady
Macbeth shows warm welcome to Duncan and his subjects. Behind her face:
Ambition. With one goal in mind, with one mission. To get rid of King Duncan
and Malcolm, his son. She and Macbeth are planning to declare their lives done.
“False
face must hide what false heart doth know.” Macbeth
and his wife must hide what their heart shows. Late in the
night, when all is retired,
Macbeth and his spouse continue with the plan they have conspired.
Silence.... a hoot is heard. The deed is done. The guilt has begun. Macbeth
comes in with bloody hands, Duncan is dead, by his wife’s command. Then they
both go crazy, their minds a little hazy. “Glamis
hath murdered sleep, therefore Cawdor shall not sleep”. Macbeth has stole Duncan’s life, like a thief.
Therefore he shall pay, with lack sleep of during the absence of day. Now, lets
continue this story. It’s going to get kind of gory.
Macbeth
has become king by unfair means. How do you become King when it has not been
past down through your genes? Banquo is very suspicious. He is about to come
across something meaty and delicious. Macbeth finds out and becomes rather
vicious. Macbeth starts to plan and scheme. How do you get rid of someone that
was once on your team? With murderers that have stealthy skill. They will
dispose of Banquo and Fleance with a silent kill. “O,
full of scorpions is my mind dear wife.” Macbeth
is going to kill Banquo without thinking twice.
Banquo
is no more. Covered from head to toe in fresh slimy gore. Looking more
disoriented than ever before. Fleance has ‘scaped! Running in the wind, looking
back as he swore. The murderer's make their return to Macbeth’s castle door.
They enter the party that was held on the ground floor. The news given to Macbeth
was both great and poor. He was happy to the very core, but also mad that the
assassins' had done only half their chore.
These two
acts we will remember for our lives.
Macbeth is alone, sitting and thinking at his throne. “Time thou anticipates my dreaded exploits.” Many evil deeds were committed, a dark aura is emitted. Many miles far
far away, are two people that Macbeth has betrayed. MacDuff and Malcolm talk
about many tragic deaths. So much so that MacDuff says “ No one in the legions of horrid hell can come
a devil more damned in evils top Macbeth.” Back at the castle, a war is waged. His majesty is enraged. “I’ll fight till
from my bones my fleshed be hacked” Little does he know,
that he will never be backed. Ten Thousand men march, revenge burning in
some. They are here to get rid of
this tyrant scum. Let the battle begin and on the next side we will see who
wins.
(Independent
Reading Review Project)
Henry Poeng
Orange Stream
The Girl with
the Dragon Tattoo
By: Stieg Larssona
In an epic show down between the past
and the present, The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo is challenged to solve it all.
The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo is indeed a movie. It was released 2009.
Not only that, but it got a lot of buzz from news sites like Yahoo, CNN, etc.
That’s what tempted me to read it. Also, it has an interesting title name. From
what I’ve read in the reports, it said that it was a suspenseful, crime theme,
which is Something that I don’t normally read. So I decided to take a chance
and change my genre.
The book, The Girl with the
Dragon Tattoo is a mysterious crime story, which takes place in Sweden.
Summary:
Mikael Blomkvist, a journalist,
publisher, and co-creator of Millennium magazine, published an article against
Swedish billionaire, Hans-Erik Wennerström. After a libel case against
Hans-Erik, Blomkvist is sentenced to three months in prison. Facing
professional disgrace, Blomkivist quits his job at Millennium magazine. Approached by a lawyer shortly after
leaving the court house, he is offered a freelance job, assigned by Henrik
Vanger. Henrik is the former CEO of Vanger Enterprises, which is a massive
company in Sweden. A few days before the encounter, Henrik Vanger hires a young
girl in her twenties by the name of Lizbeth Slander, to dig into Blomkvist’s
life history. She is a genius hacker, with a photographic memory, and just
scary in general.
Blomkvist goes to
the Vanger estate, located in Hedeby island, several hours away from Stockholm,
which is Blomkvist place of residence. Arriving at the Vanger estate, Henrik
explains the assignment to Blomkvist. Blomkivist was to write a book on the
Vanger family history, but also to find a serial killer that killed Harriet
Vanger, Henrik’s niece. Henrik promised a hefty reward with juicy details that could
bring down Hans-Erik Wennerström. Reluctantly, Blomkvist agreed to the offer,
seeing no other choice. Blomkvist accepted what could be the scariest
assignment of his life. Together with Lizbeth Slanders, they will hunt down a
serial killer from the past.
Some conflicts?
-Blomkvist vs. the
media (Person vs. society) The media is making a huge deal out of the libel
case and how badly he failed.
-Slanders vs.
herself. (person vs. self) Slanders appears to be trying to find her self.
-Blomkvist/Slanders
vs. Serial killer (person vs. person) Blomkvist and Slanders are out on a hunt
for a Serial killer that have been murdering several females by using lines
from the bible.
-My favorite
character in this book is Mikael Blomkvist.
He is to my hero
because of his courage and how professional he is. I could learn from this guy,
excluding his sex crave of course. You will learn about that as you read the
book. By courage, I mean he is brave, intelligent, and very wise. By
professional, I mean he is intelligent, handles himself well, and has good
management skills. You can learn a lot from this guy.
-I believe that
readers should take into the account that the book is trying to say, be fair to
women. If you read carefully, the whole story is about women being abused and
killed all the time. For a theme, I would say “Everybody should be treated
equal. No matter what”
My relationship to
the story and the people in it?:
None. What Lizbeth
and Mikael went through just makes my life seem boring. If I recall correctly,
I haven’t been raped, attacked by strangers, put in political shame, solve
cold-cases, or a computer genius. I haven’t experience the thrill of traveling
from place to place looking for a serial killer, writing a biography about a
wealthy family, or experience three months in jail. If anything, would like to
relate most of their lives. But that’s just not happening.
-Opinion?
I think it’s an
excellent book that will keep you coming back for more. Even though it’s rather
lengthy, and it uses a lot of big words. Overall, a well written crime story
with a great story line. Now personally, if I could change something in the
book it would be how the frame stories are integrated. It get confusing
sometimes trying to keep up with past and present.
-Recommendations?
I would recommend
this book to anyone that can handle good amounts of suspense, drama, action,
sex scenes, and plain weird stuff. Also, lets not forget lots and lots of
detail! Plus, it would make the book even more amazing if you have a great
imagination. That just makes the book an even better experience to read since
it is filled with so much detail.
(Journals)
11/29/10
The
Thanksgiving break was “okay”. On Thanksgiving I had to work and serve the
customers and their needs. Friday was my birthday. Not the most interesting day
of the year. Pretty much work, work, eat, party, sugar rush, sleep, fat.
Saturday was confusing. I don’t even remember what happened or care to remember
for that matter. Sunday however, was fun. The family got together and had a
Thanksgiving feast. A well deserved feast at that. Soo much food, just loads
and loads of food. It was
amazingly fun too. It was great playing ping-pong and pool with the people I
barely see. Overall, the break started real slow but then picked up like a
rocket taking off.
1/24/11
Too
me, an adult is someone who has past 21 years of age. An adult is someone that
is mature and accepts hit or her responsibilities. Someone that is proactive
and not reactive. An adult is someone that can balance out life and fun. In a
general sense, an adult is someone who is seasoned at life.
1/3/11
My
break was okay I guess. Same deal. Wake-up, text, shower, work, text, sleep.
Boring right? 100%. The holidays are the worst for me. Wake-up early, work
until 12 am, and then drop. But it’s for a good cause I guess. One day,
something broke the cycle. On the 31st of December something crazy
happened. My mom and I were manning the fort. MY dad and brother were in the
back. Then all of the sudden, we hear a lot of sirens outside. MY mom and I
looked out the window. WE saw a dodge mini-van pointed towards the church next
to my house. Two officers were walking towards it. It was a strangely ominous scene.
Then all of the sudden, the driver-side window cracked. A gun was fired off.
Both the officers went down, guns blazing. It seems that the assailant was
struck. My mom went to go tell my dad in a frenzy. I went to go tell my
brother. I sat there in shock and awe. Hopefully I can turn this story into a
project.
2/2/11
A
hero to me is someone that is special. A hero is someone that sets a good
example for someone good or bad. Someone that gives others hope and meaning in
their life. You don’t have to fly or have super powers to be a hero. All you
need is a sense of hope and the will to go on. That’s what I think a hero is.
(Myth
Project)
Henry Poeng
Orange Stream
Greek God:
Poseidon
Symbols:
Trident, Horses, and Dolphins
Qualities: God
Of The Sea, Earth-Shaker, and Rapist.
Family:
Parents:
Cronos (Father) and Rhea (Mother)
Brothers:
Zeus, Hades.
Sisters:
Hera, Demeter, and Hestia.
Lover
of: Any Female he can get his hands on.
Enemies: Athena and Odysseus.
Where are they
from?:
Athena
is the Brainchild of Zeus literally. She was popped right out from his brain
when he had a headache, but that’s a whole other myth. She is the enemy of
Poseidon because she was given the city of Athens instead of Poseidon in which
Zeus promised him. Also it would appear that Athena has a polar personality
compared to Poseidon. Poseidon being hot-headed and
Odysseus is a
Greek hero that fought in the Trojan War for Achaeans. He is responsible for
the Trojan-Horse that ended the 10 year war. The reason he is the enemy of
Poseidon is because he blinded one of Poseidon’s many sons, named Polyphemus,
who’s mother is Medusa.
Earth-Shaker,
Creator of Horses, God of the Seas, these are just a few epithets that describe
Poseidon. Quick to anger, and quick to love Poseidon is. Some say his short
temper is the cause of earthquakes, horrible storms, and droughts. He is known
to hold long grudges against those who anger him.
Before
the god’s there were Titans, known as the “elder gods”. Cronus, son of Uranus
and Gaea overthrew his own father. After dethroning Uranus, his mother Gaea
made a prophecy. The prophecy stated that his own children would overthrow
Cronus. Living in fear Cronus ate his own children as they were being born. All
but one was consumed. Rhea, Cronus’s sister wife hid the last born, and fed
Cronus a rock covered in a blanket. When he became an adult, Zeus made a plan
to take revenge on his father. By making Cronus vomit out all of the children
he consumed, Zeus would rally them and overthrow Cronus.
In
the previous events, six children were born in this order: Hestia, Hades, Demeter,
Poseidon, Hera and Zeus. Out of
the six, three were males: Hades, Poseidon, and Zeus. While having no active
leader to rule, a lottery was held between the three brothers to decide who
rules what. Hades, eldest of the three, became God of the Underworld. Poseidon
became God of the Sea. Zeus became god of the Sky and Supreme ruler the gods.
Hades got the shorter end of the stick.
During
the Trojan War, some of the Olympian gods were split. Siding the Greeks was: Poseidon, Athena, Hera, Hermes and
Hephaestus. Sided with the Trojans were: Aphrodite, Apollo, Artemis and Ares. I
like to call them the A team. Poseidon was sided with the Greeks because of a
broken promise. Poseidon helped
build the epic walls that surrounded the great city of troy while on punishment
from Zeus. The King did not pay Poseidon, who was disguised as a mortal while
building the walls, for his hard manual labor. As punishment, Poseidon sent a
sea monster to attack troy, only to be thwarted by Hercules.
In
the midst of battle the Trojans killed Poseidon grandson. This only infuriated
Poseidon even more. As result he joined the battle disguised as a mortal
seeking his revenge disobeying Zeus’s strict orders not to interfere. Hera, was
in the middle of seducing Zeus when he heard the battle cries of Poseidon, he
realized that he was being tricked. Containing his rage, he sent Iris, a
messenger god to warn Poseidon. Poseidon disobeyed at first, but then
eventually backed-off, not because of fear, but because of respect of Zeus.
Metal
reeds are good for Jazz and hard rubber is good for classical sounds.
positioning the mouth: The reed should be even with the top of the
mouth piece the reed should be down toward the lower lip and you teeth
should be on top roll your lip over you bottom teeth then you want make
a smirk so it will pull the muscles surrounding your teeth up. this is
vital for the tones that you wanna get. You get sound by blowing air
into the reed at the top of the saxaphone and depending on how much
air pressure you breath into the saxaphone that is that specific tone
that you will get make sure that the air is steady do not move the
mouth along with a process called tounging which is used to seperate
notes.
Artist Statement Hi my name is Samuel Kabangai, i attend school at Science Leadership Academy, i am the artist that created this design. For our fourth quarter project, we the students had to make some are pieces that were give to us by the teacher. I liked the projects that we got and i was really excited to do these art pieces. One of my favorite pieces that i had to make was the bike project. In this project we had to draw a bike that was in the classroom. Every project was exciting and i was always pleased with the final product that i produced at the end. I like when the projects seemed like a challenge because it made me work harder and do something that i did not think i could produce. The tools that I used to make these are pieces were, charcoal, pencil, paint, computer etc. Every project needed to do something new and it made me use something new and every project was a new learning experience. |
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