Makenna Refran

¿De dónde vengo yo?
¿De dónde vengo yo?
Vengo a Fances 
Bahamas y Africa 
Yo quiero ir los
Yo quiero ir los


My refrán is communicating that I am of French, African and Bahamian descent. I also say that I would like to visit these places. I like that it gets the point across. I would like to change some parts because my song does not rhyme. Nothing was really difficult, I would just like for my refran to rhyme.   

Miqual Sanders

Mi nombre es MIQUAL.!!!!!

​Mi nombre es MIQUAL.!!!!!

Yo mi gusto. el comida.

Yo comido el pollo y el sandwhiches.

Y Yo siempre es hambre.


It is suppose to commnicate that I like food and that food effects my life.

My first 2 lines is something I'm really proud about.

I would like to start on my first verse.

It was difficult writing while doing other homework. A little overwhelming.

Jenn Wright- Refran

Niños en los calles 

toque de queda es nada 

asuntos primordiales- ¿qué hora es la cena?



Amo o no amo, es mi barrio 

dices lo que te gutse 

Yo no puedo cambio 


My refrain is about something that happens in my neighborhood. The curfew is not enforced and there are always kids playing outside on the street. That is something I think stands out about my neighborhood. I also included a part about how many people say not so nice things about where I'm from, but it is where I am from and I can't change it. I embrace it, and this song I'm writing will show that. 

Refran de Tenzin cancion

Me llamo Tenzin

Soy de Tibet 

Soy de India

Tengo muy tradición

Una es...




What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
- So, my refrán is basically where I'm from and when the whole song is finished, you'll understand like where it'll go because this is only the chorus. 
What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
- The repetition. 
What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
- I feel like I still need to write more but then it's a chorus and I don't want it to be long because I'll be repeating that the whole time and I don't want to reveal too much.
What was difficult about writing your refrán?

Chelsea Ann Smith's Refran

Refrán:
vengo mi familia;
mi mama, mi papa, mi hermanos y
mi tia y bisabuelo
te amo, mucho te amo.

-It talks about my family and how I love them. 
-I think it flows well
-I don't know what to improve, just be able to say it fast and well.
-It was hard to think of what way important enough to repeat throughout the song. 

El Refrain

El Refrain

-Mi antepasado come de Irlanda,

y Italia  y eso es la cuento de mi.


This is supposed to communicate that I’m both Italian and Irish. The rest of the song will explain everything else. I’m happy that it makes sense, because a lot of times I write it doesn’t make sense. I might want to make it longer but I wan the bulk of the story to be the verses. It wasn’t too difficult, the only hard part was to find the words I wanted ot use.

Henninger Refran

Donde las calles están gastadas,

La gente y las tiendas más

No siempre es seguro

Pero es mi casa sólo.



My refrain is describing my neighborhood. I'm very happy that I got it done, and it makes sense. I might want to make it longer, but I'm not sure. I had some trouble using phrases that sounded good together. 

Soy de un Mundo ese Sentes

Chorus:

Vengo de la metaforas de viva
 El Verdad ese ocultas 
Quierer ser libre
Soy de el Voz de el mudo y
Los Manos de el indefenso

Yo vivo en el mundo de mi
Yo vivo en el mundo de mi

Verses :

Soy de un historia de amor
Y un familia de amor
y de un mundo ese sentes 
Pero luchas entendir 
el definición de amor 

Chorus:

Vengo de la metaforas de viva
 El Verdad ese ocultas 
Quierer ser libre
Soy de el Voz de el mudo y
Los Manos de el indefenso

Yo vivo en el mundo de mi
Yo vivo en el mundo de mi


Vengo de un Dios de compasión 
Un Padre de padres 
quien trabajes sus mejor 
Para el mejor de sus ninos
Aunque sus ninos nunca aprendes

Centelleantes es el cuidad yo vivo
un colectivo de diamantes en bruto
El mundo solo necesitas incentivos
Razones
a atencion 
a -a- atencion

Chorus:


Vengo de la metaforas de viva
 El Verdad ese ocultas 
Quierer ser libre
Soy de el Voz de el mudo y
Los Manos de el indefenso

Yo vivo en el mundo de mi
Yo vivo en el mundo de mi



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What is your refrán supposed to communicate?  
My refran is supposed to convey who I am by showing what I'm come from.
What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
I'm especially happy that with what I have so far, there's a rhythm and rhyme scheme to it and there's a controlled focus of it. 
What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
I would like to make it longer, firstly. Then I would like to finish it with a contract rhythm and rhyme to it.
What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
I think the most difficult part about all this is making it rhyme. Because of the limited vocab that I have, it's hard to try to make a rhyming pattern.